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Exploding-kitty — Motionless
Published: 2004-09-21 01:22:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 143; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 5
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The day the parked cars collidedI was on the grassy hill
smoking too many cigarettes
The red paint chipped off and I
was vulnerable
You crashed into me, we both hadn't been
moving
Standing still I looked at you and
realized the explosion was yet to come
I waited for my flash of guilt (you hold
and all I could think about everything
was this was really against me)
an ideal situation for popcorn
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Comments: 7
You don't need to be self-consious. You write great stuff.
This is good. I don't know why but I feel the ending really takes the whole poem up quite a few notches.
an ideal situation for popcorn indeed.
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wow mister, you're on a roll with compliments today! thank you, you make me feel good about my writing, which is usually very hard, thank you!
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Well you should. I'm actually very impressed with all I've seen so far of your writing, so I feel it's worth to share my opinions.
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Oh, you rock. I'm glad I found another good writer on DA.
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Thank you so much... that truly made my day. I'm always really self-consious about my writing, but I'm glad someone likes it!
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