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Published: 2019-03-28 02:53:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 428; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description
name: Dunnais Ruthbordnickname: Dun
species: Raltophes (its an advanced society of flightless bird people)
age : 29 (just became a young adult )
height/ weight: 1.5m / 45 pounds
gender: male
reasons for entering: he has an incurable disease, and he wants to out live his rival/enemy Ana (he really wanted to kill her but couldn't)
strengths:
hyper hearing: has better hearing than the average human
tinkering: likes to make something of nothing, kinda like inventing things but is more like making things on the fly.
energy manipulation : his species is able to absorb and use any energy at their disposal.(kinda like energy drinks). for example, plants absorb sunlight as energy. Dun is able to something similar to that but with a variety of energies (like dark energy, or the energy from explosives(this one in particular would take him a lot of time to absorb from a big blast) .These energies could be sensed, and could attract dun when he is tired, just like how when you need to plug your phone in to charge. (if anymore explanation is necessary, then please contact me.))
quick: able to move quickly and and is fleet footed.
swordsmanship: knows the art of the blade
jet pack: powered by the energy released from his disease and from himself
weaknesses:
his disease: it spreads slowly yet surely. it affects his internal organs. it causes him immense pain from time to time. could be contagious to the touch. sometimes, when the disease gets to a higher percentage of spreading, it would leave him immobilized due to it taking over his body(kind of like a temporary paralysis)
weak spot:his half mask hides his disease. his entire head would be considered a weak spot just because that's where the main point of the disease is.
loud noises: he is used to silence or near silence. hearing loud noises and being able to hear really well doesn't mix well. it could inflict pain onto him if said noise was loud enough
small size: due to his size, he is not very strong physically and could be overwhelmed pretty quickly.
pain tolerance : the more the disease spreads the worse his pain tolerance gets. he already starts with terrible pain tolerance
prone to fits: while he has had the disease, whenever he gets overly emotional or angry he goes into these fits of anger/ jealousy where nothing logical can really get to him and leaves him really paranoid(this is the disease tying to protect itself) and ironically it stuns him while he is muttering incomprehensibly to himself
personality :
determined, prideful, understanding, curious and analytical. he can also be very stubborn and kinda quick to judge. once his goal is threatened to be broken or taken away he becomes more and more apathetic and sadistic. he will do anything to achieve his goal .
history:
he used to be really good friends with this person named Ana. that did not last very long. Raltophes popularity is based on being the best at their chosen hobby. Ana was really good at all types of sports and Dunnais' was tinkering. Dunnais was searching for the secrets of immortality and researched it alot. Ana took his research papers and claimed them as her own. this made Dun go into a fit of rage and try to find the quickest way to prove immortality. he gets into a dangerous situation which gives him the disease, and a better cause to find the secret of immortality. then, he finds himself the tales of the labyrinth and tries to go find it for real.
likes:scrap metals, odd trinkets, machines, flowers and dancing.
dislikes: Ana(or any thoughts about her), loud noises, wasted potential.
other:
-inside of his cane is his rapier
-tries to opt for the safest solution in everything.
-will probably kill Ana if he gets the chance
- if he runs out of energy then he must recharge or else none of his machines (or himself) would work
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Comments: 6
Falling-Maple [2019-04-10 02:29:19 +0000 UTC]
oops. i just realized that some of the changes i made weren't saved. sorry! though i fixed them now. thanks for your time !
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kiwipeach [2019-04-06 19:38:59 +0000 UTC]
Hi! A few things before Dunnais is ready for the maze!
Strengths:
-We'd like a little more clarification and possible limits on his power to absorb energy. Where does this energy come from? What's stopping him from having unlimited energy? Just a more detailed explanation would be great.
-I noticed you have a jetpack and metal arms in the other section, they would each count as a strength, bringing him up to 7 strengths.
Weaknesses:
-His disease: The pain it causes him needs to be able to hinder him in some way, by either immobilizing him or something else you can think of.
-Direct light: The mask basically negates this weakness. This needs to be changed to where it can happen regardless of the mask's presence or not. Keep in mind the labyrinth is well shadowed, so it is easily feasible to avoid light when trying to.
-Loud noises: 'loud noises and hearing don't mix well' this needs to be elaborated, how will this negatively effect Dun? (some examples could be: Stuns deafens, inflicts pain, etc. )
-Pain tolerance: It needs to be stated that, while his tolerance can get worse, he already has low tolerance.
That leaves 7 Strengths to 6 Weaknesses (after the fixes), we'll just need one more and he'll be good to go!
Let me know if you have any questions or concerns!
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Falling-Maple In reply to kiwipeach [2019-04-09 00:23:15 +0000 UTC]
hi there! sorry for the late response, but other than that, its fixed!
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kiwipeach In reply to Falling-Maple [2019-04-09 18:37:31 +0000 UTC]
There's a couple of things that were missed;
-The light does not count as a weakness if the mask can negate it.
-The jetpack and extra arms need to be moved to the strength section, and each count as their own strength.
That leaves 7 strengths to 6 weaknesses. You could add a new weakness or change the current weakness to where he is harmed by light regardless of the masks presence. Or even remove a strength if that suits your fancy.
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Falling-Maple In reply to kiwipeach [2019-04-10 02:30:14 +0000 UTC]
oops. i just realized that some of the changes i made weren't saved. sorry! though i fixed them now. thanks for your time!
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