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Published: 2012-05-18 20:59:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 764; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 47
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Ugh, it’s so ugly. I shouldn’t do livestreams.Anyway, have a Pinkamena.
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(I need some criticism, seriously
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I have a dress and necklace that look almost identical! my dress has red ribbon instead of purple
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Mówisz, że potrzebujesz krytyki? Rób gładkie linie. Nie rysuj jak ołówkiem. Zrób szkic, a potem nad tym na warstwie - zrób gładką linię, jednym długim pociągnięciem. Nadmiar zmaż gumką. Rób tak a będzie lepiej.
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Wiem, wiem, ogólnie ten rysunek maziałam trochę inaczej, bo z gładkimi liniami mam problem, słabo wyrobiona ręka mnie nie słucha i praca "jednym pociągnięciem" zawsze jest okropnie krzywa. Dlatego czasem muszę sobie pomagać SAI.
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Her facial expression is so perfect. It's just so cute and insane at the same time,really captures the whole thing. The outfit is also great,very Pinkamena-esque. Awesome sauce!!!!!!
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It's not that bad, really. The main issue is her muzzle - or lack of one; she looks like she has a huge nose. You should have at least carried the line from the bridge of her muzzle down to where the chin would be, then curve back to the jawline. Other than that, it is really quite good! The rest are the little refinements that come with practice and experience, like joints instead of tube limbs.
Oh, one more: her ear. I am assuming you intended it to be that big, but it's really freaking huge. Also, the part where the top line meets the head should be a little higher and a little further to the back.
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First of all, thanks for your opinion and advice. It really helps.
About the muzzle... well, before I started drawing ponies myself I have been looking at other artist work and kinda based her nose on Carni's or Speccy's artwork, though I'm much worse at drawing those 
Aaand, about ear - I freaking love big pony ears, but maybe you're right. Hair is drawn a little bad, too, thanks for pointing that out, I should fix this soon.
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