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feraldeevee — The Road is Closed
Published: 2008-05-09 13:23:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 90; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description The road is closed
To a once familiar destination
A place that once rang with laughter
And children’s voices sang
I am so alone now
Time has taken it all away
The children have all grown
And what once was is no more
So many years we danced
To a shared song
But the music was turned off
And now I am on my own
As I walk away from us
Do not think there is no pain
Some days it is so unbearable
It is difficult to go on
And the tears fall so freely now
For I know exactly what I’ve lost
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Comments: 3

Nurzy [2008-05-10 14:44:14 +0000 UTC]

great piece ...but why did u put it down as prose??

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feraldeevee In reply to Nurzy [2008-05-12 04:51:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanx for the comment...
where do u think i should have put it if not prose?? im not real good on that sorta thing...

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Nurzy In reply to feraldeevee [2008-05-12 11:53:07 +0000 UTC]

very welcome....

well, if they aren't paragraphs i would classify it as poetry....cause prose isn't just random lines, but a constructed piece....

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