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Published: 2017-10-02 01:26:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 609; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 0
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My friend and I made sibling ocs for a clan on ig BrushClan! I own furzekit (left)Related content
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Ask-MoonHeart [2017-10-02 23:12:17 +0000 UTC]
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So this drawing is a pretty nice one.
Its very cute and the anatomy is pretty ok, the paws look a little too big but that might be just be your style.
Maybe had a simple background (not a problem just a suggestion because of the shading and lighting).
Since these are cartoony/anime cats I won't say much about the head being a little too big along with the eyes if this is suppose to be a chibi style drawing.
The colors themselves are good since they don't hurt the eyes and the shading color looks pretty good on them.
Since these are kits I can see why they would have since big eyes, heads and paws witch does give the illusion of them being pretty young.
Overall this is a pretty nice drawing and you should keep up.
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faunsipaws In reply to Ask-MoonHeart [2017-10-03 01:51:52 +0000 UTC]
Ty! I did notice how juniper's head is a lil too big but thought it was fine atm, thanks for your critique ^^
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Ask-MoonHeart In reply to faunsipaws [2017-10-03 19:23:37 +0000 UTC]
Well the drawing isn't bad and yea it was little detail but it din't make the drawing bad
I am happy to give it critique and I hope it helps you improve in the future
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