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Exploding-kitty — Anger Explosion
Published: 2005-01-17 14:01:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 109; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 8
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i'm burning upmy mind is fuming
and it is all because of you
i could play you all of your
favorite records
i'd dance to queen in my underwear
and you're re-using things that we had
to impress other girls
(thanks for using my wounded heart)
i want to fuck your best-friend
i want to puke until i am pretty
i want to scream down the phone
(the louder i get the more you will listen i
tell myself)
if i could only reach down and slap you
choke you
make you feel suffocated
the same way i find it hard to breathe
every time we speak.
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Comments: 5
"re-using the things that we had to impress other girls"
i hate to say "i feel your pain", but i feel your pain.
you're an amazing writer and i love this poem
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I loved the pace of the poem, and the anger was there and it wasn't just meaningless screaming, it actually had something. I love the part about using your heart and also the part at the end -
"if i could only reach down and slap you
choke you
make you feel suffocated
the same way i find it hard to breathe
every time we speak. "
I love it.
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Thank you so much!!! I appreciate the comments!!!! *cyber kisses*
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i dont even know what to say. i definetly felt your angry. it was practically screaming and vibrating out of this poem, the words you chose. it actually made *me* made. i dont think a poem has ever made me feel so angry. good job! and i hope you kick that person's ass!!
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Hehehehehehe thank you! Now I am rethinking it. It was written in such an angry place, I am sorting of doubting the quality. But I am so happy it made you feel something too, that excites me!
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