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<< FirstΒ < Previous-- Next > Coming 09/28/18, 5pm PacificPage eleven of the comedy, weight gain fetish, superhero parody Comic named OverFuel! OverFuel runs into the problems of a judgmental child, and a heavy burden of heroics. Will she be able to overcome these obstacles? Who knows?!
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Possibly! Mwahahaha.
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I really love Candace's facial expressions on this page. Reminds me of the training montages from earlier. Really puts some characterization out there early on.
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Glad that's coming through!
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Wow, dude I love it! This is so pulpy and fun. You got the style spot on and the Golden to Silver Age storytelling and panels work so well!
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I did try for that, but it's a little hard to feel like a success because I put a lot of practice in after this to put towards chapter 2, and what I have of that so far is a lot better for paneling and comic book story telling 
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Just keep doing what your doing and learn from each new thing. Like how I make comics is so different, more refined that I used to a few years ago. I put alot of attention into style, format, hidden meaning, as much as I can to make it as good as it can be.
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She's really looking good as a superhero. That's also some really good shading on your part as well. As for the last panel, I can't help but see you have a little of Koudelka in there.
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A little, but I think it's mostly that Koudelka uses references, which I've actually started doing
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Welp shes still extra points... Gonna need a ply wood sheet to slide under that bed and left from under... (Spread the weight cause I doubt those bed bars will hold from two gripping points...)
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Bariatric beds are designed to support a lot, but you are right that the bars are probably not enough. And yeah, definitely worth extra points
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Hehe I wonder how she will solve this problem.
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Not an easy problem to solve
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