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Okay here is an illustration based upon an rp scene from a Alpha and Omega/Emperor's New School Cross-over between Josh and I over at the Disney Role-Play World.In this scene Humphrey sneaks up behind Kate and pounces her down
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FaPingMulan In reply to ??? [2011-01-31 03:13:55 +0000 UTC]
Right, below right ear got it lol
Yeah I figured you got it from Bambi 2 and cool idea adding the lion king inspiration scene too
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-01-31 07:13:52 +0000 UTC]
Yep, right there.
For the others, Hutch has his on the chest and Garth's is on the bac of his head.
It's kinda apparent there that Hutch would have to lie on his back to allow Wildflower to access it, huh?
Yeah, I thought there could a mother/daughter bonding moment so I decided to copy something off a movie I saw. I though I'd give Kate a playful side and I can just see Kate tickling Wildfire's stomach with her nose like the Great Prince did to Bambi, can't you?
By the way, I just made pics of Wildfire and Star, Kate and Lilly's daughters.
Think I should post'em?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-01 18:46:41 +0000 UTC]
Hutch has one on his chest and Garth's is on the back of his head? Cool :3
Yep it sure is :3
Yeah a mother and daughter bonding moment is so sweet and yes I can totally see it :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-01 23:28:35 +0000 UTC]
Yep, both their sweet spots are right there!
I also got the part with Humphrey and Kate rolling down the hill from the Lion King where Simba and Nala went down the hill too.
Yeah, it is kinda cute. I'll bet you can see them having that bonding time more easily since you know how Wildfire looks now, huh?
Shame Humphrey "ruined all the fun" and tackled/pinned Kate, huh?
To tell the truth, that's actually the 2nd time he pins Kate because when he first did that, he did it to show Kate he learned alpha skills by stalking and then pouncing her, catching Kate off guard and pinning his mate on her back. The second time was when he tackled her while she was playing with Wildfire, then Kate pins him back by rolling into him, leading to the third time Humphrey pinned her when they accidentally rolled down the hill when Humphrey tried to pin her again after she pinned him back and he finally succeeded when they reached the bottom (with Wildfire giving chase) and "straps" her legs to the ground with his own to keep her from pinning him back again.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-01 23:46:36 +0000 UTC]
Yeah bad humphrey ruins bonding moment lol
The second time he pinned her sounds great :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-01 23:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Well, he just wanted in on the fun. He is a fun loving Omega after all and he couldn't resist it.
Yeah, Humphrey pinned Kate to get in on the fun she and Wildfire were having, then she pinned him back by rolling onto him, and then he tried to pin her again, but they end up rolling down a hill and Humphrey finally pins Kate back and "straps" her legs to the ground with his own to keep her from pinning him back again.
There's also a bonding moment between Lilly and Star, but I you could help me with that part.
And let's just hope Garth doesn't ruin it.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-02 00:29:27 +0000 UTC]
Yep he's a fun loving omega alright :3
Awwwww
I hope Garth doesn't ruin their bonding moment either hehehe
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-02 01:54:50 +0000 UTC]
And he couldn't resist wanting to join the fun Wildfire and Kate were havin'.
That cute huh?
You'd most likely to expect Kate to with the "pinning fight" but apparently she's powerless against Humphrey's new alpha skills.
Yep, so how do you think the bonding moment between Lilly and Star should go?
Also, every story needs a beginning. For that part, I was thinking Kate and Humphrey could go log sledding when they first appear, and when they go down the hill (Kate's in front of Humphrey on the log), they shortly encounter Lilly and Garth walking and Kate warns them to get out of the way and they manage to avoid colliding. Garth (finding the log sled thing to be kinda fun), gives chase to the log with Lilly following. They manage to reach the log and jump in (Garth lands in behind Humphrey and Lilly lands in front of Kate), they later see Hutch and Claw walking by and warn them too. After nearly getting turned into roadkill, Claw chases after them with Hutch, wanting to teach the four wolves to "look before they go riding the log". However, after catching up with the log, Hutch trips and crashes into Claw, causing the both of them to go rolling into the log (right behind Garth) and they nearly fall out, but Garth grabs Claw who grabs Hutch to save them and pulls them back onto the log. Then the group of six go down the hill and get a "big air" jump and the log crashes down right in front of the cliff to Winston and Eve's den, catching multiple wolves including Winston, Eve, and Tony by surprise.
What'cha think so far?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-02 04:14:59 +0000 UTC]
Yep I guess Kate is powerless against Humphrey's new alpha skills hehe
Hmmm...
How about Star is lying in the grass looking up at the night sky in complete silence lost in her own thoughts.
She hears something jumps up slightly startled and walks towards where the sound came from before she is surprised by being pounced on by her mother who giggles.
She gets off her daughter and Star playfully growls before chasing her mother who is running through the grass from her daughter laughing.
Star manages to catch her and pounce her mom saying "I got you!" before her mom smiles proud of her daughter and leans up nuzzling her
what do you think?
I think that sounds like a great beginning for the story :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-02 12:56:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, even though Kate is still more stronger, agile, and talented than Humphrey even though he has alpha skills, she doesn't stand a chance against him when he pins her.
Aww, how cute! I like it!
I'll bet that Star was lying on her back when she was looking at the night sky like Simba was watching the stars from the Lion King, huh?
I'm also guessing when Star got pounced, she got pinned on her back by Lilly and when she pounced lilly back, the older white wolf got pinned on her back too, didn't she?
Yeah, I think so too. How do you think the part after they crashed in front of the cliff to Winston and Eve's den should go?
By the way, Lilly developed a strong bond with Star after she was born, their bond grew stronger when Lilly tried to cheer up Star from feeling guilty after she attempted to cross the raging river over the narrow log. Nowadays throughout the story, Lilly and Star are pretty much seen together most of the time due to that bond.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-02 18:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Nope I guess she doesn't stand a chance lol
Yep she sure was ;3
Yep she pinned Lilly on her back too lol
Awwwwww that's good that the bond between Lilly and Star is so strong :3
Hmmmm....I think at first Winston and Eve would've been freaked out from the front of the cliff of Winston and Eve's den crashing. Then after recovering from the scare and shock I think that they would've punished the others for doing something so reckless.
What do you think?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-03 12:58:51 +0000 UTC]
Yep, even though Kate's more trained than Humphrey is, she always loses to him in every play fight they have. Just unlucky I guess, but she doesn't mind losing to her mate.
Thought that was a reference to Simba watching the stars in the Lion King.
Thought so. Cute to see Lilly get playfully pounced by her own daughter, I can so see that now.
Yeah, it's like they're BFFs for life even though they're mother and daughter.
Hmm, well I wouldn't want them to be punished early in the story.
But when log entered the area, no one was in the path of the log, the wolves were about 5 feet away from it and Winston, Eve, and Tony were on top of the cliff. When log entered the area, it was slowing down, but it hit a large rock instead of the cliff and everyone in it still went flying when it crashed. Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch hit the ground (they landed on the cliff in front of Winston and Eve's den) first and caught the females as they came down. Garth caught Lilly first, then Humphrey caught Kate, and Hutch caught Claw. Winston, Eve, and Tony were slightly shocked by this but were "amazed" when Humphrey, Garth, and Claw caught the females.
What'cha think?
I improved it a bit to avoid the six of them being punished for the log ride.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-04 02:54:23 +0000 UTC]
Nope she loves Humphrey so of course she doesn't mind losing to him :3
I think the log ride sounds much better and with it happening this way I would see no reason why they would need to be punished with it happening this way :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-04 10:07:26 +0000 UTC]
Yep, she loves Humphrey so she doesn't care wether she loses or not. The play fights mostly always end with Humphrey pinning Kate on her back and "straping" her to the ground no matter what tactic she uses!
Yeah, I didn't want them to get punished early in the story because of that, so I had the males rescuing Kate, Lilly, and Claw when they fell after the log crashed.
Not to be rude, but I did expect a reply to these "lines" too. But you don't have to reply to them if you don't what to.
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Thought that was a reference to Simba watching the stars in the Lion King.
Thought so. How cute it'd be to see Lilly get playfully pounced by her own daughter, I can so see that now.
Yeah, it's like they're BFFs for life even though they're mother and daughter.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-05 02:52:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah having the males save the girls works for them not to get into trouble :3
Yep it was a Lion King reference from the scene where Simba is watching the stars.
Yep Lilly being pounced by her own daughter is very cute :3
That's cool that they are bffs while being mother and daughter.
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-05 08:25:42 +0000 UTC]
Yep. At least they get to do a small rescue at the beginning though!
Though so. I can so see Star lying on her back and watching the stars now.
Indeed it is...
Yep, Lilly and Star have a close connection like Balto has one with Kodi from Balto 3!
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By the way, I have about two chapters of the Alpha and Omega 2 fanfic done here and Wildflower appears in the second. I'm almost done with Chapter 3 though, I just need a scene between the moment after Hutch pushes back Wildflower's fur and before Humphrey and Winston tell Wildflower that she and Hutch were allowed to mate since the social rule was demolished. Any ideas there?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-05 18:20:08 +0000 UTC]
Lilly and Star have a close connection like Balto and Kodi? Awesome
I thought you were going to have Hutch show Wildflower around the territory before that happened?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-07 23:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Yep, not to mention Star often looks up to Lilly for help and guidance when in need of it.
There's also a scene where Garth teaches his son Hunter things he knows to help him with his hunting abilities (The scene is similar to Balto's flashback with young Kodi as he was teaching him things he knew).
Well, yes. I was.
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On one part, after Hutch pushes Wildflower's fur out of her face, she asks him if he's an alpha and he says that he is. Much to Wildflower's saddness (She manages to hide it) as she thinks she can't mate with because she didn't know the social rule between alphas and omegas was demolished, then Wildflower "dissappears" the next day and Hutch gets worried as he noticed she was trying hide something when he told her he was an alpha and thinks he offended her. So he goes looking for her along with Humphrey and Winston, they find her lying down on a small ledge and Hutch decides to let Humphrey talk to her as he thinks she's still mad at him. Then Humphrey asks Wildflower what was wrong and she says that she's in love with Hutch, but she feels she can't "marry" him because of the social rule between Alphas and Omegas mating. But Her misunderstanding is cleared up when Humphrey, Winston, and Hutch tell her the story about Winston and Tony demolishing the social rule to allow Lilly and Garth to mate in order to unite the packs, after hearing this Wildflower is overjoyed and tackles Hutch out of excitement, happyness, and love, knocking the dark gray wolf onto his back with her on top of him and they "kiss" for the first time as Humphrey and Winston watch and Wiston comments on Hutch being his new son-in-law. Then after the "kiss", Hutch asks Wildflower out to the Moonlight Howl and Wildflower happily accepts and "kisses" Hutch again.
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Well what do you know, I filled in that gap myself without even knowing it again! LOL!
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-08 01:45:13 +0000 UTC]
That's good that Star goes to her mother for guidance and good to see Garth teaching his son hunting abilites.
I love the gap bit you added but I have a question wouldn't Hutch be a beta not an alpha?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-08 12:14:26 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, that's just one of the things Star and Lilly do since they have that strong bond.
Yep, Garth enjoys teaching his son how to hunt alright.
Well, yes.
But technically, there was no mention of beta wolves in alpha and omega, but Winston did say there were a lot of alphas in the pack by telling Hutch to put all alphas on alert, and after Hutch says he already did it, it shows a bunch of wolves looking around from all over the place as if guarding something. So that's why I consider Hutch an alpha and not a beta.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-09 03:48:03 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay I see. That makes sense :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-09 12:09:15 +0000 UTC]
So, any good ideas for my A&O 2 or Balto 4 story yet?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-09 16:53:07 +0000 UTC]
No not at the moment sorry
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-10 11:43:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's a shame.
Did you read Chapter 8 of the fanfic I found?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-10 23:19:35 +0000 UTC]
Well, what'd ya think?
Kinda cute how Garth got Lilly that red and white flower, huh?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-10 23:23:16 +0000 UTC]
I loved it :3
Yes it was very cute when Garth gave Lilly the red and white flower :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-12 00:30:00 +0000 UTC]
Same here.
Yeah, it was cute. I can so see Lilly wearing that flower now.
Nice of Garth to return it to her when she lost it too.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-12 00:34:11 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I can see her wearing it too
Yep very nice of Garth to return it to her when she lost it
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-12 11:33:44 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, maybe you should do a pic of Lilly wearing the flower yourself!
Yeah, he may look like the ignorrant type, but he's a really good guy.
This is how I portray the flower Garth gives her:
-->[link] <-- But to me, I think it should have more white than red.
So, any good ideas for my A&O 2 or Balto 4 stories?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-12 18:40:20 +0000 UTC]
Well I think maybe you should draw it. It would add more to your gallery lol xD
For Balto 4 how about a scene with Josh healing a patient like one of the members of the Balto family?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-15 12:27:55 +0000 UTC]
OK.
Cool, I'll take it. But what about A&O2?
Check out this pic a friend of mine made!
--> [link] <--
I also have more added to my A&O story, this is part of "Chapter 4: New Couple" in my fanfic:
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However, on one part of the story, Humphrey, Garth, and Hutch are waiting for Kate, Lilly, and Wildflower at Howling Rock. To pass the time, Garth makes a bet that if lilly comes over the hill first, then he calls howling before Humphrey and Hutch. The other two boys take the bet and say if Kate walks up first, Humphrey calls the "first howl" and if Wildflower comes first, then Hutch calls it. The females soon arrive and Kate comes over the hill first (meaning Humphrey won the bet) with Lilly and Wildflower following. Then the three boys stare at the girls walk up lovingly, then out nowhere, Humphrey slowly wraps his forelegs around Garth while watching Kate. Then Garth slowly pushes Humphrey off him while still watching Lilly and Humphrey falls to the ground, but he gets back up quickly and resumes watching Kate. Then he and Garth feel something hit them in the back of their heads and look see Hutch made the hit and tells them not to keep Kate and Lilly waiting and he walks off and Garth and Humphrey follow. Then the girls finally reach their mates and each goes off in their own direction, Kate and Humphrey go one way, Lilly and Garth go another way, and Hutch and Wildflower go another.
Later on during that same scene, Wildflower and Hutch sit at a small ledge about 1/4 or halfway up Howling Rock, Hutch asks Wildflower if she wants to howl first, but she lets him go since she's nervous and doesn't think she'll do well. Hutch takes her choice and howls first, to which Wildflower's amazed. Then Wildflower (feeling confident now), howls too and Hutch thinks of her voice as an angel's when she howls. Then he joins her and they form a duet which causing all the wolves around the area (including Kate, Humphrey, Garth, and Lilly) to stop howling and watch Hutch and Wildflower. After the duet, Hutch and Wildflower look at each other in the eyes, but the moment is broken when they look to see the entire pack cheering for them and Wildflower blushes a bit. Then Hutch comments on Wildflower's howl being beautiful, which makes her blush more. Later on in a small clearing, Hutch and Wildflower are on their backs watching the stars (one of Wildflower's hobbies) and after Wildflower comments the sky being beautiful tonight, Hutch accidentally refers to Wildflower as beautiful and stammers nervously as he corrects himself, then he closes his muzzle with his forepaws to avoid saying anything embarrissing and he blushes a bit. Wildflower accepts Hutch's "apology" and licks him on the side of his face, then Hutch looks toward Wildflower and sees she has a mischievous look on her face, which concerns him. Then Wildflower swiftly bumps Hutch with forepaw and says "Tag! You're it!" and Hutch laughs, giving chase to Wildflower. Then after dodging multiple trees, logs, and rocks, Hutch jumps and tackles Wildflower, causing the pair to roll down a hill, after reaching the bottom, Wildflower lands on her back with Hutch on top of her, both laughing from playing. The two slowly fall into silence upon seeing the predicamnt they're in, but neither of them move (nor do they want to) and the look into each other's eyes, enjoying the moment they're in.
Note: During the moonlight howl, each of the females had a flower in their fur, Kate was wearing the purple one had in the movie, Lilly was wearing a red and white one Garth got her, and Wildflower was wearing a blue one. The flowers also had the same design, but were all different in color. During the scene where Wildflower and Hutch were watching the stars and playing tag, Wildflower still had the blue flower she was wearing in her fur.
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What'cha think?
P.S. I'm expecting comments for the pic link and the fanfic idea I showed you. Don't worry about the rest.
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-16 04:49:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh that pic was made for you? I didn't know that. I am a part of an Alpha and Omega group here on DA so I actually saw the picture and favorited it before I saw your message telling me about it lol XD
The picture looks great too by the way.
I absolutely loved the stuff you added to your previous idea of this chapter, it helps bring a lot more life to the chapter and brings more atmosphere to it and completes it nicely.
I like the title you picked for it as well. Matches the chapter perfectly.
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-16 12:33:52 +0000 UTC]
No, no, no, you silly goose. That pic wasn't made for me. It was just a pic someone wanted to post here. I just wanted to show it to you.
Thanks, but it's not mine.
Thanks. I thought after Hutch and Wildflower have their first kiss that they should howl together during the moonlight howl. I included the scenes where they were watching the stars, playing tag, and looking into each other's eyes after rolling down the hill to make it more interesting.
Thanks, that title sure does match the chapter indeed.
I take you noticed a couple of these "scenes":
--- When Humphrey hugged Garth and he pushed him off, neither of them looked at each other, they were too "hypnotized" by how beautiful their mates looked when they walked up and couldn't stop to turn their heads until Hutch hits them.
After the scene on who would get to howl before the others, Kate came over the hill first, so Humphrey won the bet.
Hutch is shown to be playful when he chases Wildflower while playing tag. I just wanted Hutch to have a fun-loving side there.
Kate was wearing her purple flower during the moonlight howl scene, but she wasn't the only one, Lilly and Wildflower were wearing flowers too. Wildflower was wearing a blue one, and Lilly was wearing a red flower with a white border on the petals.
When Hutch accidentally refers to Wildflower as beautiful while they're watching the stars, his tries to correct the mistake he made and closes his muzzle with his paws after the correction, this is also one of the first times he shows embarrissment.
The scene where Hutch and Wildflower go down the hill and hit the bottom is similar to the scene where Simba and Nala roll down the hill in the Lion King.
After reaching the bottom of the hill, Wildflower ends up pinned on her back with Hutch on top of her. It takes them a moment to realize the situation they're in, but neither of them want to move after figuring out as they're enjoying that moment.
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So, any good ideas for my A&O fanfic?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-16 18:40:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh so you're friend was inspired to make her own OC then?
Anyway you're friend did a great job on that pic regardless lol.
Awwwww cute that you show Hutch having both a playful side and an embarrassed side of him since you don't really see either of those in the film.
I like the color of the flowers you gave the girls too
And the scene for Hutch and Wildflower inspired by Lion King is really sweet too.
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-16 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]
You could say that. But she told me she made it before I posted my pic of Star.
Yeah, I thought there should've been a "slight" change in Hutch's personality, so gave him a playful and embarrissing side too. There's also a change in the other characters' personalities too. Kate and Garth are more playful and less strict, and Humphrey and Lilly are more serious and strict (Lilly's still a funny omega and Humphrey's still a fun-lover though)
Yeah, I thought the ideas were great too.
I thought Kate should've been wearing the purple one since she had it in the "first" movie and I gave Lilly the red and white one 'cause I was inspired by the fanfic where Garth it for her.
During the earlier chapter, "Chapter 3: Hutch meets his Match", Hutch picked the blue flower for Wildflower because he thought it would "bring out her eyes". Wildflower's eyes are blue after all.
This scene took place just before Wildflower "disappeared" and Hutch went searching for her with Winston and Humphrey. This chapter also has the scene where Hutch pushed Wildflower's fur back, revealing her eyes and facial markings for the first time and where Wildflower first meets Winston, Eve, Tony, Marcel, and Paddy for the first time too.
Yeah, I wanted them to have love moment there so I added that. Just shows what can happen when you ideas from movies, video games, books, and fanfics, huh?
Any other good ideas for my A&O or Balto 4 fanfic so far?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-17 01:34:46 +0000 UTC]
Yes but there is nothing wrong with adding small changes to the characters personalities it makes them more 3 Dimensional and more well rounded :3
Yep shows that you really can get ideas from anywhere.
Is there a scene in the fanfic where the puppies go to their first moonlight howls yet?
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-17 12:25:34 +0000 UTC]
Yep, not to mention Winston and Tony are more like friends instead of rivals now, Eve is more kind and friendly and kind (especially with Wildfire, Star, and the others) and doesn't show her aggressive side a lot, Lilly has some of Eve's aggressive personallity (as when she said that evil line out of anger when her pups disappeared), and Winston and Tony become great friends/companions with MArcel and Paddy.
Yep, it sure does.
Way ahead of you there, Katie.
During that scene (and I'm not sure if I told you this already), Garth and Lilly are grooming their pups (Garth is grooming Star and Lilly's grooming Hunter) then after Garth finishes, he finds something missing scratches the back of his head, then he "remembers" and pulls out a pink flower in same design as Kate's from his mane and puts it in Star's fur, Str thanks her father for the flower and runs off with Hunter to hhowling rock. Meanwhile Kate and Humphrey are also grooming their pups, (Kate is grooming Jet and Humphrey is grooming Wildfire) then Humphrey finishes grooming Wildfire, but he doesn't find how she looks "good enough" and he pulls out a flower from his mane, also in the same design as Kate's, only it's yellow in color, and puts it Wildfire's fur. Wildfire thanks Humphrey for grooming her and runs of with Jet to howling rock, then Eve comes in to groom Kate for the moonlight howl, and when she finishes, Kate still has the purple flower walks out with Humphrey as Lilly also enters the den to groomed and comes out wearing the same red and white flower Garth got her. Then she and Garth leave and reach howling rock to see Kate, Humphrey, Wildfire, Jet, Star, and HUnter waiting for them, then Wildflower comes up (also wearing the blue flower Hutch picked for her) and Hutch comes up too, along with their pups and their daughter, Lupa, is also wearing a flower (I was thinking the flower could be white, but you can decide too. )
This is far as I got in that part of the story, I don't suppose you got ideas for the rest, don't you?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-18 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Yea Tony and Winston wouldn't be rivals anymore and Eve would be more kind and friendly too most likely.
And it doesn't surprise me that Winston and Tony would become good friends with Parcel and Maddy either :3
Oh yes I remember you told me about that scene now lol XD
Any other ideas?
No sorry I don't have any....
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-19 01:47:24 +0000 UTC]
Yep, they're buddies now.
You can thank Kate and Lilly's pups for her more friendly and kind behavior on that part.
I can tell since Winston and Tony play golf in my fanfic, so it's obvious they'd become campanions with Marcel and Paddy since they taught them how to golf.
You called Paddy "Maddy" there for moment.
Thought I told about that one.
Oh, that's a shame.
But I have more info on my OCs (Only Kate and Lilly's pups though). Just read the "files" below.
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WILDFIRE: Like Kate, she's strict and responsible about most of her duties
Just like Humphrey, she's also a fun-lover
She sometimes can't control her playful side and it goes "loose"
Like Humphrey, she's also skilled in human reflexes and usually shows them more often than Humphrey does
Wildfire hates to get dirty, but enjoys being groomed
Wildfire often looks up to her mother and is shown to hang out with her alot, showing that they have a strong bond
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STAR: She has a kind, caring, and loving behavior just like Lilly
She's also a bit of a daredevil and is strict and responsible about some things like her father, Garth
She has this "ability" where she makes herself look as cute in front of someone as possible sometimes to get attention or distract enemies while her allies escape or attack, this tactic succeeds most of the time
She often looks to the bright side of things, no matter how glum or disasterous it may be and she sometimes triey to cheer up someone by telling jokes or doing impressions
Star has some of her grandmother's (Eve's) aggressive attitude, but doesn't let this loose unless she is forced to fight or if she gets very dirty (she flips out when that happens)
Star is also pretty good at swimming and enjoys being in water
Star is also a "neat freak" as she enjoys being groomed and likes any kind of way to be clean
Star's also strongly attached to her mother, Lilly, and can often be "seen" with her
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JET: Jet is a fun-lover like Humphrey and often hangs out with him
He has a strong sence of responsibility and will try to help others, like Kate
Jet is super fast when running at high speed, which is about as fast as Sonic the Hedgehog, which answers how he got his name.
Even though an omega, Jet has some Alpha skills
Jet often hangs out with Humphrey and playing his games/sports like log-sledding, showing that like Wildfire & Kate, they also have a strong bond
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HUNTER: Hunter gets his name from how much of a great hunter he is (as he can take down and kill a caribou in 2.5 seconds all at once)
He is responsible about his duties and is into fitness like his father, Garth
Hunter also has a soft/caring side thanks to Lilly, and he often shows that side when he needs to help or comfort someone
Hunter like to train to pass the time, but will play with friends and/or family when bored
He also cares a lot for his little sister, Star
At first in early age, Hunter wasn't so good at hunting and felt he should quit Alpha training, but his father, Garth, encouraged him to go on and taught him his secrets. Thereby, forming a bond with one another
Hunter also has a superhuman level of interior physical strength and can easily hold up 5 to 7 bears without breaking a sweat, this is "shown" when he breaks a public telephone by ripping it off its post and throwing it in my fanfic just like Alex did in Madagascar. He even hits his head on a rock and breaks it without feeling pain in my fanfic too.
He's definitly not the kind of guy you want to anger or be around when he's mad due to his super-strength. Luckily he doesn't stay mad for very long as can easily control his temper.
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What'cha think?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-20 19:33:48 +0000 UTC]
I called him Maddy? Whoops my bad xD
I love all the other pieces you added to Wildfire, Hunter, Jet, and Star it gives a lot more insight to their personalities as well as some other info that helps them stand out and become unique like characters, well done.
I like the different colored bullets you used for each of them too by the way :3
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-20 22:04:00 +0000 UTC]
"Whoops" indeed.
Thanks. Which facts for each one do you like the most?
Thanks.
I gave them those bullets since they match their fur.
Wildfire got the since her fur is somewhat red,
I gave Star the since it matches her fur,
Jet got the since his fur is mainly black,
and Hunter's fur think has some orange in it which is why he got the .
And guess what, I finally made a pic of Jet and posted it!
Here he is: [link]
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-20 22:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah I kinda figured the bullets matched the characters lol
Yes I just saw it. I will go post a comment to it :3
My favorites are the facts in general for example Hunter taking down caribou in 2.5 secs or can hold up to 5 to 7 bears without breaking a sweat lol
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-20 22:35:23 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I even use different bullets for the other characters as well:
I use for Kate since she seems to "have a fire" in her, and I always picture the elemental symbol for fire to be red
I use for Lilly since (just like Star) it matches her fur color
I use for Humphrey since it matches his eyes
I use for Garth since he's eyes are green as well
I use for Hutch since his mane and tail are black
I use for Wildflower since her fur is pink
Okay, I'll send you a reply!
Cool. Hunter does have super-strength in my fanfic alright.
But what about the other facts on Star, Wildfire, and Jet?
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FaPingMulan In reply to DarthGoldstar710 [2011-02-20 22:45:13 +0000 UTC]
You use different colored bullets for the other characters as well? Awesome :3
Wildfire= uses human reflexes a lot like her father and hates to be dirty (just because the second one amused me hehehe)
Star= ability to make herself look cute as a distraction (totally amused me hehe)
Jet= super fast running speed like sonic the hedgehog
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DarthGoldstar710 In reply to FaPingMulan [2011-02-20 23:26:01 +0000 UTC]
Yep, I use different colored bullets for the other characters as well. Yeah Wildfire is capable of human reflexes like her father, not to mention she shows them/pulls them off more often than Humphrey does. Yeah, she doesn't like to get dirty as it messes up her fur.
Yeah, she kinda reminds me of Puss in boots from the Shrek movies when she pulls off the cuteness look. You know, when Puss does the "big eyes"?
Yeah, Jet's a superfast runner, so he'll easily win races. But he's fair to others and will slow down to give them a chance to catch up.
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FaPingMulan In reply to ??? [2011-01-21 18:27:07 +0000 UTC]
Hehehe I can definetly imagine Wildfire sneaking up on people and pouncing them from behind surprising them when they least expect it XD
Awwwww cute that Eve play wrestles with them :3
You made Humphrey learn some Alpha skills? Awesome :3
Lol XD Winston and Eve golfing now that would be an interesting thing to see hehehee. I wonder if Tony goes golfing too sometimes lol
Maybe they would talk about annoying habits they have or something silly or embarrassing they did recently hehehe
How about a scene of Marcel Paddy Winston and Tony having a golfing tournament?
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SurfsUp07 In reply to ??? [2011-01-05 01:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Haha! They're copying off Simba and Nala's pouncing from the movie XDD
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