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Published: 2005-09-02 20:27:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 226; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 7
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you are weightlessmy little love
i am so heavy with my fat fumbling fingers
you let me clothe you for any occasion
you let me play dress up in the bedroom
in your ear i play student
and in your rear i play nurse
the slutty bad girl played
so well
(acting comes so naturally
i know my lines)
i will cut you up
put your hands in your pants
put your tounge to your feet
(put your mouth to your ass)
i will turn you around
mix you up, fuck you up
(i will never grow up)
my saddened charm
my boy disarmed
my paper doll
you won't last long
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Comments: 7
*catches the drool falling from my mouth*
in awe of your writing style
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This is actually about a sexually deviant relationship between a man and a woman, from the woman's point of view. But feel free to interpret away!
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*Spine tingling* It sounds like rape, or the description of the sexual relationship between a woman and her abusive husband. What meaning were you trying to convey (out of curiosity)? I think it's wonderful writing.
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*Spine tingling* It sounds like rape, or the description of the sexual relationship between a woman and her abusive husband. What meaning were you trying to convey (out of curiosity). I think it's wonderful writing.
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I like it. I think my fvorite thing about your style is the air of genuine confidence it gives off. The cute little similes, witty comments, and honesty on sex seem to creat a feeling of triviality for a seemingly serious situation. It all gives off a sense of wisdom and a separation between your intellect and your world, which I find fascinating
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thank you so much! That was worded beautifully.
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Kinky.
I like it. You have found a good rythm that carries through the entire poem and ties it up in a remarkable way at the end.
Good stuff!
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