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Exploding-kitty — The Last Lap
Published: 2005-05-12 10:56:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 265; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 6
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Description slowly peel the apple
and watch it spiral to the floor
i look into your face
and know you think you've taken on more than you bargained for
and all the time that you were sleeping
i was wide awake
and all the times that i was screaming
you were plotting your esacpe

let's scramble to the finish line
who will be the one to lose?
and everything that i have fought for
who will be the one to choose?

and if i hear that damn alarm
go off once more in my head
i'll pick up and hurtle it against the wall
and fall back into bed
and all the time that you were flying
i was drinking up a storm
and all the times that i was dying
you were claiming to be torn

we'll have another re-match
and fall apart once more
you'll give up in the last lap
wondering what the fuck you're running for.
and all the time that you were fleeing
i was ready for the scene
and all the times that i was cheating
you were making yourself clean

i'll see you from the finish line
flashing a big faced grin
and i won't even realize
that you've just let me win
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Comments: 12

LostMyFearOfFalling [2005-06-29 17:29:41 +0000 UTC]

Hey, this poem/song is awesome. I really love it
It flows and everything really well

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Exploding-kitty In reply to LostMyFearOfFalling [2005-08-18 20:28:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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KillMeHarder [2005-06-06 11:28:13 +0000 UTC]

"sorry id ont know you"
but i read your poem song and its totally awesome.
I really love it.

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Exploding-kitty In reply to KillMeHarder [2005-06-22 21:40:01 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much for your comment! it means so much to me! thank you thank you thank you

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Exploding-kitty [2005-05-26 00:25:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm not even sure what salad fingers is. At any rate, I thank you very much for your sweet dreaminess, and I give you a *cyber kiss* for it.

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goofyromantic [2005-05-18 03:12:17 +0000 UTC]

I don't see how anything in this could ever remind you of something from Salad Fingers. I'm not trying to start an argument, just saying that if you ask me that's rediculous.

Anyway, instead of wasting everyoens time by demeaning words with length (just like a Wordsworth), I'll just say, quiet simply, you're dreamy

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Soldierofmisfortune [2005-05-13 14:46:49 +0000 UTC]

It's very good. This could really be a song.
Isn't it spelled peel when you are peeling something though? I'm not sure...

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Exploding-kitty In reply to Soldierofmisfortune [2005-05-26 00:22:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!!! oh that is awesome. and yes you are completely right, and I am a moron.

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nickyflamingo [2005-05-12 18:41:33 +0000 UTC]

*claps hands heartally (sp???!)*

Lovely song there pretty girlie.
I enjoyed it mucha.

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Exploding-kitty In reply to nickyflamingo [2005-05-26 00:21:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you my beautiful goddess of a best friend. Feedback from you makes me miss you.

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individualityrules [2005-05-12 11:00:54 +0000 UTC]

thats cool...it reminds me of 'salad fingers' on weebls-stuff.com

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Exploding-kitty In reply to individualityrules [2005-05-12 11:07:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you liked it!

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