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FallingStarXIV β€” Red Flag at Dawn

Published: 2013-08-27 17:18:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 611; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description So... in case you couldn't tell, this is pretty much inspired by the barricade part in Les Miserables. I wrote this way back in early July, and I hope it's a good poem despite being pretty much improvised all in an evening. XD
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starbreese [2013-08-28 16:38:57 +0000 UTC]

Love it!

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FallingStarXIV In reply to starbreese [2013-08-28 17:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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starbreese In reply to FallingStarXIV [2013-08-28 17:28:55 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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aliewren [2013-08-28 00:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Β incredible poetry- j'adore

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FallingStarXIV In reply to aliewren [2013-08-28 17:27:14 +0000 UTC]

Merci! I'm glad you like it!

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aliewren In reply to FallingStarXIV [2013-08-28 17:33:52 +0000 UTC]

I don't like it,.... I FLIPPIN LOVE IT

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LisAlice5472 [2013-08-27 18:05:34 +0000 UTC]

Lovely and very patriotic

The words sound so pretty together and I love the massage they send ^_^

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FallingStarXIV In reply to LisAlice5472 [2013-08-27 23:04:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I worked pretty hard on it, I'm glad it shows! The barricade part in Les Miserables is pretty gut-wrenching, and I'm kind of hoping that I got that down. XD

Just a question though, which couplet is your favorite from the poem?

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LisAlice5472 In reply to FallingStarXIV [2013-08-28 08:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Well I definitely love the first fourΒ 

But the whole poem is lovely

"Long after the songs of freedom are done..." - I had to shed a tear after this!

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LisAlice5472 In reply to LisAlice5472 [2013-08-28 08:46:47 +0000 UTC]

S-sorry... "gone" instead of "done" - I'm typing too fast today

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