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Published: 2005-01-11 12:30:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 140; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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and if it means i have to stop talking to youi will
to deny all of my self-destructing habits
(i will not have you win)
and although the toilet looks extremely welcoming
(i thank it as i wipe my mouth)
i will not have it conquer me (it already has)
(you already have)
i will deny your self-righteous pity
(i cannot let you know you are right)
even though you are always right
but soon
my head will stop pounding
(my stomach will stop bleeding)
and then
i will be fine
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Comments: 11
I absolutely love the drawing!
Right now I'm suppose to be doing this project for an art class, making up skeletons for cartoon characters. Very nice.
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oh I didnt do the drawing, just wrote the poem, but I'm glad you like it! I thought it went well with the writing.
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Your words are so strong. Forgive me, but are you--? Because I am too...
Sorry if this sounds really stupid.
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no you don't sound stupid! I go back and forth, I have just been having a hard time lately. I was for a very lond time, and a good guy helped me out of it, but it's hard to quit cold turkey, and I still have the tendencies...although I know better.
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I'm a bit like that. I was really bad for a while. Then stopped in a roundabout sort of way. Right now, I'm not too great. Oh well...I'm glad you know better.
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It's good. I'm thinking maybe a bit too many parenthesises. In this part:
"i will not have it conquer me (it already has)
(you already have)
it feels a bit much with two after each other. Otherwise really good.
Hope you'll feel better soon (I know you will eventually). In the meantime, poetry (even shitty) is a very good emotional outlet you know.
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thanks for the comments! theyre very helpful! I felt that the paranthesises were a little a tad too much too... thanks for the helpful words (on my poem, and on me)
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Nice to hear that you find them helpful.
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hey!! you shouldn't do that. Be strong 
Tomorrow is the most important thing in life. Comes into us at midnight very clean. It's perfect when it arrives and it puts itself in our hands. It hopes we've learned something from yesterday.
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I appreciate the comment, and I am a big fan of that quote! Did you write that?
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actually, Its a qoute from John Wayne, believe it or not.
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