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Fenrixion ā [PFNW] Boss Battle
Published: 2013-03-22 23:53:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 3871; Favourites: 91; Downloads: 33
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Here, have some anime- ovo"~~~~~~~~~~
Actually this boss is just a mini boss ;u;
And they are already having a helluva hard time defeating it so....
THAT'S WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU PUT LOLI GIRLS IN YOUR PARTY HAHAHAHA //slapped
(nah is actually maybe because both of them can't cast magic- and maybe the boss's weak point is magic sooo....
//makingupmyownstoryheretralala)Sorry I've been running on lack of sleep ;u;" this pic alone took me 16 hours to draw asdf b-but I really like how it turned out- other than my friend's character still turning out like a shota of course asdf-
And that monster behind is the mini boss itself- it's sort of a mole-kind of monster x)
I did it like one of those video game covers 8D
Maaan Jubal you got yourself a nice harem there...//slapped-
I CAN'T WAIT IF THERE'S AN ONSEN GAG EPISODE ASDF
SAI and Photoshop and Bamboo Pen
Tried to draw an epic BG- was listening to Aozora No Namida when drawing it- hope it turned out OK ovo"
it's such an epic song- although the lyrics are a little sad...?
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Iterushi belongs to Dihaoine belongs to Jubal belongs to and Edella belongs to me ^^
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Comments: 24
First I'd like to start off by saying: "Jubal you lucky son of a bitch! Look at the awesome harem you got going on! Good luck keepin' it in your pa-" * TRIPLE FACEPUNCH'd to Jupiter* (Sorry, I had to do that after I read your description Fenri a.deviantart.net/avatars/d/r/dā¦ " alt=" " title="dragonkekeplz" /> )
AAAAAAAAAAaaaw yeah! Let's do this! Leroooooooooy Jeeeeeeeenkins!
Vision: It's clear to see that in this rating category this image can only be described as absolutely stunning, the colors, shapes, and characters are vivid and crisp as is your above-par usual. The only problem that I can observe with this drawing is that the "Mini-boss" in the background is hard to discern from actual geographic scenery; as there are no contrasting colors or out of place limbs to assist in telling rock from creature. So unfortunately I have to take off a point and a half.
Originality: The characters are completely original and from several other users with their permission. Pixiv Fantasia (As far as I know.) is original to you and you alone. Since you accredited the other Deviants with their rightful OCs and the grouping of the actual OCs is an original thought within itself. I have no choice but to give a full rating of 5 stars out of 5
Technique: I've never seen a bad drawing with you, and I get the feeling I never will; your character design is almost flawless every time; the tools are original and eye-catching; the scenery, when drawn, is almost always beautiful and assisting with the mood of the picture and provides amazing contrast with the characters colors. I'd have to be insane to say that your drawing technique isn't worthy of the highest rating possible. Fenri my friend, keep it up; your drawings are beautiful and I certainly enjoy critiquing them.
Impact: Here is where the rating takes a bit of a dive, while the grouped together teammates shows inspiration and teamwork that is needed in a fight, the fact that this is a battle against a "Mini-boss" and we are unable to easily see the foe itself might give a uninformed viewer a thought of "Oh, cool characters....wait, where's the boss? Oh, it's those tooth things behind them." I gotta admit, when I first looked at this picture I only say the OCs' bright colors standing out against a dark background, so my eyes were only noticing them. But when I read the below comments and you said that the mountain thing behind them was the actual boss, I looked closer and still had a hard time finding it. Then I saw the carrot colored teeth blending in unfortunately well with the brown background. Fenri, you know I try to be honest with my critiques, so I gotta give you a 2 on this rating category.
But all in all this is still an excellent drawing as usual. Keep it up Fenri.
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WOW
TEXTWALL INDEED HAHAHAH //slapped-
Thanks so much for taking your time to write this textwall TTuTT
//happysobcryplz
Ah yes, the background thing TuT
tbh I had no idea how I was gonna do that bg thing what with the monster being the same color as the rock and all, since it IS made out of the rocks itself TTuTT"a
It's okay~ I appreciate honesty more than I appreciate a-
'HOMG THIS IS SO NICE THE HAIR THE EVERYTHING 5 STARS OUT OF 5 YOU DON'T NEED IMPROVEMENT ANYMORE ASDF'
...critique. x)
if critiques were written like the latter, it wouldn't even be called a critique xD
Thank you! ^^ I will. 
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No problem, I try to be as honest as I can; sometimes people just need a good critique to improve. I enjoy helping people by doing that, as it's always nice to see my comments make someone's day. *mumbles* And it's nice to feel important for once *mumbles*
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Whelp don't worry, you're free to critique my drawings anytime. x)
In fact, I appreciate and encourage it!
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You`re absolutelly welcome!!
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I just dropped a bomb for a critique :3
You people are gonna be hit with a wall of text in 3...2...1... Huh? WHAT THE FU-BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!
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Yes, I saw xDDD
WHAAA BOMB WHAAATTT-
explode
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looks like the boss is allready defeated (^ć
^
I first thought it was just rocky mountain XD
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Yes haha xDD
Eh, looks like a rocky mountain to me too, haha x)
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16h for drawing.. cuz it contains 4 characters?
since there're a lot of monsters in Pixiv XD,
3/4 of day could be insufficient.
Try coloring 24h after finishing line : you may found something awkward.
Jubal's eyebrows and eyelids, they're asymmetric. (^ć
^);;
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haha yes xD
divide that by 4, is around 4 hours each character, not forgetting the BG so maybe 3ish hours each chara ovo"
Yea , but that dateline is 2 days, and I was busy the other day so I rush ^^"a
Oh really-? thanks for pointing that out for me x)
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hee its all I can do with what ive done EHHHHH
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Oh, wow awesomeness |D
You did really good job, Fen~ ;w; /
The pic's amazingly epiiiic QwQ
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asdf I'm glad you like it TTuTT
I'm happy 8D
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looking GRATE! love the um.... behind you with the boss lol
your work is always amazing i am sad to here you haven't been getting much sleep but this piece is incredible!
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Haha I see xDDD
Thanks so much
Nah, I think I will get used to lack of sleep. xDD
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skdhj,kd,!!!
Awesooomeee~!!
there really IS 4 ppl huh......only drew 3 engagin battle with the boss ..........
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Dawwww is okay xDD
I just ask Takaya for permission to draw her character because I want to practice drawing more people in one canvas ^^
but it nearly killed my computer asdf //dies
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