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FayeleneFyre — Desolation, page 1
Published: 2016-09-30 22:27:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 463; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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"When Alo's past rivalry with the Lost Wood's wolfos pack catches up with her and her mate, fate leads her to be stuck between losing everything her pride has gained for her, or making a new life outside the walls of her home. But when the cruelty of reality sets in, she may be forced to leave more than her own heart behind..."
Page one of Desolation!
Page 2: In Progress...
Alo and Aster belong to me.
Made in Paint Tool SAI and Gimp.
LoZ and all its races © Nintendo.
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Comments: 18
I think all that running would get anyone into shape, no wonder all these adventures and such are so healthy at times XD.
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So long as you stay alive, it is always a healthy sport, yeah?
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Woah, cool! It's kinda hard to read the text in that color though. Just from friendly advice from someone with plenty of experience reading comics on the Internet (I may or may not have slacked off and marathoned through like, ten.)
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Glad you like it! owo
Hmm... I can be a bit hard on the eyes with the black and white outline. I'll keep that in mind! c:
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I absolutely love the dark feeling of this first page, it really draws you in!
And I love the cute joking going on between them as they are running for their lives XD
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Thank you! owo Ah, I hope I can have page 2 done soon, I am really excited!
XD Alo always chooses the worst times to banter, poor Aster!
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You're most welcome! <3
I am super excited to see how Desolation flows! I love learning about all your Deku babies <3
XDD
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So we're finally gonna see the story of how Iris got separated from her parents. This should be interesting. Looking forward to this. :3
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I'm glad you are! 
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Oh, this is awesome! : D The artwork is beautiful, and I finally get to see this story~! \o/
Did you mean to claim LoZ and all its races for yourself...? XDDD
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Thank you so much! : D Ahh, I'm glad you like it! I'm looking forward to posting more pages of it C:
NOPE. I was in a rush when I was typing that out, oops XD thanks for letting me know!
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You're welcome!
No problem, haha XD
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Yay! We get to see how Alo got an eye clawed out and lost Iris! In comic form! This will be fun.
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XD not sure if serious?
Jk xD but yeah, I've been meaning to do something with this backstory. I need comic practice, and I figured this would be a good one to go with since I haven't shown this story out-right yet. Plus, I love drawing these two, haha. I'll be going the extra mile and will show some other characters we've never seen a little later on.
(I am real sorry for my lateness in replying to your comments lately man x'D)
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Reply lateness? Naw, don't worry about that. I don't hold this expectation that everything I comment needs to be replied to lest I open the gates to the underworld and steal the last cookie from the cookie jar.
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