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Exploding-kitty — Fed Up
Published: 2004-11-29 09:44:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 211; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 30
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and when i told you ididn't really love you
that it was just nostalgia seeping through
(i lied)
and i took your advice and saw
the red headed boy
but he turned out to be bitter
(but not nearly as much as you)
memories inflitrate my head at night
(hot sex in the back of your caddy)
and i laugh when i think i
actually believed that maybe i could get over
you
i want you to see me naked
(not half as much as i want to see you)
i am fuller and rounder
(polite for fat?)
my breasts have grown and there is now more of me to have fun
with
but the tired in your voice reminds me that you
are in no mood to play
and my constant "I miss you's" are merely pissing you off
(i believe that maybe you are fed up)
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Comments: 10
I like this alot actually. This could be like an anthem poem (for break-ups)
It's obviously pretty personal, with the line about the red-headed boy and the sex in the caddy thing, but it still gives off a vibe that most people can catch up and I think that's what I like about it.
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awsome, i love nerve......i really like the poem too
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thank you so much!!!!!
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I was thinking "hmmm ........this really sounds like the situation I just went through with a guy. then I got to the part where it said red hair and I freaked out b/c his hair is red. There are so many similarities, it's amazing, but I really like it, just so you know. I love the part (I lied) in the parenthesis. I think this is great work and I'm only part way through your gallery. 
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i can definetly understand the frustration and disappointment of a poem not working out right no matter how hard you try. but i honestly liked this poem. you just seem to have a nack for it.you are a natural artist. the only thing i can see here that you could improve on is the ending.now thats just an opinion of course,but it seemed to end quite abrupt. hey,maybe i just didnt want it to end
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thanks for your comments, no I totally understand... the ending is really abrupt..hmmm... I shall try and figure something out, but I totally get what you're saying.. thanks for liking it though!
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