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Published: 2004-11-10 23:27:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 231; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 17
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Description
Wakey wakey little peanutshape nestled in warm goo
living from my body
awake with tiny features
i am killing you with bad habits
little mouth coughing smoke
you are already half dead
drinking will cure guilt
I have let you down but
I wish you could stay
locked inside my little peanut
you will never know what hit you
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Comments: 14
Back to comment again. I love this.
flesh-box, formerly known as Blazor-rade.
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This is just excellent
I must favourite it until my arms fall off!
I love this
from the first line
I simply wish to eat this poem.
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Great GREAT words, the peanut metaphor is perfect. I love love love it.
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wow i love this to death.
very well written.
my computer wants to fave and fave and fave again ...
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I'm back again to give you love for this. You don't have to reply but this piece is still one of my most hardcore favourites.
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Oh God. I read this every time I log on. I Fucking love it. Oh God I love it. You are so awesome.
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thank you so much for commenting and loving this piece so much. It's really difficult to convey something as "touchy" as this subject, and I did it honestly, and I just hope I didn't offend anyone. I just wanted to be as honest as possible about this situation and how it affected me. I'm so happy you took something from it, and you love it this much, it makes me feel so good about myself, thank you thank you thank you.
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Thank you.. I needed that
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thank you!!!! You're such a sweetheart
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It somehow manages to be both pretty and disturbing at the same time. Very nice.
("Peanut" is certainly a very fitting word.)
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