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Missvirginia [2014-01-21 15:24:31 +0000 UTC]

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You've definitely had some obvious improvement. I'm sure you're proud. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Though one thing that sticks out to me is that you appear to be pillow shading--there's not apparent light source to your recent drawing. For example, the shadow on the nose is telling me the light is coming from the right, however her body is not casting a shadow on the left arm or left sides of her legs. And the hair appears to be in global light yet the rest of the body doesn't show that at all. You see what I mean? There are a few anatomy issues as well such as the shoulders and the arms. I know manga anatomy is exaggerated, so sometimes there isn't a "right" way, however the legs in relation to hips seem to be in a odd position for her powerful stance that her hands on her waist suggests she making. There's lots of great lighting and anatomy resources on dA so with some practice those issues I mentioned are easy to fix. You're on a good path though, keep up the good work and keep drawing. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="21" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="574" title="I am a dummy!"/>

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Drifter-Dx [2014-01-21 03:12:46 +0000 UTC]

you have improved a lot;

nice job!

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Jchrispole [2014-01-21 03:12:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow! the change is just...awesome... 

I always love neko characters, especially ones with all sorts of detail in thier clothes. Nice job!

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