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MrMagistralMalik [2020-03-28 01:56:07 +0000 UTC]

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I love the way it looks. I love how you were willing to go to extents go do all of this shading. Looking high quality and clear. I love the light that you gave the art to blend in with the bird's head that appears to be a type of orange/reddish color. It is hard to tell because of the light but I am assuming it is like a red anyways with a yellow glowy light. I believe that you could have gave more orange so you can tell what the top part of the head color is so that way people can know what bird species you are exactly drawing. I believe that those type of birds have red on their head so I think orange or a type of more oranger color of an orange-yellow would have been better. I think a little bit more fur could have been smeared a little more to blend in because it looks like ovals around the fur like the chest, wings, and eye(lash?). The eye seems to be blended in working really well but when looking more closely it looks like a bunch of ovals mixed in together to give the illusion that they are feathers but they should have been more detailed. Under the beak to the eye almost in the middle the fur/feathers seem to be blended in well in that one area while the rest isn't. I believe you should try the same technique as the one around that middle area so that you can make it appear to be more realistic. Also, I suggest making the watermarks a little larger. Yeah, I know it doesn't have to do with the art, but I believe you want there to be a watermark that isn't too noticeable but at the same time not so hard to see. The watermark would have been hard to spot if it wasn't for me closening up more or if I squinted in my eyes just to try to see it and it would be really difficult to see the social media parts on the watermark. A recommendation would be to change the opacity, give possible colors to the social media and make it larger so that way people can notice the watermark, but it is honestly up to you.

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RENEWAL-ART [2020-03-30 17:23:37 +0000 UTC]

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