HOME | DD
Exploding-kitty — sex makes you smile
Published: 2004-12-21 00:59:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 155; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 15
Redirect to original
Description
the happy sex grin you give mewhen you lift yourself up with your
arms (them shaking, you smiling) gives
me goosebumps (the size of watermelons)
rolling over you kiss my forehead and
we lay for hours on wet sheets talking
and i want to cry when i think about you
leaving (it has finally gotten so good)
and there is never anything i can do to
make you stay (my eyes will not save me now)
and my words fall short
as you breathe in deep and tell me that
you have to get out of this state (it is killing you)
and i wish that my voice would be enough
to persuade you to stay
(i know i will never be enough)
you are so much older and i wish
i was not so young (maybe you would take me
seriously)
and you haven't said i love you
(neither have i)
and reading your eyes does not help
i am desperate for a sign that shows me
that you will miss me the way i will miss you
Related content
Comments: 8
this doesnt seem cliched to me...i mean, yea, everybody writes about love,but thats b/c it comes to us in so many different ways, and im bad for it.its all i can write about which makes me feel like not so good a writer, but i really liked it. reminds me of when my bf went away to school. it was hard
poeticsighs has given you
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
thank you so much!!!!! you're such a sweetheart truly.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
In a way, can't really explain, (uuu, it rhymes---) It's quite scary! Or is it just me...? Scared of older men? How much older men? It just gives me this nasty pressure on my chest, your poem I mean.. That's odd, they're just words.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
hmm.. I'm not entirely sure how to respnd to this, mainly because I'm really sure what you mean. I'm not scared of older men, Brian is 23, I'm 18. I'm a sophomore in college and he is just about to leave for grad school... I'm not scared of dating him, I'm a little intimatated to be thought of as too young and immature in his eyes. I'm nervous that he doesn't take me seriously, and I always feel a little self-conscious, but I'm not scared. And I'm glad that the poem at least made you feel something that intense, I just hope it wasn't an unpleasant intense feeling... thnaks for commenting!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Oh, ha hha hha ... I was thinking bit bigger age gap... I was dating 32 year old when i was 18... Afterwards it's been freaking me out, back then he thought I was more woman than his over 30year old (women) friends.. I wasn't really taking it that seriously and his female friends didn't like me(men did, wonder why?).... And I didn't liked to be called a woman.. he wanted to marry me some day, and have kids... ha-ha, not for me thanks; I was a kid, and I knew it
And you know, women are always "two years" more mature than guys, so basicly you're not that much behind
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
awww thanks for the support!!!!!! *mwah*
👍: 0 ⏩: 0