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Exploding-kitty — We Crave Night Fun [NSFW]
Published: 2005-04-06 08:57:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 255; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 23
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Description with the water from the tap tap tapping
down the sink with the rusty marks and strands of
dark hair like little spider legs
climb
climb
climbing
up into freedom or down into death
and the kitchen light
                                        blink blink blinking
with the sounds of the day fading into quiet voices
and hush hush hushing (the world is falling asleep)
at the start of the night fun we both crave
we fall into sheets of crisp crackling substances
of liquids squirt squirt squirting
into an open mouth of warm saliva and licking lips
and the drip
           drip
             dripping
of cream crashing against
    sweat splashing bodies and into cracks of skin
the sweetest tasting ooze from your magnificent toy
spraying the lick lick licking
TOUNGE and satisfying everyone.
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Comments: 8

hungerforperfection [2006-05-22 14:10:24 +0000 UTC]

this is perfect.

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lunawen [2005-04-07 06:05:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm like like likeing your poem (especially the repetition)! I usually don't like poems about sex, but maybe that's because a lot of them are like: "Oh yes/ you cum on my chest/I like it rough/baby you're the best." But your poem's not like that . . . it's raunchy, but good raunchy. You know what I mean?

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Exploding-kitty In reply to lunawen [2005-04-07 18:48:22 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you very much for the lovin'! I appreciate your kind words. Yeah, it is raunchy, but I agree with it being good raunchy, not dirty and raunchy for shock value, it's almost like classy-raunchy. I think that maybe the best oxy-moron I have ever come up with!

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poeticsighs [2005-04-06 19:37:39 +0000 UTC]

this poem was fun to read. it sounded very upbeat, playful. It wasnt like most of your poems. but this poem was equally as good.

and i dont know about you but i find the happy poems are the hardest to write, or rarest

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Exploding-kitty In reply to poeticsighs [2005-04-07 00:48:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I know this is a little different than what I normally write... it's fucking happy... which I have noticed is a lot harder to write about.

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Russiancat [2005-04-06 19:25:03 +0000 UTC]

naughty girl, this poem oozes raunchiness

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Exploding-kitty In reply to Russiancat [2005-04-07 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]

it is rather raunchy, and I love it! Thanks for commenting!

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Russiancat In reply to Exploding-kitty [2005-04-07 15:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Good expression of crazy moments.

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