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fayrenpickpocket — Tightrope - panel 01
Published: 2006-06-27 07:19:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 2330; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 324
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So I'm starting a very short comic based off of an RP I'm doing with my friend Rachel. I say short, but it'll probably end up longer than I plan, that is if I can keep my ass in gear and drawing it!!Experimenting with what medium I want to do this in. This is the first panel, and I did it purely digital - straight inks. I didn't allow myself to sketch or erase too much. I wanted to find a nice medium between time and quality, because clearly each panel cannot be a masterpiece! Or I shall drive myself insane slowly. So here is the first panel experiment. I like it, so I'll likely keep it. Here's hoping for a full page soon!
And that is a pen in his mouth, not a cig! 8C
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Majour love to this panel! You're such na awesome artist!
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Late on saying it, but way cool. Love the background especially, with the way it fades out so neatly.
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Im seeing this... im seeing this...
Hung on the wall infront of me, like right now.
I dont know why, but i really like it. Dont suppose youve got it bigger/higher quality for wallpapering?
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i love his face for some reason, and his tie-belt. more people need to embrace the tiebelt. or not. it might be less happy if the masses started doing it.
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I love it! It looks really interesting! I'm really looking forward to how this turns out! Please work on it! Don't be like me and lack motivation! I'm so baaad!
You can do it! *cheers*
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Aw thank you!! <3 *feels motivated*
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I like this a lot. There are some details, but only ones that matter, and even then, not too many. It's cool that way. Makes it seem like watching someone pass quickly, because you can't really stop to look at all the other details.
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I think that was my problem with comic drawing. I tried to make each panel as perfect as possible. And I did go insane. aaaaaaa so insaaane
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Mine too!! That's why I never got any done. :C
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Once again~
Oh how I love this character!
I love the concept of this piece.
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Thank you~~~ ;__; you're too good to me.
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XD The perspective really allots the idea that he's really short - which is adorable - I love him already <3. I'm like that too, walking around pen in mouth while I think ~
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Aw thank you so much!!
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This looks promising! I can't wait to see what happens 
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awwwwwww he looks so short ; ; I just wanna........jump him and.....steal all his clothes. >
I'm excited to see this comick 8D
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God, if you do, share the clothes.
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haha, how true. XD
This panel really makes him look elven, everybody else is just abit taller, stockier, clumbsier, less eccentric looking. I was wondering, was that on purpose, or just the way it came out?
And of course hes headed in the wrong direction too. XD
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Twas on purpose!
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I feel like some of the image is getting lost because of the lack of variation in line weight. I'm feeling like maybe Kale's lines could be a bit heavier to better seperate him from the girl behind him. Oh and random side note, that girl being the only "background" person with detail makes her seem preternaturally important (which isn't actually a critique, just something I noticed heh)
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Good crits!! Thank you.
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Yeah I fail at line weight variation mostly, its secretly why I like to work in color, I can define depth with JUST color and win XD;
Although actually I think simplifiying that one girl will help at least keep Kale standing out from the crowd, its really not a big deal if the crowd blend together and such I think. <3
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It's an awesome first pannel ha the lines are awesome and backgrounds rilly spiffy -wish I had the patience to do even a quick background like that xD
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i dig the contrast. seems pretty detailed for a single panel. def. wanna see more.
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Flattery!!
..will get you everywhere! ^3^
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i like it, my only critique is that he looks short?
is he supposed to be?
Its a result of an optical illusion being created by the guy in the business suit and the leg belonging to someone even further in the background beneath him, a simple fix would be to shrink the business head or move some back ground feet closer on the plane to the central figure... i should be in bed
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Kalle is pretty short!! Hahahaha. But perhaps I overdid it. :d
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Nice composition. Very very pretty done, I'm looking forward to see the next comics
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Aw thank you so much!
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hot.... god i love how flawless your ink looks.
lovely panel can't wait to see more! <3
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This is really cool. I like how you did the backround poeple as well as the character. I know backround can be a pain but you do awesomely!!!
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