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FallOutVamp — Untitled Poem [NSFW]
Published: 2010-11-25 19:12:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 148; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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By: Kristina Balla

Drowning in desolation,
Incapable of sentiment,
Perpetually drenched in solitude.

Flowing like a river,
The lexis comes spewing forth.

Like rancorous thunderheads,
Cutting in to whatever sanity remains.

Quivering with anticipation,
Bodies in motion,
Futile movements,
Meaningless lives,
All identical,
Animosity is their death.
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Comments: 7

Coco-zutarafan [2010-11-25 19:59:59 +0000 UTC]

Does NOT suck

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FallOutVamp In reply to Coco-zutarafan [2010-11-27 19:28:06 +0000 UTC]

aww thankilies!

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Coco-zutarafan In reply to FallOutVamp [2010-11-27 19:38:40 +0000 UTC]

I may even be able to use it as a connection piece to the poem me and my partner have to teach to the class for English. (We're using "Alone" by Edgar Allan Poe)

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FallOutVamp In reply to Coco-zutarafan [2010-11-27 20:19:00 +0000 UTC]

ooooo! I would be honored!

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Coco-zutarafan In reply to FallOutVamp [2010-11-27 20:29:39 +0000 UTC]

I hope it works. Idk.

It's hard finding a connection piece

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FallOutVamp In reply to Coco-zutarafan [2010-11-27 22:33:21 +0000 UTC]

awww well im glad u liked my work!

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Coco-zutarafan In reply to FallOutVamp [2010-11-28 04:44:39 +0000 UTC]

^__^

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