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Published: 2010-10-16 21:43:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 180; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description Make new friends
but keep the old
one is silver
the other gold
Though in the end
they always rust
bend and break
then turn to dust
So tell me son
What does one do?
Just have your fun
and run them through.
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Comments: 10

Monochromatic-Juliet [2011-01-23 09:06:59 +0000 UTC]

Ow, but sounds about right sometimes.. The good friends are so hard to find.

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FalseIntrospection [2010-11-23 09:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, everything i write is dark, but i like things that way.

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allofmyconfusion [2010-11-23 09:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Whoa.
I really like your take on this.
Dark, AMAZING, good writing

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Bakape [2010-10-22 13:02:40 +0000 UTC]

Nice piece! But what tipped me off - silver and gold don't rust. A minor detail, but that's just the nag I am

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FalseIntrospection In reply to Bakape [2010-10-22 16:38:12 +0000 UTC]

Well everything rusts eventually. If it makes you feel any better you can interpret it as them not actually being gold or silver but another "weaker" metal.

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Bakape In reply to FalseIntrospection [2010-10-23 15:21:00 +0000 UTC]

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LeviathanDemon [2010-10-19 23:45:23 +0000 UTC]

That's oddly morbidly cheerful....cool And nice job keeping the rhyme scheme.

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FalseIntrospection In reply to LeviathanDemon [2010-10-20 05:16:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, if you ever have a suggestion or an idea im all ears.

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PoetsHand [2010-10-16 22:33:34 +0000 UTC]

It's a cool rhyme scheme.

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FalseIntrospection In reply to PoetsHand [2010-10-16 23:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, it came out of something stupid though.

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