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Published: 2011-06-09 12:39:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 2948; Favourites: 59; Downloads: 14
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First page finished!
Here's a lighter version for those with dark screens: [link]
Cover: [link]
Next page: [link]
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Yay so awesome! Can't wait for the next page 
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Hm....you might be right ... I will try if a color more dull looks better on the next page
Thanks!
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woah, your art is really awesome! *watch*
i think it's light enough to see and read everything. i just didn't identify in the last panel, that the white-black thing was a paw 
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XD yeeeah Winterbreeze in camouflage mode, lol
Thank you!
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aww i love it 
your cats are very niice also 
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NUUUUUU! the other cat messed up the other cats hunt :<
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I will for sure! I have the whole story set up already so it would be a shame to let the time invested go to waste. It's just a question of the time I have left for drawing so it might take some time for every page to get finished.
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It looks great! The glowing eyes really stand out! Fabulous so far!
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Woo! I have been waiting for your first page, ever since I glimpsed a journal entry/status (or something on your page) a coupled days ago saying it was started. The art itself looks great! My only critque would be that it is very dark, at least on my screen - I think the second panel is the one that is really the issue though, as I really had to strain my eyes to see the rabbit, and then see the cat - I noticed the gray cat immediately as he is lighter... so basically I picked everything out in the wrong order and that made for a confusing read at first. The rest looks great, especially the leaves and ground.
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Thanks! And your critic is very appreciated - my own screen is really bright so it's hard for me to figure out how it might look on other screens...I guess I will make a second, lighter version in addition ^^
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