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Published: 2013-08-13 14:49:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 402; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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Description I sit here with the Mogwai going loud and
Discussions of poetry ringing around my head
Like Saturn and her rings, golden, wedding her to
So many moons, words about words.

Poetry is for tasting, honey,
Rather than autopsies and
Scientific histories.

How we have loved,
Loving moments and
Connections

How we have Celebrated
Fictional moments never
accepting we are as we are
as

We would rather be.

We put ourselves together
one word at a time
Remembering

Not with memories
But as an opposite

Poetry is not an autopsy
A biopsy

Poetry is the opposite of everything that cuts
Clean

Poetry tears us together, bloody and new.
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Comments: 16

vespera [2013-08-13 17:32:30 +0000 UTC]

We would rather be.

This is perfect, especially how you put it on it's own line

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-08-13 17:50:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. Β I have Anton Frost to thank for that, he's a fantastic talent that we are lucky to have on DA. Β For example:Β www.deviantart.com/art/almost-…

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-08-13 18:01:13 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, Anton. He gets published around, too

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-08-13 18:29:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, and yet he seems to be sadly under-recognized here on dA.

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-08-13 18:30:33 +0000 UTC]

It's better to be recognized out in the real (publishing) world, anyways. All you really need on dA is a few partners in crime

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-08-13 18:35:59 +0000 UTC]

That makes sense.

Thing with dA is that the ones that really matter in your network can really help you become a better artist.

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-08-14 17:59:46 +0000 UTC]



You really just need a few that aren't afraid to really dig into your work

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-08-14 22:32:26 +0000 UTC]

Ain't that the truth.

Okay, honestly, should I be pursuing publication?

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-08-15 17:05:47 +0000 UTC]

I don't see why not

You have a fairly similar style, from what I've read, as Anton. You may want to look into some of the places he's published (since he puts them up) and submit there. Mmmm also maybe vox poetica. They're pretty chill

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-08-19 23:55:39 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the slow reply on this. Β My life continues to have a bad habit of jumping the rails on a fairly regular basis.

I really appreciate your encouragement, and yeah... I think i'm going to go ahead.

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-09-05 14:04:15 +0000 UTC]

it's okay, mine, too

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-09-13 02:31:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm having a hard time wrapping my head around the fact that I haven't written anything in about a month. Β But at the same time I'm having a hard time getting my feet back under me. Hopefully in the next day or three.

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-09-25 23:46:51 +0000 UTC]

XDΒ  I am behind
I hope things have changed in the last week and a half!

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-09-26 17:12:59 +0000 UTC]

I've started a part time job and I'm back at school so everyday I'm dealing with creative stuff, just not my own.


on top of that, I'm working on a paying web gig where I'm getting behind.

I've got a lot of fantastic ideas for the Compact Stories project and I have a bunch of poetry titles working their way through my brain.Β 


I keep hoping to work on my web portfolio, catching up on web dev related reading, poetry, short stories, music, and visual art... but School, Work and Clients need to come first. Β  And I keep on thinking about submitting my stuff for publication.

I don't think things are changing overnight, but I need to develop some more controls over my life.

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vespera In reply to exquisiteoath [2013-09-26 17:42:01 +0000 UTC]

that sounds exhausting, seriously

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exquisiteoath In reply to vespera [2013-09-26 17:50:44 +0000 UTC]

Thats about it. Β 



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