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EDIT: Alright, I've fixed Jazz's and Danny's eyes! nowwillyouquitpokingme >.<;;Also, I have decided what I will be doing with the Dash/Dani issue so I don't need any feedback for that anymore. Hopefully, it will satisfy everyone when ou guys finally read it
Also, as of a loooong convo I had with my sis last night, I have named the working title 'Yin Yang' for now. Also, she might join me in writing it. And lastly, there might already be a sequel >.<;; While I already have a big idea for Vlad, I don't think there will be any room for him in this fic. The villainous presence is already filled by someone in a completely different league than Vlad and I think it would just bring down the magnitude of this fic having Vlad's issues in there. So no Vladdeh... till the possible sequel.
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The finished product of [link]
*SPOILERS FOR SEASON THREE IN EXPLANATION*
You have been warned!
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So, this is from an idea still in the making for a post-series DP fic. This will be Team Phantom in the fic, summer before Senior year of high school for Danny and a few others. To give some background on the pic, I'll give a little 'heads up' as to where everyone is at the beginning of the fic.
Danny: Still teen hero of the world, has been dating Sam for two years now. He's picked his grades up thanks to her and pretty much his high school life is similar to that in his Frightmare dream (though I haven't decided yet whether or not to make him quarterback of the football team... technically now he could "unfairly" use his powers since there wouldn't exactly be a rule against it yet xD > Give me your thoughts on this please! I'm open to suggestions though I'm leaning away from quarterback position.) He is also recognized as an extremely powerful ghost now, however that hasn’t made his ghost fighting any easier. Luckily with the government on his side now, the Guys in White take care of most of the unwanted crowds around ghost fights and the human ghost hunters or enthusiasts out to get him.
Sam: Dating Danny (duh), she's still her unique self. Her life sans-Danny is mostly hanging out at her favourite book store and her participation as an activist. She's relatively sour towards Tucker for his continuation of Vlad's 'out with the old and in with the new' campaign, however she tries to keep her political side away from the personal when they're simply hanging out (which is continuously less and less for other reasons...)
Tucker: Tucker has dropped out of school as he continues his career as a politician. He is slowly learning and becoming a great politician, however with an upcoming election, he's busier and busier, and he sees less and less of his old pals. However, with a buried jealousy still towards Danny (Fm reference) and an already strained friendship between the two, their friendship is heading towards dire consequences...
Jazz: Back from her first year of college, Jazz is as peppy as ever. Her brother's heroism has followed her as well to her new school, leading her to popularity amongst peers she's not used to and a little daunted by. She has a boyfriend going on almost 8 months but for the moment, she’s enjoying her life back at home and with her family.
Dani: Danielle was introduced to the Fentons shortly after PP took place. Since then, Maddie and Jack have adopted her as one of their own. While she sometimes misses being the free-roaming spirit she had been before, she’s settled into life with the Fentons and, more importantly, life in high school. She tends to stay more often than naught in ghost form as it is her original and thus most comfortable form.
Dash: After an incident with Dash attempting to help his hero, Danny, fight ghosts, Dash and Danny set aside their past history and have been working on a new friendship. With Dash as a new member of Team Phantom, Danny has been helping him become a better person, using his energy he used to put towards bullying towards ghost fighting instead. While Dash continues to try to portray his tough persona, the rest of Team Phantom get glimpses, on occasion, of his softer side.
Valerie: Finally having accepted Phantom as ‘good’ in D-S and PP, Valerie was shocked but understanding when she learned about Fenton and Phantom being the same. Ever since, she has joined up with Danny and the rest of the gang to fight ghosts, seeing the value in learning everything they knew, and the stronger ghost hunter she could be by working in a team, rather than on her own. While she still has to earn extra money for her family, she’s able to balance everything much better, allowing her to pull her grades up as well.
And there you have it! Explanations are open to change before I finalize the fic. Like I said, it’s still in the ‘ production stages’ in my mind xD;; The actual pic here is similar to a photo taken at the pier in August before Danny’s (and Sam, Val and Dash’s) senior year in high school, which is around the time I want to start the fic.
By the way, I’m gonna throw this out there because I want feedback on it. My mind has been considering introducing the pairing Danielle/Dash in the fic. But, is that just TOO weird? Would it scare people off? I’ve been considering it for a number of reasons, and I would do my very best to keep them in character. Of course, Danielle will be 14 going on 15 in the fic (since Danny estimated her at 12 in the show and I’m going by that estimation) so she will be a little more mature than she has acted in the show (yes, it’s about that time for her to start being interested in boys xD). Anyways, it comes down to this… due to a sister/sister bonding moment between her and Jazz, Dani will have a crush. Should I make it on Dash (or someone else but have Dash crush on her) or should I just have it as a completely different boy and have nothing between them altogether? Too weird or interesting enough? All opinions welcome!
Anyways, tis all. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!!! This is one of the few times I will ask for general public opinions on forming a fiction and I want to hear what you guys think!
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Fic idea and pic © Fey
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Comments: 345
EramNightreign [2011-02-01 19:21:43 +0000 UTC]
Fic Coments!
Hmm... Dash had the hots for Jazz in the show, and Dani at this point is another Fenton female... and he's a Phantom Phanboy. But Dani seems to like/dislike most of the things Danny does, so I'd say your safest bet is a one-sided Dash -> Dani.
Judging by your descriptions, I'm not sure it'll work or not here, but I'm a sane Dani X Tucker shipper. I support it, but don't throw it around like it's canon. Mostly because of how it completes the Rule 63 in a way.
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Pic comments!
Danny and Dash's heads look a little small proportionally to their bodies.
Tucker without his beret and/or top hat?! BLASPHEMER!
Sam looks... hot. *dodges boot and ecto-ray*
Dani's face says "Yeah, I'm a nice girl, but DON'T PISS ME OFF or you might LOSE A HEAD " Her outfit looks great! Why must she be fictional...
*hit by 4 ecto-rays*
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Omnifighter1 In reply to ??? [2011-01-21 04:36:01 +0000 UTC]
I seriously doubt Dash would ever team up with Danny Fenton, Danny Phantom maybe, but not Danny Fenton
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gonefi In reply to ??? [2010-08-21 13:31:56 +0000 UTC]
Good job, like Sam with her hair down.
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raygambit In reply to ??? [2010-06-02 12:16:34 +0000 UTC]
on the dash/dani thing, don't you think the age difference is too big
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ChristieCat95 [2010-01-02 09:07:56 +0000 UTC]
This is GREAT!!!!! When do you think chapter one will be up?
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lex0the0fire0witch [2009-12-04 06:34:29 +0000 UTC]
u should make sam a witch, and make valery not onlly a ghost hunter but a vamp.hunter and a werewolf hunnter.
and u should make tucker a werewolf
and jazz should help sam with spells
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SenatorJeyson127 In reply to ??? [2009-11-08 07:15:46 +0000 UTC]
You can't drop out of school to be a politician -.- being a politician requires that you go to law school
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twilight1998luvr In reply to ??? [2009-11-04 22:15:13 +0000 UTC]
you do know that danielle can trasform into human like dannny ,right?
AWESOME drawing though!!!
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benderkid10 In reply to ??? [2009-09-26 18:04:42 +0000 UTC]
nice...but, uhh...why tha HECK is dash in there? he is not smart enough to be a part of team phantom!!! lol
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imaginationpower In reply to benderkid10 [2009-09-29 23:45:53 +0000 UTC]
lol that what Sam would say
And I love Danny's new outfit!
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benderkid10 In reply to imaginationpower [2009-10-02 20:47:51 +0000 UTC]
ya i am a lot like sam in the goth and humor sense!!!
and ya, he looks pretty kewl
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outlaw-oc In reply to ??? [2009-05-17 21:35:12 +0000 UTC]
I never understood why only some of the characters had pupils
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dpangel1215 In reply to ??? [2009-05-03 21:44:51 +0000 UTC]
i can't stop looking at this pic.I think this is my favorite DP fan art ever!I it!Great job!
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LoserCake123 [2009-04-16 04:35:40 +0000 UTC]
i think you should have dani and dash together!!!! make dash crush on her. but have them be together later on
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DinKaiser In reply to ??? [2009-04-10 02:41:28 +0000 UTC]
I like the whole Dani/Dash thing ya got going, but I have one question. Could there possible be some Tucker/Jazz I might be seeing here? xD But damn good job bud.
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Cupidcomet77 In reply to ??? [2009-03-30 04:04:18 +0000 UTC]
Dani's way too young for Dash.
Besides, I really don't like the whole "Danny and Dash burying the hatchet" concept.
If anything, Dash knowing that Danny is "Danny" would only make the insults worse.
Worse, Danny and Tuck losing their friendship.
But, all in all, everything else seems good.
Plus, I think Danny would be better at wrestling, not a quarterback.
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firehoundomega In reply to ??? [2009-03-24 00:36:00 +0000 UTC]
This pic looks awesome- just like all your other pics- and I love Danny's shirt (I wish they sold them in stores). Really I like all of the characters and their outfits, but Dash looks kind of gay.... no offense.
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Darinas [2009-01-18 21:27:12 +0000 UTC]
You cancel this fic ?!!! Too Bad! The idea pleased me... I was at first a little reluctant with Dash/Danny (since I dislike Bullies), but the concept was interesting! And I would have loved to finally see Dani and Valerie as part of Team Phantom... And what about making the Masters' Blasters rivals of the team...
If you don't write it, I would like to take the idea and do it myself, but I won't without your accord.
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Anily-AKW-DPP-136 [2008-12-18 01:10:50 +0000 UTC]
i have a question: why is Dani in her ghost form instead of her human form?
is there a link for the story?
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nightwolf23 In reply to ??? [2008-12-17 23:57:17 +0000 UTC]
With a difference between 14 and 18 I don't feel that Danni and Dash would be a good couple. Maybe a slight crush towards Dash from Danni's side but that's about it. I would pefer some one her own age, or 2 years at the most. Oh, and i look forward to reading it. Is there a sight or link i can go to?
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Neville6000 In reply to ??? [2008-12-04 21:06:37 +0000 UTC]
Great picture. I love the way you've advanced the relationships, and not kept them stale, admitting that people do change over time. Am amazed that Tucker is a politician at such a young age, though, and being allowed by his parents to drop out of school. You haven't explained what happened to Maddie and Jack, though; are they a part of this team, or have they retired? I'd like to know.
I have a song that fits the idea behind the picture:
Changes-David Bowie
I still don't know what I was waiting for,
And my time was running wild-
A million dead-end streets!
Every time I thought I'd got it made-
It seemed the taste was not so sweet.
So I turned myself to face me,
But I've never caught a glimpse
Of how the others must see the faker-
I'm much too fast to take that test!
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes
Don't want to be a richer man
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes
Just gonna have to be a different man!
Time may change me-
But I can't trace time.
I watch the ripples change their size,
But never leave the stream
Of warm impermanence and
So the days float through my eyes-
But still the days seem the same.
And these children that you spit on,
As they try to change their worlds,
Are immune to your consultations-
They're quite aware of what they're going through!
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes...
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes-
Don't tell them to grow up and out of it!
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes...
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes...
Where's your shame-
You've left us up to our necks in it!
Time may change me-
But you can't trace time!
Strange fascination, fascinating me-
Changes are taking the pace I'm going through!
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes...
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes-
Oh, look out you rock 'n rollers!
Ch-ch-ch-ch-Changes...
(Turn and face the strain)
Ch-ch-Changes-
Pretty soon you're gonna get a little older!
Time may change me-
But I can't trace time!
I said that time may change me-
But I can't trace time !
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Monte-chan In reply to ??? [2008-11-05 22:49:46 +0000 UTC]
Also if you do make a possible pairing with Dani, I would suggest with someone else besides Dash. Their relationship could be sort of a sibling thing, but someone that young(even though she is mature) with Dash doesn't quite seem right to me. Maybe he could get with Paulina? Haha! Maybe not. Or maybe?
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Monte-chan In reply to ??? [2008-11-05 22:43:22 +0000 UTC]
You say you might not make the fanfic? But all of the preparation! You said this took 4 days to do... whew!
Well if you do make this in a few years, I'll be on the site waiting. Good luck with your endeavors.
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moonymonster In reply to ??? [2008-11-03 17:44:33 +0000 UTC]
Sam looks like a porcelain doll...kinda creepy...
Otherwise, I like it!
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BlackThunder-chan In reply to ??? [2008-09-21 15:36:52 +0000 UTC]
Aww, this is awesome ^^
I like Sam's outfit ^^
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Hatchet666gitmo In reply to ??? [2008-09-07 02:40:46 +0000 UTC]
So good, and I'll definetly follow your fanfic.
Sounds interesting.
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FeyPhantom In reply to Hatchet666gitmo [2008-09-09 21:16:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm sorry, I should probably put a notice on this. I'm probably not going to be writing this (or if I do, it won't be for several years yet), though thank you very much for showing an interest in the idea.
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Hatchet666gitmo In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-09-13 21:26:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay, then I know
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SilverWingOwl In reply to ??? [2008-09-06 15:17:52 +0000 UTC]
Why did Tucker drop out of School?
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FeyPhantom In reply to SilverWingOwl [2008-09-06 17:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Because he was already working full time, had a great job/influential job at that, and believed he would always be in that field of work and was set for life. Given, a part of that notion comes from his immaturity and his ego.
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SilverWingOwl In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-09-06 18:13:36 +0000 UTC]
Oh, okay. And why is he starting to hate Danny now?
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FeyPhantom In reply to SilverWingOwl [2008-09-09 21:31:49 +0000 UTC]
Well, I wouldn't really call it 'hate'. He still has some of the old jealousy as was shown in the actual series. That coupled with Tucker spending no time with his old friends because of his job, he's growing distant from Danny and the others. That strain on the relationship ends up creating a bit of animosity between the two of them due to some of the events that happen because of it.
...aargh, I'm not sure if that made any sense in words X.x;;
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SilverWingOwl In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-09-10 20:54:35 +0000 UTC]
Don;t Worry, it made sense. I feel bad for Danny, having to lose one of his best friends, though.
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