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FelixEarth — Ridge, monk - FE OC
Published: 2009-08-05 22:35:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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My other Fire Emblem OC is Ridge, who is Ecthel's son...I tried to make him look like child-Rhys but I failed haha!
Here's his description:
Name: Ridge - Monk ("Shuudoushi")
Age: 14
Gender: Male
Straight, gay or bi?: Straight
Race: Human (or Beorc)
Look: Black hair and blue eyes. Wears a common shirt and shorts first, then he received a little monk cape from the bishop.
Attacks-skills: Light (D). -Miracle-
Affinity: Water
Behavior: He's Ecthel's son and orphan by mother. He has a mild and gentle personality, but people avoid him because he talks alone all the time as if he's crazy. In reality, being a Light Magic user, he can be in contact with the Divine Spirits, which can't be seen by normal people. He feels hurt for people's misjudgement and tends to stay alone, though he doesn't want to and he strongly wishes to make friends.
In the assault where his mother was killed, he was kidnapped by the flesh monsters but managed to escape thanks to his Light Magic. He ran off through the plains
and found a dismissed church, held by a bishop where he got protection.
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He has a really pretty face. I especially like the eyes and how the hair is hanging into his face.
InsprationDruid26 already commented on the arms and I fully agree with her, both on that and on how much you have improved so far.
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Oooh, thanks so much for your feedback 
Yes, I found him odd so I've redid some parts and I'll post a coloured version of him soon
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Awww...he has a cute face ^_^
I especially like how you drew his magic tome. o_o The lines are perfect! (As is your handwriting!
The only problem I see is with the left arm and the left hand. Like in the picture of his father, the arm is too long, especially the forearm. It should be about the same length as the upper-arm. And yes, his left wrist is a little too thin. For a man his size, it should be bigger. Also, I feel that with the position of his left arm, it makes him look rather awkward.
I drew over your picture here to show how I would correct the arm/hand. [link]
I hope I was able to help! ^_^
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Haha, I always have that arm lenght issue
But I practiced meantime and I learnt something (the last pic with Isaac and Garet is an example... ah, and here I finally used guidelines as you may have seen already).
And thank you so much for your helping pic!
I redrew the pic and I'll ink it, so you'll see it soon!
Oh, and I think our support level has just increased to B! 
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You're welcome! I can't wait to see the revision.
Your art has come a long way though, since I've first seen your gallery! You're improving REALLY fast!
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Revision... or better still, the coloured version is up!
Oooh, thank you for the compliment!
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Awesome! I'll go look at it right away.
And you're welcome~
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Thank you, I made him cute enough to be a monk, uhoh!
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