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fallingbelow — Let Me In
Published: 2008-06-24 19:48:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description I’ve seen it too many times before
You turn around and close the door
And I’m waiting for the last time
When you shut me out forever
And it’s not just the act that shocks me inside
It’s the mood and the language overseen

So swiftly you turn, you’re so quick on your feet
Afraid to fall, baby I know it
And you have to blink your eyes before it’s all over
Open them up and get through it
Did you see everything that I had to see?
The sunshine, the kiss, the feeling, now this

Where are you off to now in a world we both created?
We found something so good in something we both hated
And the fire continues to burn
Because there’s a distance growing between us

Do your nightmares bring me back to you?
Mine do but then they erase you
My hands still touch comfort and my mind still sees it
Nights never ended so quickly

I’ve seen it too many times before
You turn around and close the door
But you halt and I move
And then we cry to save our love

Did you see everything that I had to see?
The sunshine, the kiss, the feeling, now this
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Comments: 3

emotionaldreamer [2008-06-25 09:44:36 +0000 UTC]

fave line: We found something so good in something we both hated

dude... yes. *hugs you up* thank you for writing this piece. it's as though you've been watching me from afar and wrote this just for me to heal me or help me or let me know that i'm not the only one out there doing this alone.

love is so fucked up sometimes. thank you for your words which have touched.

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fallingbelow In reply to emotionaldreamer [2008-06-27 15:53:45 +0000 UTC]

You are welcome. Thank you for your comment, it's nice to know I can help with my words.

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YOYOLOVER5656 [2008-06-24 20:16:50 +0000 UTC]

that was truely beautiful! great poem.

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