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FencerScokeFaofa — Rena Moran Coloring - Part 1

Published: 2007-06-28 06:16:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 128; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description My work so far completed on no doubt the biggest commission I've worked on. Original lineart and drawing by . I'm just coloring it the best I can. I took this screenshot in Photoshop CS2 as I was working.

Also, ignore the stuff you see in the layers palette with the color and such. Those layers were from past coloring attempts, which I was not fond of (which is why they aren't visible... ). Just to let you know.

Please leave constructive criticism in the comments, they are needed. Honestly, this is my first time at this. I need the critique.

Expect more updates in the near future.


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Comments: 11

WingedJedi [2007-06-30 19:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Looks really good as far! Sorry, I have no clue of illustrations, too!

But iff you want to, you can darken the middle of her cheeks to make her face look thinner.

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FencerScokeFaofa In reply to WingedJedi [2007-07-01 07:44:35 +0000 UTC]

I have part 2 loaded up, you should check it out. I fixed up the face some.

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WingedJedi In reply to FencerScokeFaofa [2007-07-01 15:44:18 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I'll do that!

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tanabatablossom [2007-06-30 05:24:20 +0000 UTC]

Scott, I don't have a clue when it comes to illustrations done on the computer, but I didn't want you to think I was ignoring this From what I can see so far, it looks good! I'm sure you still have plenty of steps ahead of you, so just keep on going and playing around with the shading. I suppose I'm in the same boat with the colored pencils. It may not look good in the early stages, but after a few thousands layers and just as many tweaks, it should look great!

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FencerScokeFaofa In reply to tanabatablossom [2007-06-30 06:06:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much for giving me some critique here, I really appreciate it.

In early stages, it's always hard to tell how something is coming along. I think it's the hardest part of the art.

Thanks, once again!

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tanabatablossom In reply to FencerScokeFaofa [2007-06-30 06:50:52 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Sorry I couldn't be of more help though

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blue-but-beautiful [2007-06-28 08:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Very good shading so far, this is going to look awesome when it's finished. Any crit I could give, hmm the lower hand seems a little odd in dimension, I think that the bump where the thumb joins the hand on the outter side needs to be a little more pronounced as it is on the other, but other than that, can't wait to see this finished !

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FencerScokeFaofa In reply to blue-but-beautiful [2007-06-28 13:20:38 +0000 UTC]

I'm gonna see if I can fix that, as I didn't do the drawing, my girlfriend did. Shouldn't be too hard.

Thanks a bunch for giving me your time to critique this.

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blue-but-beautiful In reply to FencerScokeFaofa [2007-06-28 17:29:03 +0000 UTC]

Oh I hope I didn't come across as being harsh sorry if I did, I hope I didn't upset anyone D:

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FencerScokeFaofa In reply to blue-but-beautiful [2007-06-28 21:17:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh don't worry about it, you weren't harsh at all. To tell you the truth, I think she pointed out the hand thing to me when she showed me the finished product. You didn't do anything wrong.

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blue-but-beautiful In reply to FencerScokeFaofa [2007-06-28 22:13:14 +0000 UTC]

ai okie, just didn't wanna nark anyone off D:

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