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Published: 2006-09-15 16:14:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 175; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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This took forever, but it did turn out good. The words in red are from a poem I wrote a while back titled "These Four Wall."It's fairly easy to read just read from left to right and top to bottom, like you would read a book. To see the picture you're going to have to click on it.
The picture in the corner is to help you visualize the image.
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Your deviation list is soo huge, I'm not even going to try to get through it all...but I will say...this is pretty awesome.
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Thanks. So what you think? Sould we add each other to out friends lists?
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lol...I guess. Um...I don't actually know you in reality...the point of deviantart is just to watch artists who's art you like. You can add me regardless of what I say, lol. I'll probably add you too, cuz yur stuffs pretty interesting.
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Thanks. I'll look forward to your work.
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wow great idea, and i can imagine it took a while, its really good
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Love the poem; w/o this arrangement it would lose a lot of meaning. I dislike having the picture in the corner, though; it disrupts the purity of your words. Well done.
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Think I should get rid of that picture?
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Hmm... not sure. It does add a certain visual effect to the piece, demonstrates the severity of the words; but maybe you should rework the drawing, make it less distracting. I'm not sure because it does add to this, but I think that it also distracts from the best part of this (the writing). This is some of my favorite writing by you, so I don't want anything about its effect or presentation to change the feeling behind it... so no, I won't be of any help in answering that question.
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I've never seen anything like that before. Fantastic idea
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Nice poem - a little difficult to read in that format
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Thanks. You found it hard to read?
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And the words echoed through the room not finding the right angle, not finding his ear.
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...and soon all the puddles were dry and the sky clear...does that go for the cuts and blood?
Lalalalalalala.......huh.......blah....fricken whoa....sorry...completely....la
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What do you mean? I'm no brian...i'm drunk.
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You're drunk? Well, that's just great. Hope you're having fun.
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This turned out a lot better than I expected it would! Pretty clever. And I like the way the arms are shaped. The fingers don't look very good, but what kind of detail can you get with words, you know?
This is very cool.
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Looks cool. I like the idea...looks like it took forever. good job.
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thats frigune talent right there babe....
this is the best work ive seen in a LONG time
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no lies....
that's beautiful, in a very haunting way
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Yea, know what you mean.
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