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when i know i should be sleepingwhen the whole world has silenced itself finally
when at the end of the day (early morning)
when thoughts flicker in my head
(i want to give you a baby)
when it is thursday and i am drunk
again
for the 7th night in row
when i cannot feel my legs
(or lips, or arms, or fingers as i write)
when my hair is too curly and my mouth
is dry from screwing you
and i am not satisfied
and you swear you will take care of me
and feed me chocolate
when you make me laugh so hard
when you still haven't said "i love you"
when i have said it too much
when i cannot close my eyes without your face
when the thought of you leaving for the night
hurts an uncontrollable, sobbing heart pain (i always crave you)
when you finally leave me (forever) and i crawl in a ball
and pretend to be fine
(we would have the most beautiful babies in the world)
i need help.
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Comments: 8
I think you were able to express a true feeling a lot of people have in a way. (and in a way unique)
My favorite part is
"and you swear you will take care of me
and feed me chocolate
when you make me laugh so hard"
the feed me chocolate part is just awesome. Love it. Reminds me of a poem I wrote comparing a guy to chocolate cake. lol. Nice.
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thank you for the sweet words! I would love to read your chocolate cake-boy comparison poem!!!! I really would. Have you posted it? and if not, you should send it to me!
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it's not super cool. I was just mad at this guy and decided to write something (it probably doesn't even fit, it just popped into my head. lol. ) But sure, I'll send it here, it's not posted.
Chocolate Cake
This is the way it goes. The way it hurts
A travel guide to heartbreak
He makes you blush. laugh. fall in love
Heβs like a dish of chocolate cake
The first two bites are sweet and tempting
And the frosting coats your tongue
Then just before the third biteβs taken
Just before the last noteβs sung
It crumbles at your feet like ashes
In a carpet of decay
You fight to savor that final bite
But the taste just melts away.
loll 
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well thank you! I am not entirely sure I was going for cute, but I am glad you thought so! Thank you!!!! *cyber kiss*
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I meant ''cute''... just forgot adding those small things!!!
but in a strange little way it's kind of cute!!!
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