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Battle of the Blondes"This must be the place I was told to go. Nice choice of location", Marie Rose spoke as she walked up to a smaller but nonetheless impressive and probably expensive, gothic style mansion in Germany.
The cute fighter from Sweden had gotten an invitation to come to exactly this mansion for a fight, along with flight tickets and a full description about where she had to go.
'I've heard about you and watched you at tournaments. It seems that you're a girl that loves a good fight. I'm curious to find out if you can beat me in a fight too. If you want to find out as well, head to the specified location mentioned in the attachments on friday next week to meet me. Looking forward to it~ - L'.
Having no idea who could have sent her such an invitation, she slowly headed towards the door while looking around, partly to enjoy the environment, but also to be on the lookout for possible surprise attacks.
The only people she knew with an L in their name would be Lisa or Leifang who regularly took part in the Dead Or Alive Tournaments she usually participated in, yet she couldn't imagine either of them sending her to such a location for a fight.
It was even more unlikely for them to be behind it as they had seen her fight countless times and could have easily issued a challenge at one of the tournaments.
"It seems my guest has arrived~ Let the show begin hehe~!", Marie's challenger exclaimed with a cheerful and almost excited tone as she made her way downstairs to greet her opponent.
"I'm still wondering who is behind this", Marie said to herself as she played with her hair a bit, which is blonde and neatly tied into twin tails, held by black ribbons and hair clips.
The rather tiny girl was dressed in a modified maid dress wearing a strapless top with a bit of a corset optic, which was white at the front and otherwise black as well as having a 'harness' of black straps, held by metal rings, wrapped around it and finally connecting to a black choker.
Along with that she wore a frilly, mid-long skirt which was black at the upper part with white fabric on the frilly part, black sleeves also with frilly white parts, black, fingerless gloves and leather straps around her thighs and right under her knees.
Lastly, the teen girl wore a pair pf heavy looking black boots, with thick red platform soles.
The whole outfit was heavily inspired by Gothic Lolita Fashion.
She didn't even have to give the door a knock, as it opened the moment she stepped up to it, revealing for the host to be Emilie de Rochefort, a fellow blonde fighter and the daughter of a wealthy oil magnate from Monaco, who participates in tournaments of a different 'organization' called King of Iron Fist and going by the name Lili there.
"Welcome to my personal haven Marie Rose. I'm glad you decided to accept my challenge. Please come in", the rich teen girl welcomed her and stepped aside for a surprised Marie to walk in.
"I'm surprised to get an invitation from you, but seeing where we are, it does make sense", Marie stated as she walked into the mansion and looked around the already nicely arranged entrance area.
"How so?", Lili asked and raised an eyebrow as she closed the door.
"This place has a gothy feeling to it and looking at your ring outfits and what you're wearing now, I do think you too have a thing for gothic lolita fashion", Marie assumed and looked at Lili.
"You're more perceptive than you look", Lili replied and grinned a bit.
"Are you trying to insult me? Or is it just mind games before the fight because you are afraid to lose to me~?", the swedish girl teased as she heard it.
"As if I'll ever lose to a pint-sized child like you", Lili insulted Marie, letting a bit of her 'rich girl' attitude shine through and annoying her guest in the process.
If there was something the cute blonde didn't like, then it was someone mocking her height.
"Don't make fun of my size! Also, who are you calling a child? I'm 2 years older than you!", Marie Rose almost shouted as she snapped a bit from it, causing Lili to smirk.
"Yeah, 2 years older, but like what... 30 centimeters smaller?", she then replied and looked at the short girl, who indeed stood at exactly 26 centimeters - so almost one foot - smaller than her.
Marie grumbled a bit, but tried to not snap completely.
"I'll show you what I can do in the ring or wherever we're going to fight. You shouldn't judge me by my size or you'll deeply regret it", she threatened the fellow European girl who just smirked.
"I can't wait for it. So, shall we go? ", Lili suggested to which Marie just nodded.
Leading her guest along the nice looking floors of the mansion fitting it's gothy setting, which had old paintings on the walls and an endless seeming red carpet.
Whenever they passed by a room with an open door, she could see the room interior was held in Victorian style.
Despite being a bit annoyed by the seeming owner of the house for her mockery, she had to admit that she loved this place and was impressed by how it was arranged.
"It seems you like what you see", Lili stated as she noticed Marie's gazes which went all over the place as they walked.
"Admittedly, you have a good idea about what a house has to look like", Marie replied and nodded.
"Of course I do~ I've made sure to only have the most capable of people work on the interior. Cost me a bit, but it's surely been worth it", the purple-eyed girl said, sounding rather snobby in doing so. "It's good to know that you can appreciate such beauty. It appears that we have more in common than just the hair-color, fashion sense and our love for fighting", the pretty Monegasque added as she stopped in front of a double door.
"It seems so indeed", Marie Rose agreed and stopped as soon as Lili did. "This is where we'll be fighting I assume?", she asked, assuming that was the reason Lili stopped walking.
"Oui, oui, that's the place" she replied, adding a bit of french to it from the excitement of what was to come.
Opening the doors, Lili revealed a room to Marie which didn't fit the rest of the mansion as it was some sort of fighting dojo, laid out with a large mat in the middle as one would find at martial arts tournaments.
"It looks good. The perfect location for me to make you learn your place", Marie stated with a grin.
"Oh no, I'll be the winner", Lili replied, confident in her own abilities.
"If you're so sure, how about a bet to spice things up?", Marie Rose suggested and looked at the taller girl.
"Hmm can do... what would it be about?", the wealthy girl asked, curious about it.
"The loser has to do something for the winner. Whatever they want", Marie said and added,"Take your time to think about it as we fight".
"I like that. This will make things more interesting and will push us to go all out. Lets do that!", the younger of the two teen girls exclaimed, an idea already forming in her head.
"Alright, with both of us ready, let's go through the rules. What do you think about... Best of 3, no throws and the first to floor their opponent 3 times wins the round? Or do you have things to add or change about it?", Lili asked and suggested, being fair enough to give Marie a chance to change things.
"That sounds fair. Prepare to lose then Lili", Marie Rose said confidently as she prepared to fight the taller opponent, something she was used to though.
"Dream on. I'll make you my toy", Lili replied and grinned as she got ready too.
With both girls being determined to win the fight, they took their fighting stance, looking at each other.
Neither girl had to say anything as the two of them started attacking in an attempt to best each other and gain the upperhand, which would go along with winning round 1.
Throwing punches and launching kicks at each other, both tried to make use of their swiftness and flexibility, soon reaching a point where both had downed the other twice.
Not allowing themselves a break, both kept going until Lili got careless and left herself open for Marie Rose to duck under one of Lili's kicks and sweep the other leg away to make the taller girl fall.
"Ha! I've won the first round! One more to go!", the swedish girl said cheerfully as she walked over to Lily and lightly put her foot onto Lili's chest while she was laying on her back still.
"How is it down there? Get comfy, because if you lose, you'll have to make up for not allowing me to rest and refresh before the fight by licking my feet clean~!", she added and smiled sweetly, adding salt to the wounds of the proud girl beneath her.
"That's gross! Who would wanna lick your sweaty feet?", Lili asked, feeling rather humiliated in this position.
"There is a loooot of fanboys of mine who'd love to do that for me hehe", Marie said and giggles as she removed her small, boot covered foot from Lili's chest and held out her hand to help her up.
"I'm not one of your fanboys...", the young beauty grumbled as she got up by herself instead of taking Marie's hand.
"But maybe you will be after this hehe. Well... fangirl that is", Marie replied before taking her fighting stance again for round 2.
Taking a moment to recover and straighten her long, blonde hair, Lili dusted off her clothing as well.
The wealthy teen girl was wearing a white, frilly Victorian-style dress with white, almost knee-high boots and red socks partly sticking out from the boots, along with white-and-red fingerless gloves and a mostly red tie.
While the style was a bit different from Marie's outfit, it was clear that the girl from Monaco had a lolita theme going on too.
After taking a few seconds to recover, Lili and Marie Rose charged at each other once again.
Along with her determination to win the fight and turn the tables on the small girl, Lili wanted to get revenge for the humiliation added to the loss of round 1.
Trying not to get overwhelmed by her emotions, she wanted to turn the anger about what Marie dared doing to her, into additional power.
Quickly managing to make her guest fall down twice, the challenger went for the third one too.
With a forceful left kick she managed to make Marie stumble backwards from the impact, only to finish her off with a straight right punch, causing the girl in the maid dress to fall for the third time.
"Mon Dieu! You had no chance my dear. That was absolute dominance I'd say", Lili stated, a grin forming on her face as she saw Marie on the floor and decided to get back at her, now putting her booted foot onto the cute girl's chest.
"While I was busy kicking you about like a soccer ball, I thought about what I want for my unavoidable victory. To make up for humiliating me and wanting to make me lick your feet, I'll make you lick mine clean from heel to toes. My feet are big, so there's a lot of space to cover with your small tongue. Will be a while hehe~. Also it's the perfect position for you anyway. They don't call you 'Wicked lil' servant' for nothing, non?", Lili asked and looked at Marie, convinced that she will win.
Backing off afterwards, Lili went back to her standard position while waiting for Marie to get up and ready to continue the fight.
"Ready?", Lili asked to which Marie nodded.
"Good, let's go then", she added and was ready to jump back into action.
"I'll not hold back!", Marie promised and awaited Lili's attack.
Both girls engaged in the fight again, the last round, the last round, the one that would decide who the better one of the two skilled fighters is.
They kicked and punched, but something was odd this time.
The attacks weren't as quick and hard as before.
Lili and Marie Rose fought on and on, for minutes, but nobody was able to knock the other to the floor.
"Stop half-assing your attacks and give it some effort already!", Lili demanded, her face bright red from the long battle with her guest.
"Look who's talking! Your kicks are the weakest you've launched all day!", Marie replied, until it hit them both at the same time.
"YOU ACTUALLY WANT TO LICK MY FEET!", both shouted at each other in surprising synchronicity.
After the sudden outburst and realization of what was going on, the two pretty blondes lowered their guards and looked at each other.
Running her hand through her silky hair, Lili then wiped a bit of sweat from her forehead, while Marie was panting quite a lot their gazes focused on the other.
"So, that's the reason you didn't give it your best in the last round, right?", the rich teen questioned, unsure if it was just her imagination or if she was correct with her assumption.
"Well, yeah. Though, you were slacking off just as much as me... So you must want to do this 'nasty' thing with my cute, little feet, too", Marie fired right back at Lili.
"Touchée", the tall girl just said, not having an adequate answer for it.
A cute blush appeared on Lili's cheeks, the adrenaline from the fight still running through her whole body.
The teenage girls remained silent for almost a minute, an awkward silence, until the guest from Sweden spoke up.
"Hmm, I think... Since we both know what the other wants. How about we declare the fight a draw and lick each others feet? Might be unfair since mine are much smaller, but what do you say?", Marie proposed
"I guess I'll accept", Lili replied and smiled a bit, her snobby shell crumbling and slowly letting her sweet side come out.
"Shall we do it here?", Marie asked to which Lili nodded.
"I'd say so. There is soft mats over there", she said and pointed to one corner of the room.
Remaining silent, Marie walked over to said mats and sat down while waiting for the girl that could possibly turn from rival to friend.
At least, it seemed that way to the short girl as she thought about what her and Lili were about to do.
While watching her walk over, she looked at the booted feet.
"I wonder... how big exactly are your feet? Mine are a size 6.5", she then asked curiously, while telling Lili about her shoe size.
"Oh la la, that's nice and cute. My feet are a 12 in size", Lili revealed as she sat down with Marie.
"Wow, so big~", Marie said, her eyes sparkling a bit.
"Hehe, yeah so big. Anywho, who starts?", Lili asked, trying to hold back her excitement.
"I thought we could do it at the same time", the girl with the twintails replied and smiled sweetly.
Accepting the suggestion, Lili nodded and was about to unzip her boots, before looking up for a moment and extending her long legs towards the fellow blonde.
"You shall have the honors to remove my boots and I'll do yours. It's more fun if we do that", she explained as Marie Rose adjusted her position and moved a bit closer to make it easier for the much taller girl to get to her feet, also extending her legs.
They didn't waste any time in getting their boots off, with Marie Rose unzipping and slipping off Lili's white boots, while Lili unstrapped and unlaced Marie's black boots before finally removing them, surely having the harder job to finish.
Lili was left in her moist red socks, which had an imprint of her long soles on them from sweating in the boots for a while.
Marie on the other side was wearing a pair of also sweaty black ankle socks.
"It's nice to get the boots off after this rather intense battle, at least in the first two rounds", the cute Scandinavian girl said in relief and giggled a bit at the last part of her sentence.
"I can't help but agree", Lili replied as Marie wiggled her small, socked feet in front of her face.
No words were needed, only looks, as they knew that the socks had to come off right away.
They couldn't and wouldn't want to wait any longer to look at the bare feet of their new friend.
Marie rolled down the high, red socks to get them off in a moment, while Lili worked slower so both could show off their feet at the same time.
"Let's see...", the host of the day spoke as she looked at Marie's average-sized feet.
Topped by a jet black nail polish, she had short and thin toes, nicely shaped, yet mid-high arches and silky soft soles with a reddish tint on them from the fight and being on her feet a lot since arriving at the hotel and making her way to the mansion.
Despite all that, her feet had a mild scent of cheese, which was overwhelmed by a stronger scent of strawberries.
"Ohhhhh, the odor of your feet is exquisite if I may say so. Reminds me of strawberry cheesecake~", Lili said cheerfully and pressed her face into the smooth skinned soles.
"So soft too~", she added, which made Marie chuckle.
"Aww how nice of you. I'm glad you enjoy my feet. You're such a sweet and fun girl it seems. What a nice surprise", Marie reacted to the wealthy girl's actions while taking a look at the large feet in her hands.
Lili had long and slender toes with a bright red polish on them, high, elegant arches and creamy soles, which were perfectly pampered, just as one would expect from a girl of her social status.
As she had a shower shortly before Marie arrived, her lightly sweaty soles had a pinkish tone to them along with a pleasant smell of vanilla, along with a hint of sweat.
Gently running the palm of her left hand down the large soles, she could feel that their skin was as sleek as it looked.
"They are amazing. I can't wait to taste them", she admitted while her cheeks turned red.
"Merci! I use only the best foot care products to keep them like that. Enjoy~", Lili explained with her face still buried in the small, tender soles of her new friend.
While rubbing her face against the soft skin, Lili took in the nice smell of the freshly bared feet, while in turn Marie began planting soft kisses all over the big soles in front of her.
Letting off gentle moans from the nice sensations, Lili soon followed by kissing the tops of Marie's feet and lightly pressing her thumbs into the soles.
"Mmmm this feels nice~", the swedish girl said in enjoyment as she started to quietly moan herself.
She felt happy about being able to treat such a beautiful pair of feet other than those of Helena, the woman she works for and who also takes part in Dead Or Alive tournaments.
Lili kept making use of her soft lips, slowly kissing along the tops and the outer lines of the small girl's feet and was rewarded for it by deep kisses, mostly focused on the balls and high arches.
It was a view that a lot of their fans would have loved to see.
Two skilled, female martial artists performing a dual foot worship on each other after their fight.
It was something that could only happen in fantasies or fan fiction.
With one girl deepening her otherwise soft kisses and the other throwing some sole rubs into the mix, they both seemingly wanted to show each other just how much they enjoyed themselves and the 'material' they were able to work with.
"Your lips are nicely soft~", Lili said happily and moaned a bit more over time and with each kiss, feeling how they slowly got more passionate.
Doing the same for Marie Rose, she went back to the small soles and planted deep and long kisses from the well-rounded heels to the pillow-like balls, while using her hands to massage the pads and stems of the small girl's toes.
"Thanks. Yours mmmmmmm are wonderful mmmmm too. How do you like mmm this though?", Marie asked between moans as she switched from the intense kissing to licking the creamy soles with her warm and soft tongue.
Surprised by the sudden licks, Lili threw her head back for a moment.
"Ohhhh this is mmmmmm amazing~", she said and quickly got back to worshipping Marie's feet.
Making use of her tongue too, she dragged it along the undersides of the short, cute toes and regularly switching between both sets of toes.
"Mmmmmmm wow this is mmmm splendid~", Marie Rose stated while louder moans poured from her thin lips.
Neither girl went wild on the other's feet.
They kept the worship classy, by gently caressing the pair of feet in front of them with their hands and sensually kissing and licking their delicate skin.
Though enjoying themselves greatly, both girls refrained from wildly slobbering and slurping all over the soles and toes of the other.
"Fantastique~! I could do this for hours", Lili noted as the blush on her cheeks deepened more, the further both teenagers got into it.
"Me too~. Your feet are so tasty Lili", Marie complimented the beautiful monegasque while sliding her tongue along the arches and insteps, spots that earned her some extra moans.
"Thank MMMM you. Ohhh right there~!", the tall girl in pure bliss from the tongue on her most tender spots.
"I'll continue then", Marie Rose promised and continued the long, sensual licks which caused Lili to spread and curl her gorgeous toes.
Another few minutes passed with Marie mostly licking her new friend's arches and insteps, while Lili treated her to licks at the toes, balls and arches.
Even her tops received a few loving licks, which made Marie wiggle her dainty toes.
"So, MMMMMMMarie what is your sweet MMMMM spot?", the younger of the two girls asked while slipping her tongue along the outer line of the older teen's left foot.
"Mmmmmm it's my toes~", Marie replied and wiggled said digits invitingly.
"I see. Maybe I should do this then", Lili replied and put an emphasis on the word 'this' as she slipped the two smallest toes of the swedish girl's right foot into her mouth and began to gently suckle on them.
"Herregud!", Marie unintentionally exclaimed in her native language from the sensations of having her sensitive toes being sucked on by Lili, her outburst meaning something along the lines of 'Oh my god!'.
Hearing it, Lili grinned to herself and continued sucking on the pretty toes, moving from toe to toe, always sucking on two digits at the same time.
Marie didn't want to fall behind Lili and let her do the work.
She too began to suck on her worship partner's long, slender toes.
"Wow, this is heaven~", the french-speaking teen moaned out in pleasure from the nice treatment.
Keeping their mild and sensual action up and even intensifying them with harder toe sucking, Marie and Lili kept moaning on and on.
Enjoying the looks, softness and taste of each other's feet, the double worship continued for several minutes.
They didn't seem to get enough, yet at some point they would have to stop.
Licking Lili's big toes for a moment and gently suckling on them, Marie looked at her new friend.
"I wonder about something...", she then said, catching the fellow blonde's attention.
"What is it?", Lili asked as she slipped the short toes out of her mouth and went back to snaking her tongue between them.
"Listening to your moans from my worship, it seems your feet are quite sensitive. I wonder how much so", she said with a devious grin.
Lili's eyes widened as she knew exactly what Marie was talking about.
Not able to react fast enough though, she felt the pointy, black painted fingernails of the smaller girl teasingly scribble against her heels.
"Ihihihi nohoho come ohohon!", she almost pleaded and went into instant giggles from the sensations.
"What is it? Are you a little ticklish?", Marie teased and moved up to the balls.
"Extrehehehehehehehehemly!", Lili admitted while squirming on the floor and wiggling her big feet in an attempt to pull them away.
The swedish girl however didn't let it happen and wrapped her arm around Lili's ankles.
"As I recall, there was an especially tender spot on your soles. I think it was here~", she teased.
"No please, not there Marie!", Lili begged her, yet to no avail as her creamy arches were introduced to the ticklish touches of Marie's fingernails.
"IHIHIHI It TIHIHIHICKLES so much!!", she shouted out and wriggled more violently in an attempt to escape.
The rich girl's beautiful laughter echoed through the dojo area, unable to stop the ticklish assault of the older teen.
"Sorry, I planned to do it for just a few seconds, but seeing how ticklish your feet are, I can't help but give you a bit more hehe", Marie Rose apologized despite the light scratching she utilized to make Lili laugh louder.
"Please HAHAHAHA stop THIHIHIHIHIS!", she pleaded again as the tickling got a bit more intense, her especially sensitive arches all helpless and at Marie's mercy at the moment.
"Alright tenderfoot", Marie said in a playfully mocking way and snickered as she loosened her grip and let Lili pull her feet away, yet forgetting that her own feet were still right in front of the previously tickled girl.
She looked at Marie's feet before grinning evilly.
"Time for revenge!", she just said as Marie focused her gaze on Lili.
"Huh? What do you... Wait no! It was just a bit of fun!", the blue-eyed girl stated and got nervous about what Lili was going to do to her.
"No worries, I'll just have a bit of fun too", she told her and let her perfectly manicured fingernails, which were a bit longer and more pointy than Marie's, dance all over the smooth skinned soles.
"IYAHAHAHA No no stop it! AHAHAHA please Lili!", she immediately pleaded, showing Lili that she wasn't the only one with incredibly ticklish feet.
"Interesting. It seems we have even more in common now. I guess it couldn't hurt to be friends with you", Lili suggested, which was much to Marie's approval.
She would have said so even, if it wasn't for her laughing and rolling around on the mat.
The evil nails of her younger friend forced more cute laughter to escape her lips.
"Such sweet laughter. Coochie coo~", Lili teased and enjoyed the reactions she gained from her guest.
Even though she was begged to stop, there was no stopping for the time being.
In fact, Lili went a bit more evil even and focused her attention on tickling Marie's weak spot, just like she had done to her before.
Forcing her fingers between the small gaps of Marie's petite toes, she let the tips of her nails lightly scrape against the extra soft areas.
These rather gentle scratch were enough to force the short girl into a fit of laughter.
"HYAHAHAHAHAHA Lili, please! Have mercy HAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm too ticklish AHAHAHAHA on my toes!", she managed to speak between her increasing laughter.
"You sure are hehe. I guess I shouldn't be too evil. You're my guest after all", Lili replied and stopped the tickling, then let go off the size 6.5's in her hands.
Curling her toes a bit and rubbing her toes, Marie smiled at Lili.
"You're a mean tickler and I'm not really into it, but if it means I'll get to taste your feet, I could consider having you tickle me more", Marie offered and winked.
"We'll see. I prefer worshipping feet over tickling them, but yours are fun", Lili replied and winked back.
"Alright hehe. Sounds like we'll meet more regularly from now on", the girl with the twintails assumed, which was met by a nod from Lili.
"We will and I'm sure we'll do this more often too along with fighting. For now however, let's stop and get something to eat", the tall girl suggested.
"Oh yes, I'm pretty hungry actually hehe. You can keep these~", Marie told her as she grabbed her socks and threw them at Lili.
"Is that so? Well then you can have these. I have a few spare pairs", Lili replied and picked up her socks, returning the favor by throwing her socks at Marie before putting her boots back on and getting up.
Doing the same, Lili led Marie to the dining room, which was located on the other side of the house.
Leading her guest there, she then sat her down at the large table, which surprisingly was prepared already with plates and glasses, along with forks and napkins which were nicely arranged.
"I'll bring us something to eat and drink. As we're alone and not even my butler Sebastian being around, I'll do it myself. I'm back soon", Lili told her with a smile and walked off.
"Wow, I hadn't expected Lili to be so nice. It seems she really is a sweet and caring girl with a snobby shell that fades if you get to know her more", Marie realized as she listened to Lili's word.
Soon after, Lili came back with a silver platter and on it a bottle of mineral water and a large, green cake, seemingly made out of marzipan, which gave Marie sparkly eyes.
"How did you know? This is my favorite food!", she exclaimed happily.
"Well it was easy. I mean... it's on your fighter profile, so I figured I'd have this prepared for your visit. It's called 'Prinsesstårta', right?", Lili asked as she put said sweet-tasting cake onto the table for both of them to enjoy.
"We need to work on the pronunciation, but yeah it's called that", Marie replied as both girls giggled a bit.
Having a nice talk about all sorts of topics and getting to know each other a little better, Lili and Marie Rose enjoyed a wonderful afternoon together.
In doing so, they also celebrated the start of their friendship, sure it would last for a long time.
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Comments: 13
MeganekkoPlymouth241 [2018-03-22 04:57:38 +0000 UTC]
For a second, I thought this would be a story of Yang and Leone.
Either way, it's still a nice, smexy read.~
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featherblade2008 In reply to MeganekkoPlymouth241 [2018-03-22 10:56:46 +0000 UTC]
Thank you^^ I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Actually... you just gave me an idea for a possible sequel. (No promises though xD)
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simsda [2018-03-21 15:36:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh la la this story is delicious~. I was quite surprised how long this was to and man it was worth it and i'm not surprised Lili would mock her size haha xD.
I'm totally not one of them fanboys Marie is referring to either <.< . I really love this mate, she's a close favorite definetly next Higurashis Rena and a certain green haired Touhou lady hehe~. And it's awesome to se you writing again!.
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featherblade2008 In reply to simsda [2018-03-21 17:20:28 +0000 UTC]
Well when I was done writing I was surprised myself at long it turned out.
I hit one of those rare days where motivation and a concept went perfectly well with each other and I had a bit of time for a change.
And yeah Lili had to mock her size, considering her own height.
Of course you're not one of them fanboys, neither am I^^
I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for faving it
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cap1483 [2018-03-21 04:26:43 +0000 UTC]
Amazing writing mate very happy so see you write again
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featherblade2008 In reply to cap1483 [2018-03-21 04:29:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you mate^^ It really feels nice to get something done again
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cap1483 In reply to featherblade2008 [2018-03-21 04:42:23 +0000 UTC]
^^ it is well detailed as well
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featherblade2008 In reply to cap1483 [2018-03-21 05:42:34 +0000 UTC]
I'm very happy to hear it^^
I tried to improve with giving details.
It's one of the things I felt my stories were lacking before.
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cap1483 In reply to featherblade2008 [2018-03-21 05:44:08 +0000 UTC]
^^ really? I thought your stories had great details already
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featherblade2008 In reply to cap1483 [2018-03-21 05:49:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you^^ Nice to hear it. I figured I should try and add a bit more.
Reading through my older stuff when working on the anniversary story I noticed I could add more details at parts, so I wanted to do better.
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featherblade2008 In reply to RingOfFireXL200 [2018-03-21 04:29:11 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a lot my friend! It sure is nice. I just wished I had the time to do it regularly^^
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