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FalseIntrospection — Undead by-nc-nd
Published: 2010-10-12 18:24:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Scarred lip with an empty tattoo
and you got me wondering who
exactly you are to be sitting
in my mind
Aint it fitting
this bind
around my heart
i swore would never start
again for someone, anyone
guess it wasnt done
down or out
if it just felt something
nothing worth writing home about
just enough to know
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Comments: 4

Monochromatic-Juliet [2011-01-23 09:07:40 +0000 UTC]

Well written, I think the style is fine.

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PoetsHand [2010-10-13 00:42:44 +0000 UTC]

this bind
around my heart
i swore would never start
again for someone, anyone
guess it wasnt done

These are wonderful lines. There is a play with rhyme that shows real craft.

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FalseIntrospection In reply to PoetsHand [2010-10-13 00:53:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm trying to get away from my usual set of mind and use of words, if only slightly. Hope you're well and not getting too swamped.

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PoetsHand In reply to FalseIntrospection [2010-10-13 02:09:48 +0000 UTC]

Whatever you are doing, it is working. Thank you for the note. Yeah, the pressure is on this year.

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