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Published: 2006-07-04 04:15:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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This was made from a reference picture of Jessica Alba, only im a beginner so i didnt get anywhere close. But she looks human, so its all good right?I would love critique on this....its a first attempt for several things, including but not limited to the lighting on the hair, and the teeth....I have never attempted either one.
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Well you asked for an advanced Critique so here goes!
The lighting and shading are very good! Maybe a little more on the ouotside of the neck to show that its round. I put a paper up to the pic to show only half the face at a time. If you look at it this way the left side of the pic (her right side) looks great! Very well done, the eye needs to come a little closer to the center but thats about it. If you look at the right side you can see that it looks like a difrent person. Maybe not even a woman with that jawline. Anyhow still looks ok, not the best face from that half. If you look at the face as a whole its kinda wobbly. This is becouse the two sides dont match. To fix this you should first draw a light grid to see were the difrent bits of the face should go (eyes, noise, ears,) befor you draw them. On a whole A great first try! Keep at it!
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Wow, thank you.
I am working on it still, so I will try and fix it.
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Hope that wasnt to much!
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lol. not at all. I really do need all the critique-age i can get if i want to improve.
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This is very good for a first time thing. The hair and teeth are both beautiful.
However the eyes are a little too wide-set, and the nose looks a little squished.
Keep working on it- this is great, but practice makes perfect XD!
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Thank you....it is a work in progress, so I will do what I can to try and fix it.
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