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fallingbelow — Smiling for Her
Published: 2008-07-01 04:03:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 135; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description It’s been so long that I’ve held this captive
These heart attacks inside
Too many nights have tormented my sleep
And she finds me passed out on the floor
In hand, puzzle-pieces of letters
Vaguely resembling love
In spirit I am tortured
But I’m missing you anyway

Boxes of unfinished thoughts are hidden in the shadows
Behind closed closet doors
She never understood my ways
So I forget those days
Layers of scotch tape line it fully
But it only bares the weight

Sadly I smile for her
Knowing I’m lying to myself
I just never saw your reasons
Topped off with treasons
Going out of your way to break my heart
I served it on a platter

Case closed, gaze found a way
And she listens to me ask your name
How I ever thought I’d make it
Guess I never thought it through
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Comments: 6

Zeroknight [2008-07-01 07:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I like this

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short4life [2008-07-01 04:04:38 +0000 UTC]

aaw....this is beautiful

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fallingbelow In reply to short4life [2008-07-01 23:57:53 +0000 UTC]

May I ask what do you like about it?

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short4life In reply to fallingbelow [2008-07-02 02:11:53 +0000 UTC]

its hard to explain....its....truthful, in a way, something that shows feelings and emotion....not a lot of people write this way....its shows sadnees, but no fear in trying to show it bitter-sweet

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fallingbelow In reply to short4life [2008-07-02 03:27:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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short4life In reply to fallingbelow [2008-07-03 00:41:27 +0000 UTC]

ur very welcome

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