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This was my first time making a full comic page completely in SAI. I'm thinking that I'll do pre-sketches on paper, scan it in, and then do the lineart and everything else on SAI, rather than do the pre-sketch on SAI as well.

This won't be a future page of Starlit Wings, I just made a random scene that probably won't even happen.

I messed with a lot of stuff on this page, like Kazuki's arm (I'm thinking about making him an amputee rather than having only one wing; but I first cut off his arm because I was having trouble drawing its pose XD), Nomi's hair, and you can't really see it, but I messed with Misturu's scar a bit. Come to think of it, I think this is one of the first pictures I've posted that show the right side of Mitsuru's face. I'm thinking about having all of his face be seen since the beginning of the new comic, unlike the last one where it wasn't supposed to be seen until later.

I want your opinion on the textures on the color version; are they too gaudy or do they look OK?

Description
This was my first time making a full comic page completely in SAI. I'm thinking that I'll do pre-sketches on paper, scan it in, and then do the lineart and everything else on SAI, rather than do the pre-sketch on SAI as well.

This won't be a future page of Starlit Wings, I just made a random scene that probably won't even happen.

I messed with a lot of stuff on this page, like Kazuki's arm (I'm thinking about making him an amputee rather than having only one wing; but I first cut off his arm because I was having trouble drawing its pose XD), Nomi's hair, and you can't really see it, but I messed with Misturu's scar a bit. Come to think of it, I think this is one of the first pictures I've posted that show the right side of Mitsuru's face. I'm thinking about having all of his face be seen since the beginning of the new comic, unlike the last one where it wasn't supposed to be seen until later.

I want your opinion on the textures on the color version; are they too gaudy or do they look OK?