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FalseIntrospection — Stubborn by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-09-12 23:26:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 230; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description I won't ever move forward
If it means moving on
Ill grin and bear the darkness
If your leaving means the dawn
Of loneliness and waiting
ill never have my fill
For one that means everything
Ill stand forever still
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Comments: 7

Bakape [2010-10-10 17:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Short but profound and full off expression! Very nice!

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FalseIntrospection In reply to Bakape [2010-10-10 17:56:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Its one of the few that stayed the way it was from the beginning.

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LeviathanDemon [2010-10-05 23:34:42 +0000 UTC]

There was something I really liked about this one and, when it finally hit me what it was, I liked it even more. Bit of a shame that this doesn't have the attention it deserves.

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FalseIntrospection In reply to LeviathanDemon [2010-10-06 00:17:52 +0000 UTC]

Maybe one day you can share that with me = D

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KidxGhost [2010-09-29 09:21:11 +0000 UTC]

Its always felt good to learn lessons through stubbornness
like holding your breath to get whats best
but sometimes you black out and come to realizing you banged your head on the sink
and you cant see shit..

The lessons you learn being stubborn hurt to be the best.

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FalseIntrospection In reply to KidxGhost [2010-09-29 09:55:06 +0000 UTC]

You made me laugh AND gave me an idea for another poem, you sir, are awesome!

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PoetsHand [2010-09-20 13:43:20 +0000 UTC]

This is very, very good. Honestly, you should submit this to and see if it is accepted. (You'd have to join first.)

The rhyme in this poem is not forced. It flows very well. This is very rare here on DA. The theme and tone stay consistent. Honestly, this is a very fine piece.

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