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Description Okay here is an illustration based upon an rp scene from a Alpha and Omega/Emperor's New School Cross-over between Josh and I over at the Disney Role-Play World.

In this scene Humphrey sneaks up behind Kate and pounces her down
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FaPingMulan In reply to ??? [2011-09-11 15:07:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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bumblebeel In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-09-11 17:24:15 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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SurfsUp07 [2011-01-11 03:43:04 +0000 UTC]

He's right! And alphas aren't so much of the pinners unless they're playing with other omegas.

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FaPingMulan In reply to SurfsUp07 [2011-01-11 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know lol XD

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DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-10 02:56:26 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwww... SO CUTE!

I'm definitly favin' this!

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-10 19:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-10 22:17:28 +0000 UTC]

NP

You'd usually expect the alpha to pin the omega, but Humphrey got the upper hand this time!

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"Omega: one! Alpha: zero!"
-Humphrey (Alpha and Omega)

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JacobTPG1114 In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2022-06-14 20:00:56 +0000 UTC]

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-10 22:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Yep that he did lol XD

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-11 12:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

Ya know what? You just gave me an idea for my Alpha and Omega sequal. Maybe on one part I can have Humphrey do that to Kate.

I can also imagine Garth doing the same to Lilly.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-11 17:48:47 +0000 UTC]

Really? Awesome I would love to see that happen :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-13 03:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, in the story I'm making, Garth does pin Lilly at one point just like Humphrey pins Kate in one part.
Note: Both Kate and Lilly get pinned on their backs when their mates pounce them in the story.

By the way, remember Hutch becomes a main character in my story?
Well I was thinking maybe he should have a mate too.
Out of what I designed for Hutch's mate, she has pinkish-gray fur with a white underside and face. She also has purple-ish-gray markings on her face around her eyes which go to the edge of her mouth, she also has blue eyes.
Now all I have to do is figure out a good name for her. I was thinking she should be named after a type of flower, we can't pick Lily since that's already taken for Garth's mate.

What'cha think of the idea for Hutch's mate so far?
What would be a good name for her? (remember, I was thinking she should be named after a type of flower, like "Rose", "Blossom", or "Wildflower")

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-13 03:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Lol XD Point 1 for Humphrey and Garth point 0 for Kate and Lilly XD

I think it's sweet that you made up a girlfriend for Hutch, she sounds lovely too by the way :3

Personally I think the name Wildflower sounds the best :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-13 13:31:34 +0000 UTC]

Yep! Those two sisters had it comin' to'em!

Yeah, I thought that since Hutch was becoming a main character in my story, I thought why not give him a mate since in almost every movie the male protagonists (main good guy) almost always get their girl in it.

Yeah, I thought so too. Let's go with Wildflower.
By the way, in the story, she gave birth at the same time Lilly and Kate got their pups, only she had three pups instead of two. Wildflower also went with Hutch to save Kate and the others, she was even in the burning building and flew in the helicopter too!
By the way, Wildflower also has her eyes nearly covered by her hair, she's also an omega and is Humphrey's younger sister (Uh-ohhh... ). In one scene, Hutch is teaching her some hunting skills but she fails on her first try, apparently due to her hair getting in her eyes. Hutch then pushes Wildflower's hair away from her face and comments on how beautiful she looks, which makes her blush. So it's a similar scene to the one where Lilly hair is pushed back for the first time.
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In another scene in the story, Lilly is being chased by some evil wolves and is running for her life. She then sees some wolves blocking her path and goes in a different direction, only to see more wolves blocking her path. Lilly then goes in multiple direstions only to see evil wolves blocking each one, Lilly then finally realizes that she is surounded when the wolves close in on her and the leader walks into the the ring. During a short talk, the leader of the evil wolves walks toward Lilly, who backs away with every step she takes. At the end of the talk, the leader pounces toward Lilly, causing her to rear up in shock. Rearing up was obviously a bad idea as the leader knocks her down, pinning the white wolf on her back. The leader then prepares to kill her for revenge (as she was Garth's mate and Garth's father Tony took out the evil leader's pack long ago) and just as he's about to strike, Garth comes to Lilly's rescue again while swinging on a vine, he kicks the leader off of Lilly and grabs her in the process. Garth then swings on the vines with the evil wolves in pursuit, Lilly then asks Garth if he had a plan and Garth says "This is the plan!" and Lilly, confused by what he said asks him "THIS is the plan!?" and Marcel comes out with a flare gun (how in the world did he get that!?) and shoots it into the air as the evil wolves just watch in confusion. Then Garth and Lilly land in front of the leader and tell him to give up, the evil wolf then tells them that he wouldn't be doing that anytime soon as they're outnumbered, then Garth corrects him on the being outnumbered theory as Kate, Humphrey, Hutch, Tony, Winston, Eve, Wildflower and bunch of other wolves come out and surround the evil wolf pack. The leader understands that he is outnumbered but says that it won't matter since he'll still kill Garth and Lilly (including Tony) to get revenge. Eve then comes up and tells the leader that if he dare lays a paw on Lilly, she'll rip out his heart and brain and shove them down his throat, which shocks everyone (including the evil leader) around her, save for Lilly as Garth covered her ears. The leader (even though shocked by Eve) doubts what she said and asks if Eve was going to do that, then doesn't she do it and he punches Lilly in the stomach, causing her to fall on her back and Eve to go into an evil fury and rage and she attacks the evil wolf while eveyone watches. Garth then helps Lilly and asks if she was hurt while rubbing the area where she got punched, Lilly says that she's a little sore but is okay. Eve then quickly gains the upper hand on the evil wolf and grabs his neck with her jaws and snaps it, killing the wolf. The other evil wolves, not wanting to go against the good guys now, run away in fear as everyone shares a triumphant moment except for Lilly and Garth as Kate, Humphrey, and Eve walk up to Lilly to see if she was okay. Lilly claims that she's fine, but is too tired to walk home, so picks her up and carries her back to the den as everyone follows.
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What'cha think?

I'm still just so evil with Lilly, ain't I?
First, she gets surrounded by evil wolves, second she gets pounced on and is nearly killed, and third, she gets punched in the stomach! Poor thing!
Well, at least Garth got to rescue/help Lilly again.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-13 20:15:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah the sisters definetly had it coming to them.

Wildflower is Humphrey's little sister? Uh oh hope that doesn't cause any tension lol xD

It's so sweet that Hutch teaches Wildflower how to hunt and pushes the hair out of her face and tells her she is beautiful like the scene where Garth did that to Lilly

You are totally evil to Lilly poor thing first getting surrounded then punched but I'm glad to see Garth come in and rescue her just in time :3

And it's awesome you gave Eve an action scene with fighting the evil wolf pack's leader. She sure showed him.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-14 00:02:15 +0000 UTC]

Yep, they sure did.

Well, since Humphrey and Wildflower are both omegas, they are pretty much the best of friends even though they're brother and sister. But upon first meeting Wildflower, Kate at first mistook her for Humphrey's old girlfriend (as she saw them playing with each other like they were friends), but Humphrey corrects her.

Yeah, it's definitly similar to the scene with Garth teaching Lilly how to hunt. the only difference is that when Hutch pushes away her hair, he pushes it to both sides of her head since both her eyes were nearly covered by it. By the way, since Hutch mates with her, he becomes Kate, Humphrey, Lilly, and Garth's brother-in-law as well as Winston, Eve, and Tony's son-in-law.

Yeah, I apologize for her. I need to give her a break.
Garth is definitly one of best rescuers there. He's also seen caring/watching out for Lilly and their pups in the story more than acting like a showoff and he even licks Lilly's stomach to heal it after the evil wolf punched there.

Yeah, I thought I'd let Eve show how violent she can really be. Not to mention she even killed the evil wolf when she snapped his neck after gaining the upper hand.
A&O Safety Tip: Do not anger Eve! Otherwise you're dead!

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-14 01:13:02 +0000 UTC]

Question if they were brother and sister wouldn't Kate have known Wildflower was Humphrey's sister since they would've all grown up together?

Wow Hutch becomes a brother in law all around huh? XD

Awww so sweet of Garth to care and watch over his mate their pups

Yep definetly don't mess with Eve or you're dead lol XD

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-14 11:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, Wildflower wasn't around when Kate went to Alpha school and mated with Humphrey as she was "relocated" as a young teen with her parents to another park before that time, but she found her way back to Jasper and Hutch is the first one she encouters (not to mention she falls in love with him) when she arrives and he shows her around.

Yep, he becomes a member of Kate's family now since he mates with Humphrey's sister!

Yeah, I thought I'd have him like a guardian to his own family rather than some annoying father. Not to mention Star is known to pounce on him when she gets playful, but he doesn't mind since he knows she's a omega.

Yep, you don't wanna mess with Eve! A word of advice: If Eve ever gets mad, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!
In the sequal though, she's still a good mother as she still cares for Lilly and Kate. She even cares about the pups they have and can hold her aggressiveness back more easily, but she can let it go when needed, like when the evil wolf punched Lilly, now that really snapped her cap!

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-14 19:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Ah okay I see that makes sense how Kate and Wildflower didn't know each other before. Thanks for clearing that up.

Yeah having him be a guardian is much better than having him be an annoying father and it's so sweet he doesn't mind Star pouncing on him and playing with him.

Oh yes definetly run from Eve for your life. That's good though that you have Eve hold back her aggressive nature until it's more properly needed too.

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-14 22:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Wildflower's family was relocated and only Humphrey stayed in Jasper.

Yeah, Star mostly pounces Garth when he comes back from a hunt, like she's been waiting a week to see him.
By the way, Wildfire (Kate and Humphrey's daughter) has her mother's responsible behavior, but she has a lot of playfulness thanks to her father.

Yep, Eve has a strong soft spot for pups she can't resist!
Even Winston and Tony have a soft spot for them in the story!
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Either way, on another part of the story, Kate, Lilly, Humphrey, and Garth are going for a walk and they suddenly see their kids Wildfire, Jet, Star, and Hunter running toward them as if they were being chased and the pups quickly hide under parents (Hunter hides under Garth, Star hides under lilly, Jet hides under Humphrey, and Wildfire hides under Kate) then Can-do (Not an OC, appeared in movie) comes running toward the group from where the pups came and immediatly stops upon seeing Kate and the other adults. Lilly notices something is wrong and asks Star what happened and she says that she, Hunter, and her cousins (Wildfire and Jet) were eating a caribou that had been taken down and Can-do chased after them out of nowhere. Kate then asks Can-do why he "attacked" the pups and he says that he was chasing them because he "called dibs" on the caribou and lost his temper and wanted to teach the pups a lesson for "stealing" it. Then Kate, angered by what Can-do attempted, reminds him of one of the pack rules: "Do not harm or threaten the pups unless you are the father or mother of it" and Can-do instantly notices what he had done wrong and apologizes to the pups. (He did it because he didn't want to be punished for attempting to harm the future leaders' pups) Then he walks off and Kate and the others resume their walk, this time with the pups going with them.
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What'cha think?

Any new ideas for Balto 4 or Alpha and Omega 2 yet?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-15 00:38:11 +0000 UTC]

Awww poor Humphrey got separated from his family

So Wildfire is a complete mix of personality between her parents? Awesome :3

Who doesn't have a soft spot for puppies? lol XD

Awwww poor Wildfire, Jet, Hunter, and Star got spooked by Can-do who lost his temper over the caribou dinner.
I bet Cando will think twice about threatening the pups ever again though after what Kate said.

For Balto 4 I was thinking maybe some of the pups could join a sled team or something, what do you think?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-15 11:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, poor guy. Good thing he was living in Jasper when that happened though.

Yep, she does. She even sometimes tackles Kate out playfulness too. She even enjoys pulling out "play-ambushes" and tackling her friends or family when they least expect it.

I guess no one.

Yeah, good thing their parents protected them when they came running. Yeah, he'll definitly think twice alright. No one wants to get in trouble for harming the future-leaders' pups there.

Well, at the ending of Balto 4, Balto's grandkids are still about 8 weeks old. So it's not revealed what they do when they grow up.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-16 00:45:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah it would be terrible to think of Humphrey not living in Jasper when that happened.

Lol xD sounds like she's a regular ninja wolf XD

Yep no one messes with the future leaders puppies XD

Hmm...okay. Do you think the pups would get adopted like they did in Balto 2? For Balto 4 I mean

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-16 01:24:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, it would.

Yeah, Wildfire's a ninja.
But her brother Jet is like Sonic as he's super fast!

Yep.
By the way, you know Claw and Scar, the brown male wolf and the red female wolf who messed up Kate's hunt in the movie?

Uh, no. They don't get adopted in the story. They stay with their parents.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-16 03:13:29 +0000 UTC]

Jet and Wildfire sound like quite team of siblings then XD

Yeah I remember Claw and Scar, why?

Okay just wondering

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-16 13:41:54 +0000 UTC]

Yep.
And as for their cousins Star and Hunter, Star looks just like her mother Lilly except for her eyes, which are blue and Lilly's eyes are lavender. She even has a hair style just like Lilly's it's usually covering her face, but it is pushed back in the story as some points. And as for Hunter, just like Wildfire, he has some skills that make him look like a ninja and is known to enjoy a game of tag and oftenly plays it with Star, Wildfire, and Jet.

Good, because on one part of the story, the red female wolf (I'm assuming that's Claw) is shown to have a good friendship with Hutch after the abolishment of the social rule. However, they're not like boyfriend/girlfriend, they're just good friends. On one part of the story, Claw sees Hutch flirting with Wildflower and walks up to him after she leaves and Hutch is taken by surprise when he sees Claw as he thinks she'll beat him up. But she states that she agreed with Hutch loving her only as a friend and that she had already found herself a boyfriend, (I haven't decided on who it was yet, maybe Scar) which Hutch congradulates her on that and she walks away, wishing the best for Hutch and Wildflower.

NP!
I do have another part for Alpha and Omega 2 here:
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On one part of the story, Garth is grooming Star (his daugher) for the midnight howl and pushes her hair away from her eyes and he tells her that she reminds him how beautiful Lilly was when he pushed her hair away from eyes for the first time and Lilly (who was grooming Hunter) says "I heard that!" from the back of the den, causing Garth to laugh a bit. Then Garth looks down at Star and thinks she looks just as beautiful as Lilly but says that something's missing as he scratches his head, then he "remembers" and pulls out a pink flower from his hair (he was just being playful) and puts in Star's to make her look beautiful and to keep her hair from blocking her face. Later on after the two pups run off, Lilly and Kate are being groomed by their parents (Winston is grooming Kate and Eve is grooming Lilly) and Eve gives Lilly a white and red flower and tells her that Garth wanted her to wear it at the moonlight howl. Lilly accepts the offer and takes the flower and puts in her hair (on the left side so it keeps her hair from covering her face) and Winston finishes grooming Kate and gives her a flower (the same purple one from the movie) to wear at the moonlight howl and she takes it. Then as the two sisters leave, they run into Wildflower, who also had been groomed and also has a flower in her hair (a blue one) and the trio walks to Howling Rock, where Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch are waiting for them and Humphrey makes a bet with Garth that if Kate came over the hill before Lilly, he'd get the first howl. Then the girls finally come over the hill, Kate comes first (meaning Humphrey won the bet), then Lilly and finally Wildflower and all three guys are lovestruck (Hutch doesn't look like he's "effected" though) as a slow-motion moment of the females turning their heads as their hair flows with them occurs at the same time. The girls finally go up to their mates and they walk off in separate directions. On LillyxGarth's side, Garth comments on how beautiful Lilly looks and she blushes (some reddish-pink can be seen on her face, but it's "blurry"). Then Garth tells her that he picked out the one flower special for her to where as looked like them (He means that Lilly has white fur and he is red and the flower had both of those colors on it) She agrees with Garth and the duo howls as KatexHumphrey and HutchxWildflower do the same while their pups just watch some of the other wolves howl/dance and they eventually do the same.
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What'cha think?

"Was it... good for you?"
-Garth (Alpha and Omega)

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-16 18:18:43 +0000 UTC]

Awww Star looks just like her mommy :3

I can definetly see the pups all running around playing tag

Such sweet moments between all of the grooming scenes :3

I can totally see Hutch, Garth, and Humphrey standing together watching as the girls come over the hill and turn their heads in slow motion causing their hair to flow.

I can also see them all howling together and dancing

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-17 09:14:49 +0000 UTC]

Yep!
However, the best way to tell Lilly and Star apart is their eye color: Lilly's eyes are lavender and Star's are blue.
Another reason is Star was a teen in the story and was never seen as an adult, so she was half of Lilly's height.

Me too!
But since Jet gets his name from how fast he goes, he's mostly "it" for a very stort time and I'll bet you can guess why...

Yeah, I thought I'd have Garth give Star a flower to wear at the Moonlight Howl. Just him bein' a good father.
On another part of the "grooming scene" Humphrey and Kate are grooming their own pups (Kate is grooming Jet and Humphrey is grooming Wildfire) and when Humphrey finishes grooming Wildfire, he gives her a yellow flower to wear at the Moonlight Howl and she takes it.(All the main female characters are getting flowers here!)

Yeah, not to mention they're showing off a lot of human reflexes too!
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I don't mean to be rude, but you failed to answer one of the earlier "lines":
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On one part of the story, the red female wolf (That one's Claw) is shown to have a good friendship with Hutch after the abolishment of the social rule. However, they're not like boyfriend/girlfriend, they're just good friends. On one part of the story, Claw sees Hutch flirting with Wildflower and walks up to him after she leaves and Hutch is taken by surprise when he sees Claw as he thinks she'll beat him up. But she states that she agreed with Hutch loving her only as a friend and that she had already found herself a boyfriend, (I haven't decided on who it was yet, maybe Scar) which Hutch congradulates her on that and she walks away, wishing the best for Hutch and Wildflower.
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What'cha think?

P.S. I know the red female is Claw because in the movie during the end credits, only Claw's name appeared in the cast line while Scar's didn't and the red wolf was the only one who spoke in the movie while brown one never said a word (meaning he has no voice acter and why his name never appeared in the credits) and that's how I know Claw's the red one.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-17 23:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Yep eye color is the best way to tell Lilly and Star apart since someday Star will grow up and probably be about Lilly's height when she does lol XD

Oh yes I can definetly see why Jet would be "It" for only a very short time since he is really fast hehe

Awwwww so sweet that Kate grooms her son making him look nice and Humphrey grooming his daughter making her look all nice and pretty for the moonlight howl. Talk about sweet family bonding moments :3

Oh I'm sure they do show off a lot of the human reflexes lol

Awwww so sweet of Claw to congratulate Hutch and Wildflower and wish them the best on their relationship. I think it would be good for her to be with Scar too by the way lol

Yeah I understand sometimes I do things like that too to see who is who

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-18 10:02:03 +0000 UTC]

Well, when Star becomes Lilly's age, it'd definitly be hard to tell'em apart unless you look at their eyes. Sometimes Eve and Winston mistake Star for Lilly as she looks exactly like Lilly did as a pup in the movie. Oops!

Yep, Jet would definitly be "it" for a short time. But he's a fair player and will slow down to give others a chance.

Yeah, KatexHumphrey and LillyxGarth enjoy having some bonding time with their pups.

Yeah, Humphrey and Tony are expert in human reflexes while Garth showed some and Kate, Lilly, Winston, Eve, and Hutch hardly showed any in the movie. But Lilly does show she's good at human reflexes when Garth asks if she is before carrying her and Kate shows some when she flies the helicopter (as she was using her forepaws as hands on the controls)

Yeah, at first Hutch thought Claw wanted to be his GF before he met Wildflower until she told him she was okay with being just friends as she already got herself a boyfriend.
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By the way, on another part of the story, after Wildflower arrives in Jasper and meets Hutch for the first time, she tells him she used to live in Jasper but doesn't remember the way around much so Hutch shows her around. When they get to a grassy clearing (the same one Kate's first hunt was interfered in and where she rescued Claw and Scar from the stampede) a stampede occurs (it's currently unknown how it happened) and Hutch and Wildflower are forced to run and they're nearly trampled but Kate and Claw jump in and rescue them by doing the same "trick" Kate pulled off when she rescued Claw and Scar from the stampede in the movie (Claw grabs Hutch and Kate grabs Wildflower) and they roll into a nearby log and hide there until the stampede fades. After the caribou pass, Hutch thanks Kate and Claw for coming to their rescue and Wildflower introduces herself to them, later they continue giving Wildflower the tour of Jasper and when Kate mentions that her mate is Humphrey, Wildflower asks him what he's like and Kate tells her about how he looks and how much of a good friend he is and Wildflower asks Kate if she can meet him and Kate takes her to where she and Humphrey live (the den where Winston and Eve live in) and introduces her to Humphrey, Lilly, and Garth. Wildflower then asks Humphrey if she remembers him much to everyone's confusion including Humphrey and he says he doesn't remember her. Then Wildflower pulls off a few different stunts as a flashback occurs showing Humphrey and Wildflower as pups and Wildflower pulling off the different stunts she did just now in the flashback and Humphrey immediatly remembers Wildflower and starts playing around with her. Then Kate asks if they were boyfriend/girlfriend back then and Humphrey tells her that Wildflower is his younger sister, much to everyone's surprise. Then Winston, Eve, and Tony arrive, having heard of Wildflower's arrival and introduce themselves to her. Humphrey then decides to show Wildflower around since she had been gone for so long and she agrees. During the "tour" Humphrey tells her about the unitng of the Western and Eastern packs and the abolishment of the social rule (but he doesn't tell Wildflower about Alphas and Omegas being allowed to mate which lead to the problem with her thinking she wouldn't be allowed to mate with Hutch) and even takes her to see his friends Salty, Shakey, and Mooch and she quickly becomes friends with them after seeing how funny and playful they are.
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What'cha think?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-19 00:33:14 +0000 UTC]

Lol XD I can just imagine Eve and Winston getting Star mixed up with Lilly when she becomes an adult from time to time hehehe

That's good that even though Jet is fast he also plays fair

Nothing like family bonding :3

Yeah since Hutch and Claw are very good friends I can see why he might think she wanted to be his girlfriend at first before she clarified that it was okay for him to be with Wildflower

Awwwwww that sounds so sweet with Hutch giving Wildflower a tour of the territory and then being rescued from the stampede by Kate and Claw and then how sweet it is to have brother and sister finally reunited once again

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-19 13:50:16 +0000 UTC]

Well actually, they first start mixing Star up with Lilly when she's a teenager (when she's half of Lilly's height) and they think Lilly "de-aged" or something like that.
They're lucky it doesn't happen too often between them.

Yeah, he doesn't like to showoff in front of others and doesn't like cheating (he considers his speed cheating when having a race and when playing tag), so he just lowers his pace to match up with others.

Yep!
KatexHumphrey and LillyxGarth often have their family bonding time when they groom the pups (Star and Wildfire enjoy being groomed) so they can talk about what they've been doing and all that. Even Winston, Eve, and Tony groom their grandkids themselves sometimes!
Sometimes Marcel and Paddy drop by for visits with them but tend to take off (but not really leave the group) when the pups start getting playful as they don't want to be "eaten".

Yeah, they kinda fell in love at first sight of each other. So they decided to walk around the territory and talk about their personal interests, what they do and all that. Not to mention when Humphrey was giving her the tour, Hutch, Kate, and Claw went along with them.

By the way, any good ideas for the story yet?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-19 19:17:17 +0000 UTC]

So they start mixing Lilly up and Star once Star becomes a teen? Lol XD
Good thing it doesn't happen too often though hehe

That's good that Jet doesn't like to show off and cheat and that he goes easier on the others by slowing his pace.

Even Winston Tony and Eve groom their grandkids? Awwww that's so sweet. So nice that Marcel and Paddy visit them too and hilarious to see them fly into the air out of reach so they won't get eaten by the pups hehehe XD

Love at first sight? Classic :3

Hmmm.....how about something with Kate, Eve, Lilly, and Wildflower having a girl bonding time?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-20 13:44:53 +0000 UTC]

Yep, they do even though Lilly's twice the height of Star.

Yep, he's a "play by the rules" type of guy.

Yep, the grandparents even enjoy some bonding time with the pups. Sometimes Eve has little play-fights with them, but she's careful not to hurt them.
Yeah, that'd be comical to see Marcel and Paddy avoiding the playful pups. Marcel even crashes into Tony by mistake when he looks to see if the pups were still chasing him at one point. OOPS!

Yep, Wildflower fell in love with him because she liked the markings on his face and how mush of a good leader he is and Hutch fell in love with her because he liked how beautiful she looked. Their love was also increased when Hutch pushed Wildflower's hair back and commented on how beautiful she looked.

Hmm, I can agree with that. Maybe Wildfire, Star, and Lupa and join in too. (If they're born at that point)
What would they be talking about and wouldn't Claw probably be with them too?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-21 01:21:36 +0000 UTC]

Yeah since Lilly's older than Star she would be twice her height hehe

Nothing wrong with a playing by the rules kind of guy

Awwwww wrestle time with grandparents cute :3 Hahahaha! I can so see Marcel crashing into Tony by mistake while trying to avoid the pups chasing him hehehe XD

Awwwwwww that's so sweet :3

Yeah Claw would probably be with them too, maybe they would be talking teasing like about their mates?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-21 11:52:54 +0000 UTC]

LOL.

Yep. By the way, Wildfire enjoys play-hunting when not getting Caribou. Sometimes she sneaks up on one her friends or family members and pounces them from behind, she even does it to grandparents (including Eve) when they least expect it!

Well technically it's only Eve who play-wrestles with them.
Me too, not to mention Kate, Lilly, Hutch, Wildflower, and Claw were there too and saw the whole thing!
(Garth and Humphrey weren't there because they were hunting caribou [Yes Humphrey learned "some" Alpha skills in the story] and Winston and Eve were out on "the golf course" if you get what I mean. )

It certainly sounds like that, doesn't it?

OK, so what would they be talking/teasing about their mates?
Any other good ideas for the story?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-21 18:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Hehehe I can definetly imagine Wildfire sneaking up on people and pouncing them from behind surprising them when they least expect it XD

Awwwww cute that Eve play wrestles with them :3

You made Humphrey learn some Alpha skills? Awesome :3

Lol XD Winston and Eve golfing now that would be an interesting thing to see hehehee. I wonder if Tony goes golfing too sometimes lol

Maybe they would talk about annoying habits they have or something silly or embarrassing they did recently hehehe

How about a scene of Marcel Paddy Winston and Tony having a golfing tournament?

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-22 23:35:44 +0000 UTC]

Yep, she enjoys doing that.
She pounces Kate most of the time though since they have somewhat a strong connetion with each other.
(Star even pounces Lilly at one point in the story )

Yep. But she's careful not hurt the pups while doing it too.

Yep, Tony also plays Golf in the story too ya know.
And yes Winston and Tony use human reflexes when handling the club while playing it if you're wondering.

Hmm, that'd be different.

That'd be a great idea!
However, Paddy would actually be Marcel's caddy since he doesn't swing the club. Maybe Eve could be Winston's caddy and Garth could be Tony's during that too!

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-23 01:58:40 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwww so good Kate and her daughter have a strong connection and Lilly and her daughter have a strong connection :3

That's good, don't want the pups to get hurt after all :3

Cool :3 I figured they would use human reflexes for golfing :3

Paddy being Marcel's caddy I can see since it's like that in the film and I think Eve being Winston's caddy and Garth being Tony's is a great idea :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-23 12:17:22 +0000 UTC]

Yep.
Not to mention Humphrey and Jet have a strong connection and do Garth and Hunter!

Yep, Eve wouldn't want to "get in trouble with the parents" (as she doesn't seem to like Lilly and Kate being mad at her) if she hurt one of them by mistake.

Well, it's kinda obvious, isn't it?

Yeah, I thought It'd be a good idea too.
Not to mention Kate, Lilly, Hutch, Humphrey, Garth, Wildflower, Claw, and even Eve get a chance to swing the club too!

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-23 20:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Good to see Hunter and Garth having a good strong connection and Humphrey and Jet having one as well :3

Yeah i don't think she would want her daughters to be mad at her

Cool seeing Kate, Lilly, Hutch, Humphrey, Garth, Wildflower, and Claw golfing would be cool too

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-24 01:31:28 +0000 UTC]

Yep, not to mention the pups inherit some their abilites: Hunter is capable of doing the "log trick" Garth was working on for stalking prey, Star can do Lilly's turtle jokes as well as a couple different animal jokes, Wildfire has Kate's athletic/"ninja" abilities and Humphrey's human reflexes. and Jet has Humphrey's peacekeeper "expertice" and can do his log-sliding hobbie.

Yeah, just between you and me here, I think Eve's afraid of her daughters when they get mad in the story.

Yeah, I thought it'd be a good idea. However, just like Winston and Tony do, the use human reflexes while playing the game.

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-24 02:46:58 +0000 UTC]

Hunter, Star, Wildfire, and Jet inheriting those skills from their parents is an excellent idea :3

Lol XD Poor Eve

Yeah I figured they would use human reflexes while playing the game :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-24 06:10:52 +0000 UTC]

Yep, they have to inherit something besides their looks after all too.

Well, at least Kate and Lilly forgive her if she accidentaly hurts one of the pups.
But if Eve did kill one of their pups by mistake (this NEVER happens in the story) then Kate and Lilly would really flip out and probably almost kill her.

Well you were right.
By the way, in the story, Kate and Lilly both have a sweet spot. Lilly has hers on the stomach (just like my OCs Nunivat and Thunderbolt do) and Kate has hers just above the stomach but below the chest. Both of them roll onto their backs when they have the mood to be licked/stroked/scratched there.

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Also, while they were pregnant, Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower often lied on their backs to allow Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch to stroke/lick the pups, although it looks like they're actually stroking/licking their mates. Sometimes Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower even slept while on their backs while they were pregnant.
Sometimes Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch rest their heads on their stomachs to feel the pups kick. They even sometimes sleep with their heads on their mates' stomachs too. (which lead to the females sleeping on their backs)
Not to mention some things were different around Jasper while they were pregnant and while the pups where still just born, for example:
Humphrey had to take Kate's place during hunts (as her running would hurt the unborn pups and Kate had to stay to nurse Wildfire and Jet, luckily Humphrey learned his Alpha skills before she was pregnant )
The six of them skipped the Moonlight Howl most of the time. (As dancing would also hurt the unborn pups and they couldn't leave the helpless critters alone in the dens)
Humphrey, Garth, Hutch, and Eve were super-protective over Kate, Lilly, Wildflower, and the pups and stayed with them at almost all times.
Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower had walk slowly and needed to be helped over obstacles (like logs and rocks) while pregnant.
Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower stayed in their dens almost all day as they don't like to walk while carrying the pups in them and had to stay home to nurse them. (Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower also never left the dens when the pups were born until they were 8 weeks old)
Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch had to bring food for Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower while they were pregnant and with the newborn pups. (Garth even brings berries and nuts for Lilly at one point of the story after she asks him to! Why'd she ask THAT!? )
When Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower give birth, they do feel pain (they saw it coming), but they had help to stay calm, Humphrey and Eve helped Kate, Garth and Tony helped Lilly, and Hutch and Winston helped Wildflower.
The pups were born in this order: Wildfire, Aatu, Hunter, Jet, Ralph, Lupa, and Star. So Wildfire's the oldest out of her siblings/cousins and Star's the youngest.

But that's all the beginning of the life of a parent.
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What'cha think?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-26 01:27:34 +0000 UTC]

That's true, looks aren't the only things one inherits hehe

That's good Kate and Lilly would forgive Eve if she ever accidently hurt the pups but I can see why they would flip out if Eve killed them (Good thing that doesn't ever happen though)

You gave Lilly and Kate sweet spots too like Nunivat? Awesome idea :3

Comforting sweet spots during pregnancy how sweet :3 I especially like the idea of the soon to be fathers listening to the pups kick by listening to it from their mates tummies :3

Good thing Humphrey took over for Kate when it came to hunting as they wouldn't want anything to happen to the unborn pups

I can see why they would skip the dancing at the moonlight howls too as too much movement could really hurt the unborn puppies

I can definetly imagine Eve, Garth, Humphrey, and Hutch being overprotective of Lilly, Wildflower, and Kate during their pregnancy and staying with them at all times

I like the idea of them needing to be helped a lot too during their pregnancy as it's like that in real life too. Especially when dealing with trying to slowly and carefully step over obstacles in your way.

I also like the idea of the girls remaining inside the den most of their pregnancy and during the puppies first few weeks of life too and how you added the idea of the males bringing their mates their meals. You even adding the weird food craving thing for Lilly too hehehee XD

Good thing the girls had help remaining calm during the birthing process from their families :3

You put the order of the pups too from oldest to youngest? Awesome :3

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-27 02:32:42 +0000 UTC]

Yep, not just the looks, but the talents and prsonalities too!

LOL yeah.

Yep, I did. Not to mention Humphrey also has a sweet spot (on his neck).

Yep, I thought it was ironic when Humphrey and Garth were licking the pups that they were also licking their mates' sweet spots too.

Yeah, he knew if he was going to be a father, he would have to learn how to hunt. So he went Alpha school and learned hunting skills (with the comical results when he failed some of them such as going headfirst into a tree stump )

Yeah, but they went to the moonlight howl sometimes just to here the music or howl along (No dancing included). But when the pups were just born, Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower never went as they stayed with the pups all day and night until they were 8 weeks old.

Yeah, they were protective with them. Sometimes they got too overprotective with their mates and accidentally cause arguments with them. But the arguments don't last long as the males quickly apologize for being too overprotctive.

Yeah, whenever Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower went for a walk while pregnant, their mates stayed with them at all times to make sure the pups don't get hurt.

Yeah the females didn't like to walk while carrying their kids. But they had to move around so they don't "lose their ability to walk" when the pups are old enough to leave the dens.

Yeah, Garth and the other males even let their mates hold their paws to help stay calm too. Not to mention Kate nearly juiced the blood out of Humphrey's paw at that time too.

Yep the pups were born in that order. That also means Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower went into labor at almost the exact same time too.
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By the way, in another part of the story, Star attempts a dangerous stunt (which was to cross a narrow log over raging river) to impress her parents, but being an omega, she only got as far as halfway until she loses her footing and slips, being forced to hold onto the log with her forelegs. Claw, Wildfire, Jet, and Hunter were watching her from nearby and were shocked when Star lost her grip, and Jet (being the fastest) ran off the get help while Claw, Wildfire, and Hunter tried to save Star. Hunter climbs onto the log and grabs his sister's forepaw as she loses her grip on the log, then Hunter starts to fall and Wildfire grabs onto him, but he accidentally releases his grip on Star, causing the young wolf to fall into the raging river, forcing Hunter, Wildfire, and Claw to go after her. Meanwhile, Jet finds Lilly and Kate and tells them about what happened and he leads them to the river. Meanwhile, Star has grabbed onto a small branch and is holding onto it for dear life and Claw, having found a long stick, attempts to hook onto the branch, she succeeds and pulls in the branch, but Star loses her grip again and Wildfire (who has a vine tied around her) jumps into the river to save Star and grabs Star by her neck scruff. Then Hunter (who's holding onto the other end of the vine Wildfire's tied to) pulls in the girls and manages to get them onto dry land with Claw's help. Star thanks her cousin for saving her and then Lilly comes up in shock asking Star if she was okay and Star says that she's fine. Later on in Winston and Eve's den, Lilly is grooming Star and Kate is grooming Wildfire (as their fur was a bit of a mess after they "went for a swim"), Garth and Humphrey are also there and Garth gently scolds Star for attempting to cross the river as it wasn't safe, Star sadly apologizes and states that she just wanted to impress him and Lilly. Lilly tells Star that she understands what Star was trying to do, but she doesn't want Star to do anything like it because she's afraid to lose her. Then Winston and Eve come in (they were out golfing... again) and notice the sad look on Star's face and ask what was wrong. Wildfire (who's still being groomed by Kate) tells her grandparents what Star tried to do and Winston and Eve are disappointed by this and Star says that she wants to be alone and walks out of the den and lies down on the ledge in front of the doorway in sadness (Star's hair also falls in front of her face but she ignores it) as she watches the clouds go by. Then Lilly exits the den and lies down next to Star, who takes a glance at Lilly and turns her head away from her. Lilly looks toward Star and notices her hair is covering her face, then she moves Star's hair out of her face with her paw and Star slightly turns her head toward Lilly and the older white wolf gives her a lick as a sign that she still loves her and Star begins to have a small chat with Lilly.
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What'cha think?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-27 23:36:32 +0000 UTC]

Humphrey has a sweet spot on his neck? Awwwww

Yeah that is a little ironic that when Humphrey and Garth are licking their wives sweet spots they are also licking their pups too in a way hehe

Awwwww poor Humphrey fails at his first tries at Alpha School

Very good protective mates making sure they're wives didn't get hurt when they went out for walks while they were pregnant :3

That's good Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower stayed with their pups until they were old enough to be left alone for a little while when it came to the moonlight howls

Yeah I imagine they would at least need to stretch their legs when it came to the not wanting to lose their ability to walk thing lol

Yeah I can see all the of mates getting into little arguments but it not lasting long since they realize they were just being overprotective 'cause they care :3

Lol XD Sounds like Kate must've squeezed Humphrey's paw a little too hard when he let his mate hold his paw to calm her during the birthing process lol

Wow talk about excitement with Star trying to show off failing and falling into the river and needing to be rescued by the others huh? I do feel kinda bad for her as she was only trying to impress her family even if it did result in disaster but she learned her lesson from it though which is a good thing

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-28 12:42:07 +0000 UTC]

Yep, he does.

Yeah, it certainly was ironic there.
However, Wildflower was the only one of the females who didn't have the sweet spot on her stomach, instead she had it below her right ear.

Yeah, he fails on most of his first tries. But he manages to succeed in learning them and after Humphrey finished Alpha school, he wanted to show/surprise Kate and he did that by pouncing her from a nearby bush and pinning his mate on her back. (this was before Humphrey "did" Kate if you get my point)

Yeah, the females don't mind having company from them. And to pass the time, they sometimes talk with each other about different things.

Yeah, they didn't want anything to happen to their pups, so thay stayed all day and night in their dens with them after they were born, not to mention their mates also slept with them and the pups to keep them company too.

Yeah, even though they hated to walk with the pups in them, they had to stretch their legs every hour or so to stay used to standing and walking.

Yeah, the females understood that Humphrey, Garth, and Wildflower cared for them, but sometimes they needed some "personal space" when the males were getting too protective. But when they argued, they kept their voice tones low so that way the pups wouldn't learn how to argue.

I'll bet you can imagine Humphrey's expression when she squeezed his paw too hard too, huh? However, the other males had more luck than Humphrey because their mates were omegas (and omegas are not quite as strong as alphas).

Yeah, Star wanted to impress her parents by showing that she could be an Alpha (she liked being an omega more though) by crossing the log. I also feel bad that she also got scolded for the disaster by falling off the log, but she did learn her lesson. By the way, Lilly was shocked about what happened when Jet told her and ran toward the location seemingly faster that Jet and after she reached the area, she was still in shock but relieved to see her daughter was still alive. Later on when Garth scolded her for doing that stunt, he couldn't resist taking it easy on Star as she looked just as cute/beautiful as Lilly did and he didn't like to see her with a sad face.

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On another part of the story, Kate and Wildfire are taking a walk and then Wildfire tells Kate she hears danger and alerts her about a hornet nest above her head (she techinically was playing around). Kate congradulates her on that and then says she SEES danger (refering to Wildfire) and says that she shouldn't be too much trouble and tough to deal with, then Wildfire playfully tells Kate that she could be plenty of trouble and starts play-fightng with Kate, on one section, she manages to grab Kate the top of her head, but the older wolf just tilts her head, causing Wildfire to lose her balance and the gold-red wolf falls onto her back, then Kate tickles her in the stomach with her nose. Then Humphrey comes in and says "Hey! That's MY job!" Then Kate says that it was a shame since she beat him to it. Then Humphrey pretends to be mad (he's playing around) and tackles Kate, pinning her on her back. Then rolls over, pinning Humphrey on his back, then they two keep doing that process and it leads to them rolling down a hill with Wildfire giving chase to them. The rolling finally ends when the two wolves go airborne for a moment and Humphrey finally pins Kate on her back and she admits that he "won the fight".
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What'cha think?

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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-01-29 17:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Wildflower's sweet spot is on her ear? Cool

Good thing Humphrey eventually gets the alpha training right and so cute for him to surprise her by pinning her

Yes I can imagine Humphrey's eyes really wide and having his teeth clenched in complete pain as Kate squeezes his paw too hard lol XD

The other mates were lucky to have Omegas for mates hehe

Sounds like you got the idea of the beehive danger alert from Bambi 2 right? but very cute

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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-30 01:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Technically, it's below her right ear, not on it.

Yeah, I thought it'd be cute if he pounced Kate to show he learned Alpha skills.

Yeah, his expression would so look like Diego's when Ellie was holding onto his paw from Ice Age 3. Even though Humphrey learned Alpha skills there, he still isn't strong enough to bare Kate grip.

Yeah, they were lucky. Poor Humphrey.

Yeah, I got the bonding time scene between Kate and Wildfire from Bambi 2. I also got the part where they started playing with each other where Wildfire grabbed Kate's head and she dropped the younger wolf on her back and tickled her stomach with her nose that movie too.
I also got the part where Kate and Humphrey go rolling down the hill and him pinning her a the bottom from the Lion King.

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