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Published: 2005-08-07 22:55:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 903; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 216
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script: philip victorpencil, color, letters: fco plascencia.
here the 1st page colored and lettered.
copyright philip victor 2005
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Comments: 11
Awesome stuff dude! Been a while since I've seen anything on DA so, to get this as my first piece of viewing I'm blown away (as usual!) keep it up, specially like the fact it's inmy home town
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I did an awesome on coloring. All the panel looked great. I really like the last panel. ACTION!!!! I love action, violence and drama. Keep up the good work.
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I think it works a lot better without the dialouge. First of all, the dialouge itself is awfully boring and stilted, and secondly, the shock at the end is greater if the beginning is silent. We don't need the text to understand the situation either. It's clear that they're lovers.
Leaving it silent allows the reader to fill in the woman's thoughts in panels four and five themselves, which is always a good thing.
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Awesome Job Fco! I love the sense of action and vibrant colours!
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great colors! the text plus the colors really did make a difference in the flow of reading. this rocks 
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nice to see you noticed those things i put in it
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