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Published: 2010-03-06 07:16:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 5
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Description steal me from urban streets
glass hits the pavement at our feet,
& swallows us whole when the
rain soaks our shoes and consoles

all the sweet hurt they brought,
memories of fall and I thought.
teardrops of glass well and
kiss every eyelash to sleep.
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Comments: 2

ForYourself [2010-03-06 23:06:30 +0000 UTC]

I realy enjoy your use of imagery and the rhyming scheme. This is worth looking through your gallery. Well done.

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ExplosiveChalk In reply to ForYourself [2010-03-07 01:51:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you - colors on the plain was well written, too. it was fantastically easy to visualize the scene.

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