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Published: 2005-07-24 22:51:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 68; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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yay! im back! hehe. ok, so this is a new character, in real form.....she is a tiger person! I dont have a name for her yet, though. I know that her head is too big for her body, but other than that, whattya think?Related content
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I'll disagree, it's not so much that the head is too big but her NECK is too wide. Because the neck is wide, it props the head higher than it should be making the head look big. If you thin down the neck and lower the head, it will look in proportioned. I'm not saying you should totally redraw the head because those changes would require you to do that. Sorry.
Everything else is perfect. I would like to mention that for all the creases in her shirt, the hem should be a little higher than the back part. Speaking of back...you drew a very nice one 
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hehe thank you! 
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Other than the head being too big, it's pretty well drawn. One thing about hair-- get rid of the lines...hair is a cool and layered thing, and shoudl be drawn in chunks as opposed to one big thing scored with straight lines. *nod*
Other than that, good job.
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thank you very much! i knew that her head was too big, and i erased a lot and tried to make her body bigger, but it didnt work, so i just kinda gave up and decided to do better next time! I have her character design done, just gotta scan it 
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