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Exploding-kitty — wet sheets and parting tounges
Published: 2004-11-19 14:22:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 250; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 36
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gravitate towards the taste offingers
and the feel of wet hair on shoulder
blades
(must move forwards)
tounges in between blankets (so hot)
the feel of your body on top
the weight so reassuring
movement, (thrusting)
could go on forever (i wish you would last longer)
if only fingers didn't have to stop touching
(maybe we wouldn't ever have to part)
the steady of you is gone
left with wet sheets and panic
(you'll never come back)
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Comments: 14
amazing. Its definately a new favorite. Such power. makes me wanna call my boyfriend.....
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Thanks for the fav! I should revise all of these poems, I'm not playing hard to get enough.
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i enjoyed this. so very much.
it completely described me and my ex.
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I'm so happy you liked it, and that you could relate! Thanks for commenting!
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I think this is also beautiful. I didn't have sex with the guy I just got over with, but there were similar moments when we'd have heavy make-out sessions and I'd stay the night and wake up in his arms. It's scary how much you come to depend on his presence beside you in the morning and his kiss when you wake up. It's a beautiful thing that you can describe all you want, but unless you were there you could never fully understand it. beautiful.
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Interesting how you play with the brackets between lines. There is something about their use that creates a definite erotic tension. There's yearning in this work, and yearning in you, no doubt.
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thanks for the comment! I'm glad you took that from the piece (you're quite true)
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I'm glad it that is, and does, and likely will....
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ooh this is so sad. thx for sharing the piece of you that is so personal and deep
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thanks for checking out my work and commenting... I really appreciate it, thank you!!!!!
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I know how it feels. I'm frozen with the same recollections and emotions at times like that. And my person...I can't see him for a very long time.
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Very very nice. I'm very into sex poetry lately (it's kind of an embarassing interesting as of late) and this is very good. Much less specific than a lot of your work, which puts it on an awesome level. 
Not to be an artwork whore, but I'd really like you to check out my poem "Requiem for a Birthday Cake" I think you did really well with this poem, and I'd love to hear your thoughts.
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nothing to be embarrassed about!!!! sex poems and songs (and sex usually in general) are awesome.. thanks for the support and the love! I checked out your poem and loved it!!! You're a really good writer!!!!!!
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