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Felixavier — Stealing from an Eye
Published: 2007-02-21 20:24:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 1735; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 57
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-Stealing from an Eye-May zephyrs ferry me so far,
To brush the tips of dusty stars;
To slip within a shadow's sigh;
And take the twinkle from an eye...
May final quietus interpose,
To shake the rhyming from the prose;
To face a door that will not pry;
And take the teardrops from an eye...
May faded cadence trill away,
To serenade a heart of clay;
To lead an army out to die;
And take the beauty from an eye...
May lonely letters slowly drown,
To turn a smile to a frown;
To cast a restless soul awry;
And take perception from an eye...
PLEASE READ: This is the collab project I did with [link] . The photomanip is HERS, and all I did was write the dinky little poem. Wonderful job on the photo, Eden! It really looks wonderful. Thanks for doing this with me! ^_^
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It's still so amazing, your writing skills. You are blessed how ideas and words just pour out of you mind so well! *faves* Love it.
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Thank you 
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I know~ It makes me choke up to see you so blessed by God. ;o; (happy choking..crying...yeah) I get so happy when you write something thats truely beautiful, I can just see God in it, including this one. Just...gah I love iiiitt~ *squeaaal*
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o.o *performs heimlich* Don't choke please.
xD Uh... thank you? Try not to squeal too much <.< >.> It's emberassing..
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>XD *promptly reminds you of how many times you squealed* Sorry if I got too mooshy~ *having a good day* FRIDAY~
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That's right, you keep track of those, don't you? How many do you have on me now?
YAY FRIDAY!! =[D I'm tired, though *snores*
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XD well get online so I can give you a pillow >:3
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Ha, once again, this is amazing ^^
oops, I'm faving it twice -.o
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xD That's okay. I mean, you had to view it twice. If I was you, I'd be all confused by now and not know who was who and who posted what and who's deviation this really is o.O I'm glad you've got it sorted out, because I think I'm already pretty mixed up.
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Woot! Yay for faving our own works
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lol, well I'm mostly faving it cuz I like the poem so much!!
Seriously, you are an AMAZING poet!!
But, um, one question... what are zephyrs??
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Well thanks so much! ^_^ I really appreciate that.
xD Would you believe that you're like the fourth or fifth person who has asked me that? Maybe I should change the word o.o Well it means 'a gentle breeze, or breath of wind'. I wanted a neat-sounding word that meant wind or breeze, so I found that one
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It's a cool word, I think you should keep it!! I always use big words that aren't used that often in my writing (thanks to the help of my thesaurus 
And I like expanding my vocabulary
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Yeah, me too! I love learning new words ^^
Okay, I'll keep it!
Yes, my thesaurus is my best friend, haha
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Yay!! Ohh, I'm writing this myth for language arts right now, I HAVE to show you it!! ('cept its not done yet -_-)
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It sounds great! Please show it to me when you're done! I'd love to read it ^_^
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Finished today!! But didn't have enough time to get it emailed home -_- (I had to finish at school)
Hopefully I'll submit it tomorrow
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Thank you! Give credit for the pic to [link] though. She's the one who made it ^^
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