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Published: 2009-03-29 05:14:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 628; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 7
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Tornado Village Night Tale(story series name)
云真的搞不懂为什么要一个学校要建立在车城郊外约五里远的山丘下
更不明白自己为什么要上学了
真不知道上学有什么好的
世间上还能有什么比上课更折磨人的事呢？
云自己想着 随着下课铃声逃离这监狱
灰风轻易的夺走云指间的试卷 在风中戏弄着
而天边的乌云蓬勃开战 眼见一场不可避免的暴风雨就快来了
云加快脚步往地平线上的城市冲刺
Inspire pretty much by The Little Prince, I came out this little Bedtime story I would upload on my blog. Now this is the first page for my first story OVER THE BRIDGE(not sure of the name yet, maybe I'll change it later on). I will translate the story into English sometime. Peace.
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Comments: 13
so much going on here ! I like the tree, a lot of character to it, going well with the dramatic mood of the sky. All awesome work
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Thx Aimelle. The flying tree was just some random thought captured while I drawing it.
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I love the clouds, though perhaps adding a bit more contrast to sort of emphasize the focal point? I'm not really sure if that'd help but my eyes get a bit confused as to where they're supposed to look in it. Great job!
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yea... already couple deviant complaint about it. The focal point shall be on the girl part. But I wasn't in mood to touch it up. Now maybe I'll find sometime to touch up before I print out the story.
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I think the horizon line naturally does a good job of setting up the focal point so maybe just accentuating that? I think it's a pretty cool piece though for sure.
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I love the effects, the storm looks almost real (little details like the tree bent with the wind, the clouds in circles, etc.. really adda nice touch)
And gotta love the perspective too! This sure looks promising
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i find the mood abit weak, cos it is stormy night but the lighting is very much lik a gloomy afternoon 
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well, in fact it is an afternoon, just right after Yun finished her class. *pointed at the story* and the Tornodo Village Night Tale = my underdeveloping blog.
I can't paint with too vibrant color... as my mood was quite crappy that moment.
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