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Exploding-kitty — Feeding Your Ego
Published: 2004-09-21 01:11:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 635; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 7
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how long has it been?forever it feels
your smiling grin
infiltrates my
closed off mind
and I am once
again reduced
to wait for you
to send me a
letter to write me
a song... to pick
up the phone so
I can say an awkward
"hello" and hear
the click of you
disassociating
yourself once more
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Comments: 3
"the click of you
disassociating
yourself once more"
Oh, that's so good...again! And I love explodingdog.com!
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I like it. Emotional. Interesting structure with the broken of lines.
The passage:
the click of you
disassociating
yourself once more
is my favourite.
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Thank you... it was written about an ex boyfriend... actually the same ex boyfriend who is written about in nearly all of my poems... I'm glad you like it!
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