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Ferelwing — If only I could
Published: 2009-08-30 18:31:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1035; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 4
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Description I long to take away your nightmares
To whisper I love you
To tear away the heartache
That follows everything you do
If I could take away your pain
It would only be enough
Just to show you to the light
Of something else to love
If I could remove the passing darkness
That fills deep inside your soul
I would want it to be enough
To finally make you whole
If I could share one more moment
Just listening to you laugh
I'd climb the highest mountain
Or tickle a giraffe
I know that every moment
You try to hide your pain
I just wish there was something
To take you from the rain
If I could find it, I promise
Straight from my heart
To lead you far away from that
And out of the dark
I'd do my best to find you
your own special peace
If only you'd take my hand
I'd try to make it cease
I won't make you follow
I'd let you come and see
I'd try... If you'd let me..
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Comments: 43

momtazmo [2009-09-03 08:18:01 +0000 UTC]

Wow,Nice words , I love it sweetheart

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Ferelwing In reply to momtazmo [2009-09-03 22:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much hon!

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momtazmo In reply to Ferelwing [2009-09-05 02:51:06 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome

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SuliannH [2009-09-01 18:26:32 +0000 UTC]

everything flows so well

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Ferelwing In reply to SuliannH [2009-09-02 04:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much sweetheart and thank you so very much for the fav!

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SuliannH In reply to Ferelwing [2009-09-02 15:21:50 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure

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i-did-this-to-myself [2009-09-01 01:08:50 +0000 UTC]

so beautiful. i wish i could write like you

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Ferelwing In reply to i-did-this-to-myself [2009-09-02 04:40:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much hon! Aww, I'm sure you can..

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SabreH-88 [2009-08-31 18:04:10 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely poem and such wonderful sentiments. Whoever you wrote this for is very lucky

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Ferelwing In reply to SabreH-88 [2009-09-02 04:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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Angelia61 [2009-08-31 17:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh... So beautiful words...

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Ferelwing In reply to Angelia61 [2009-09-02 04:42:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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blucrimson [2009-08-31 16:29:35 +0000 UTC]

wow...

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Ferelwing In reply to blucrimson [2009-09-02 04:43:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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blucrimson In reply to Ferelwing [2009-09-02 21:53:24 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome Li!

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cleopandasaur [2009-08-31 12:42:06 +0000 UTC]

And now you've made me cry.
THis poem stabbed me with a blunt rusty pole and then wiggled ti about so I was spared no anguish.
Because dear lord this poem speaks endless amounts for me. <3

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Ferelwing In reply to cleopandasaur [2009-09-02 04:44:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm very glad it speaks to you sweetheart. I'm sorry that it hurt though..

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Crickity [2009-08-31 12:09:11 +0000 UTC]


love it =]
How do you keep doing stuff that relates to me?!

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Ferelwing In reply to Crickity [2009-09-02 04:45:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm so glad you do!

Perhaps we're in sync?

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Crickity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-09-02 12:25:42 +0000 UTC]

Gasp =O
perhaps...

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Ferelwing In reply to Crickity [2009-09-03 23:27:12 +0000 UTC]

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Crickity In reply to Ferelwing [2009-09-04 07:36:12 +0000 UTC]

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Vixxenfairy [2009-08-31 10:23:32 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this took my breath away. It's so beautiful sis. This really shows your beautiful soul. I love you so much!

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Ferelwing In reply to Vixxenfairy [2009-09-02 04:46:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm really glad you enjoyed it Dee, I had a lot of emotions I wished to express.. I'm so glad you liked it! I love you too!

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HippieVan57 [2009-08-30 22:09:27 +0000 UTC]

nicely done my friend

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Ferelwing In reply to HippieVan57 [2009-08-31 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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HippieVan57 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-08-31 09:24:27 +0000 UTC]

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Watervix [2009-08-30 21:27:22 +0000 UTC]

Can I put this on Myspace?

I'd credit u.

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Ferelwing In reply to Watervix [2009-08-30 21:43:23 +0000 UTC]

Sure, be sure and link back to me! I might turn this into a visual poem.

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Watervix In reply to Ferelwing [2009-08-30 22:20:51 +0000 UTC]

Well do and thank you!!

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Ferelwing In reply to Watervix [2009-08-31 03:17:00 +0000 UTC]

You're so very welcome!

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Mordriel [2009-08-30 18:43:39 +0000 UTC]

That's gorgeous. I love the feeling in it. OF NOTE: I have attempted to tickle a giraffe in the past. I do not suggest doing so.

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Ferelwing In reply to Mordriel [2009-08-30 18:51:03 +0000 UTC]

Why is it that I can somehow clearly see you doing this...

Thanks hon!

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perso-melodia [2009-08-30 18:41:49 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. I can relate a lot to that at the moment

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Ferelwing In reply to perso-melodia [2009-08-30 18:51:24 +0000 UTC]

It hurts to see someone else hurt huh?

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perso-melodia In reply to Ferelwing [2009-08-30 19:02:40 +0000 UTC]

yep

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Ferelwing In reply to perso-melodia [2009-08-31 03:20:26 +0000 UTC]

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giffordm [2009-08-30 18:41:31 +0000 UTC]

this is very beautiful...tickle a giraffe...heeheehee. thank you luv. it means a lot to me.

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Ferelwing In reply to giffordm [2009-08-30 18:53:22 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it hon! Yeah I thought the giraffe comment would make you laugh.. You're so very welcome! I hope it cheered you up!

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giffordm In reply to Ferelwing [2009-08-30 18:55:27 +0000 UTC]

mission accomplished...

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Ferelwing In reply to giffordm [2009-08-31 03:17:50 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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creativemikey [2009-08-30 18:35:56 +0000 UTC]

so beautifully done

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Ferelwing In reply to creativemikey [2009-08-30 18:53:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so very much!

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