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if I tell youhow much I love you and how
hard you make me laugh
will you proceed to make a face
and squirm
or will you roll your eyes and
inform me that I am too young to
know of such matters.
or instead will you kiss my forehead
and lead my hand to bed?
I'm dying to tell you that
sometimes I find it hard to breathe
around you and I know this will
hurt so bad when you leave
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E-photo [2004-11-23 00:43:51 +0000 UTC]
I know this is a scrap, but I see some promise here, and some genuine humanity that goes beyond the basic roses are red sappy sort of stuff. I need to go look at your deviations.
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Exploding-kitty In reply to E-photo [2004-11-23 01:01:30 +0000 UTC]
thank you! yeah this piece I wasn't so thrilled about... I've meaning to go back and work on it, and really try and get it out of me what I want to say, but I just don't feel inspired to do that just yet.. I don't know if I ever will get around to working on it, but thanks so much for your thoughts, I really appreciate them, I like that you think I'm deeper than the normal "lovey-dovey" bullshit, the majority of the stuff I read on DA is that kind of crap, so I strive to stay away from it.
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