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Ferelwing — Torn Roses

Published: 2009-11-18 01:47:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1643; Favourites: 77; Downloads: 24
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Description This came to me while I was working on a particularly dark piece... I ended up having to write it down Yeah.. Excuse the darkness..
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Comments: 62

Ferelwing In reply to ??? [2011-03-02 22:26:29 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, yeah sad but at the same time we all experience those moments.

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Miarath In reply to Ferelwing [2011-03-03 20:42:26 +0000 UTC]

You're most welcome.
Hmm, you're right there, but without sadness we won't recognize what happiness feels like.

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Ferelwing In reply to Miarath [2011-03-03 22:02:20 +0000 UTC]

So very true.

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Miarath In reply to Ferelwing [2011-03-04 21:17:43 +0000 UTC]

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MagicoffMusic [2009-11-20 19:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Really enjoyed reading all you recent poems. they are beautiful and emotional.

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Ferelwing In reply to MagicoffMusic [2009-11-21 01:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Well thank you sweetheart!

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MagicoffMusic In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-21 07:49:56 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome sweetheart

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DmierMortus [2009-11-19 23:36:54 +0000 UTC]

Bravo, very nice!

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Ferelwing In reply to DmierMortus [2009-11-19 23:54:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks hon.

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DmierMortus In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-26 03:42:25 +0000 UTC]

Welcomes

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DragonsChest [2009-11-19 06:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Grand Poetry my friend...

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Ferelwing In reply to DragonsChest [2009-11-19 09:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I get odd sometimes while I'm making things..

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DragonsChest In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-20 17:28:52 +0000 UTC]

Me too

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Ferelwing In reply to DragonsChest [2009-11-23 04:37:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice to know I'm not the only one.

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lirajie [2009-11-19 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]

i love it very well written and i can understand it completely it kinda describes the feeling when your first love breaks up with but then follows through with you halfway dealing with it very beautiful well done as always

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Ferelwing In reply to lirajie [2009-11-19 05:56:45 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know that feeling..

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lirajie In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-30 02:09:57 +0000 UTC]

yeah who doesn't these days heartbreak really sucks!

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Ferelwing In reply to lirajie [2009-11-30 20:46:53 +0000 UTC]

Agreed, it really does.

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lirajie In reply to Ferelwing [2009-12-02 05:36:11 +0000 UTC]

sometimes i wish it never happens but where would we learn from our mistakes if our hearts don't break

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Ferelwing In reply to lirajie [2009-12-10 21:26:57 +0000 UTC]

So very very true! Learning to love and being hurt doesn't make the experience any less fulfilling

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lirajie In reply to Ferelwing [2009-12-14 02:39:46 +0000 UTC]

very true

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Ferelwing In reply to lirajie [2009-12-16 01:11:14 +0000 UTC]

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lirajie In reply to Ferelwing [2009-12-25 11:56:27 +0000 UTC]

i'm glad i'm talking to you you help me out alot

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Ferelwing In reply to lirajie [2009-12-31 07:41:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it did hon!

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lirajie In reply to Ferelwing [2010-01-18 05:39:47 +0000 UTC]

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HippieVan57 [2009-11-19 01:02:06 +0000 UTC]

great work

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Ferelwing In reply to HippieVan57 [2009-11-19 03:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart!

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HippieVan57 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-19 22:23:59 +0000 UTC]

you're very welcome

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Angelia61 [2009-11-18 20:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work!

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Ferelwing In reply to Angelia61 [2009-11-18 21:30:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart!

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Renegade-Angel23 [2009-11-18 18:54:05 +0000 UTC]

All I can say is OUCH that is pain that reverberates Sis.

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Ferelwing In reply to Renegade-Angel23 [2009-11-18 19:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes when I create something, the thoughts that accompany it are.. Dark.. I should be done with the piece that inspired this shortly.

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Renegade-Angel23 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-18 19:19:04 +0000 UTC]

I cant wait to see, you tapped into my current mood perfectly.

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Ferelwing In reply to Renegade-Angel23 [2009-11-18 20:27:37 +0000 UTC]

I think we're both in the same mood then

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Renegade-Angel23 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-19 17:12:53 +0000 UTC]

To Quote Adam Sandler in "The Wedding Singer." LOVE STINKS!!!!

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Ferelwing In reply to Renegade-Angel23 [2009-11-19 23:56:17 +0000 UTC]

So very very true.

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ricky4 [2009-11-18 17:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Dark but exquisite poem! it!

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Ferelwing In reply to ricky4 [2009-11-18 19:20:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Ricky I'm really glad you like it!

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ricky4 In reply to Ferelwing [2009-11-19 15:47:09 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure dear friend! So much!

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Ferelwing In reply to ricky4 [2009-11-19 23:57:34 +0000 UTC]

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Lorilae1 [2009-11-18 16:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow!

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Ferelwing In reply to Lorilae1 [2009-11-18 19:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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Lauraest [2009-11-18 16:19:33 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully done. Very touching poem

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Ferelwing In reply to Lauraest [2009-11-18 19:21:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Laura!

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Vixxenfairy [2009-11-18 10:01:42 +0000 UTC]

This is just...wow. Once again I could feel the raw emotion in your writing. And I understand those emotions so well. This is definitely a fav of mine!

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Ferelwing In reply to Vixxenfairy [2009-11-18 19:26:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you hon, when I've finished the piece that inspired this I'll link them. I was working on it when it popped into my head.

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Alosa [2009-11-18 09:29:15 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poetry

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Ferelwing In reply to Alosa [2009-11-18 19:26:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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whitewave-moth [2009-11-18 09:13:56 +0000 UTC]

thats so sad but really well written, especially like the 2nd half

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Ferelwing In reply to whitewave-moth [2009-11-18 19:27:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetheart

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