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Description EDIT: Alright, I've fixed Jazz's and Danny's eyes! nowwillyouquitpokingme >.<;;

Also, I have decided what I will be doing with the Dash/Dani issue so I don't need any feedback for that anymore. Hopefully, it will satisfy everyone when ou guys finally read it That goes for people who like the idea to people who want it never to happen. What is it? Well, I ain't gonna say xD You'll have to read it when it comes out Or ask me on aim for those who talk to me there *cough* xDDD

Also, as of a loooong convo I had with my sis last night, I have named the working title 'Yin Yang' for now. Also, she might join me in writing it. And lastly, there might already be a sequel >.<;; While I already have a big idea for Vlad, I don't think there will be any room for him in this fic. The villainous presence is already filled by someone in a completely different league than Vlad and I think it would just bring down the magnitude of this fic having Vlad's issues in there. So no Vladdeh... till the possible sequel.

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The finished product of [link]

4. DAYS. STRAIGHT.

*SPOILERS FOR SEASON THREE IN EXPLANATION*

You have been warned!

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So, this is from an idea still in the making for a post-series DP fic. This will be Team Phantom in the fic, summer before Senior year of high school for Danny and a few others. To give some background on the pic, I'll give a little 'heads up' as to where everyone is at the beginning of the fic.

Danny: Still teen hero of the world, has been dating Sam for two years now. He's picked his grades up thanks to her and pretty much his high school life is similar to that in his Frightmare dream (though I haven't decided yet whether or not to make him quarterback of the football team... technically now he could "unfairly" use his powers since there wouldn't exactly be a rule against it yet xD > Give me your thoughts on this please! I'm open to suggestions though I'm leaning away from quarterback position.) He is also recognized as an extremely powerful ghost now, however that hasn’t made his ghost fighting any easier. Luckily with the government on his side now, the Guys in White take care of most of the unwanted crowds around ghost fights and the human ghost hunters or enthusiasts out to get him.

Sam: Dating Danny (duh), she's still her unique self. Her life sans-Danny is mostly hanging out at her favourite book store and her participation as an activist. She's relatively sour towards Tucker for his continuation of Vlad's 'out with the old and in with the new' campaign, however she tries to keep her political side away from the personal when they're simply hanging out (which is continuously less and less for other reasons...)

Tucker: Tucker has dropped out of school as he continues his career as a politician. He is slowly learning and becoming a great politician, however with an upcoming election, he's busier and busier, and he sees less and less of his old pals. However, with a buried jealousy still towards Danny (Fm reference) and an already strained friendship between the two, their friendship is heading towards dire consequences...

Jazz: Back from her first year of college, Jazz is as peppy as ever. Her brother's heroism has followed her as well to her new school, leading her to popularity amongst peers she's not used to and a little daunted by. She has a boyfriend going on almost 8 months but for the moment, she’s enjoying her life back at home and with her family.

Dani: Danielle was introduced to the Fentons shortly after PP took place. Since then, Maddie and Jack have adopted her as one of their own. While she sometimes misses being the free-roaming spirit she had been before, she’s settled into life with the Fentons and, more importantly, life in high school. She tends to stay more often than naught in ghost form as it is her original and thus most comfortable form.

Dash: After an incident with Dash attempting to help his hero, Danny, fight ghosts, Dash and Danny set aside their past history and have been working on a new friendship. With Dash as a new member of Team Phantom, Danny has been helping him become a better person, using his energy he used to put towards bullying towards ghost fighting instead. While Dash continues to try to portray his tough persona, the rest of Team Phantom get glimpses, on occasion, of his softer side.

Valerie: Finally having accepted Phantom as ‘good’ in D-S and PP, Valerie was shocked but understanding when she learned about Fenton and Phantom being the same. Ever since, she has joined up with Danny and the rest of the gang to fight ghosts, seeing the value in learning everything they knew, and the stronger ghost hunter she could be by working in a team, rather than on her own. While she still has to earn extra money for her family, she’s able to balance everything much better, allowing her to pull her grades up as well.

And there you have it! Explanations are open to change before I finalize the fic. Like I said, it’s still in the ‘ production stages’ in my mind xD;; The actual pic here is similar to a photo taken at the pier in August before Danny’s (and Sam, Val and Dash’s) senior year in high school, which is around the time I want to start the fic.

By the way, I’m gonna throw this out there because I want feedback on it. My mind has been considering introducing the pairing Danielle/Dash in the fic. But, is that just TOO weird? Would it scare people off? I’ve been considering it for a number of reasons, and I would do my very best to keep them in character. Of course, Danielle will be 14 going on 15 in the fic (since Danny estimated her at 12 in the show and I’m going by that estimation) so she will be a little more mature than she has acted in the show (yes, it’s about that time for her to start being interested in boys xD). Anyways, it comes down to this… due to a sister/sister bonding moment between her and Jazz, Dani will have a crush. Should I make it on Dash (or someone else but have Dash crush on her) or should I just have it as a completely different boy and have nothing between them altogether? Too weird or interesting enough? All opinions welcome!

Anyways, tis all. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!!! This is one of the few times I will ask for general public opinions on forming a fiction and I want to hear what you guys think!

All characters © Butch Hartman
Fic idea and pic © Fey
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Comments: 345

FeyPhantom In reply to ??? [2008-09-11 02:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Well, I'll say this since I'm not sure I'll ever write the fic: having troubles doesn't necessarily mean that they will never be friends again

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SilverWingOwl In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-09-11 02:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm....true, that is very true.

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EndlesslySilent In reply to ??? [2008-09-01 00:34:58 +0000 UTC]

LOVE IT ^-^

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FeyPhantom In reply to EndlesslySilent [2008-09-02 00:43:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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blackblood13 [2008-08-13 01:04:06 +0000 UTC]

*pokes* Dude, thats freakin awesome looking!

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FeyPhantom In reply to blackblood13 [2008-08-13 21:23:35 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thanks

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blackblood13 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-08-13 22:04:32 +0000 UTC]

lmao welcome

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avatarded2010 In reply to ??? [2008-07-23 05:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Hey there, I am not sure about the Dash/Dani ship. As Danny's clone, that would make her a biological duplicate, and the idea that Dash is technically dating Danny is kinda freeky. Everything else is awesome.

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FeyPhantom In reply to avatarded2010 [2008-07-28 02:11:11 +0000 UTC]

One thing I would want to bring out in this fic (if I still ever do it) would be to show Dani as her own independent person. She would be 14, aged 2 years since she was created, just as any normal person would have grown two years since that time. She would also be in her own class, have friends outside of the main group, and hang out with people her own age. So I guess my hope would be to get across the idea that Dani is not just a clone, but has gained herself her own life.

But anyways, thanks for the comment!

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Samantha-GirlScout In reply to ??? [2008-07-07 16:05:02 +0000 UTC]

I really like it!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Samantha-GirlScout [2008-07-07 19:11:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Samantha-GirlScout In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-07-11 20:46:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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Smokeylicious In reply to ??? [2008-07-01 07:21:41 +0000 UTC]

Dani reminds me to a Character from an pirate cartoon I watched when I was younger O____o

And yeah sams pretty and you did a good job introducing every character...<=

One Problem: Do you hate tucker or why has he to be the new villain? Q_Q
I think that you will make him the bad one in this story ._."
Why this just doesnt fit tucker...except for the episode where hes jealous.,.

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FeyPhantom In reply to Smokeylicious [2008-07-01 07:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the comment! And I really don't intend to make Tucker the villain in this. There's actually a ghost villain in the story who is the main villain. The idea with Tucker however, is that he will end up at odd ends with Danny due to his position as mayor. It's really inspired by the end of the series and the fact that Tucker took up that position, and I really don't dislike him at all. Of course, he will have his moments in the story because of this, but for quite some time there will be a hitch in Danny and Tucker's friendship.

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Smokeylicious In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-07-01 08:30:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh Okay ^^
Sorry Im from germany and my english is pretty creppy so maybe I got you wrong at some points.

In Germany the latest episode that aired was the one Danielle got created by Vlad :/

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FeyPhantom In reply to Smokeylicious [2008-07-01 09:52:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh sorry! I didn't know I hope I didn't spoil anything for you! And your English is actually quite good ^^ I hope you continue to enjoy DP

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Vitamin-Cee In reply to ??? [2008-06-29 18:25:21 +0000 UTC]

Sam is so pretty! x3

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FeyPhantom In reply to Vitamin-Cee [2008-06-29 20:18:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ^^

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Vitamin-Cee In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-06-29 21:18:38 +0000 UTC]

You're VERY welcome! ^^

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julyrains In reply to ??? [2008-06-27 11:57:54 +0000 UTC]

Picture perfect! Going to my faves~

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FeyPhantom In reply to julyrains [2008-06-27 16:12:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot!

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JediAkela18 [2008-06-22 21:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Cool, maybe dash would be part of there team

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FeyPhantom In reply to JediAkela18 [2008-06-23 20:58:37 +0000 UTC]

Well, that is the idea here ^^

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angelzvala In reply to ??? [2008-06-10 04:48:50 +0000 UTC]

sam looks really nice. haha. nice pic.

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FeyPhantom In reply to angelzvala [2008-06-16 04:21:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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DSGB010 [2008-06-05 21:02:47 +0000 UTC]

did u make dis or is it an idea

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FeyPhantom In reply to DSGB010 [2008-06-07 03:18:47 +0000 UTC]

Do you mean the fic? The story is still in idea mode, but it probably won't be written unless I have some huge urge to go back to it along with my sis.

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twilite-beam In reply to ??? [2008-05-20 16:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Dani/Dash is cool.

Dash has to grow up eventually, what better way than to make friends with Danny.

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FeyPhantom In reply to twilite-beam [2008-05-29 21:04:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! ^^

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JLBarnett [2008-04-13 13:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if anyone has commented, but about Tucker's future: a high school dropout has no future as a politician.

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FeyPhantom In reply to JLBarnett [2008-04-14 02:58:52 +0000 UTC]

I've - unfortunately - known some high school-dropout politicians who've gone far, so I don't think it's always the case xD And the idea is that he has already made it as a politician, though given, elections have yet to come up by he time the story starts, so he's only been elected the one time during Phantom Planet.

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WhiteKiss [2008-03-26 01:58:56 +0000 UTC]

FeyPhantom - this is awesome! ^-^ nicely done

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FeyPhantom In reply to WhiteKiss [2008-03-29 21:17:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^

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DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-03-19 07:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Is it ok to use in a Powerpoint? If I give You credit? Please?

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FeyPhantom In reply to DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-03-19 18:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, that's alright. I'm just curious though, what kind of powerpoint is it?

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DannyPhangirlkitty In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-03-19 19:41:43 +0000 UTC]

A Danny Phantom Powerpoint. If I can, when I finish it, I'll post it here. If I can't, then I won't. OK? BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The title letters are black and white, swithching, and it is cool.

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FeyPhantom In reply to DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-03-20 01:58:25 +0000 UTC]

If you do post it here, could you please mention my name in the description in relation to the pic used?

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DannyPhangirlkitty In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-03-20 10:10:47 +0000 UTC]

Sure! Its taking forEVER to make! I've spent at (i'm guessing) uh... 5 hours looking on the internet for pics and bios. Yeah... THAT'S A LONG TIME! I'll even put in the Artist's Comments, a link to the pic and your account, if I can figure out how the link stories... I'm new if it isn't painfully obvious... *sigh...* I've also found a bunch of sites with screenshots and just pictures and info. Answers.com has a lot of DP info if you search for it! I also re-did a painting of the DP logo I made on paint and it looks better than it did before... Its actually BLACK (and not gray...) and has STRAIGHT LINES! (I can't draw a straight line to save my life...) So... when its done, I'll comment on your profile. Let me warn you, it has AT LEAST 53 slide (not including the title slide) because of a coplete episode guide. So... that's it for my 6:00 EST time rant... (I say EST because I know that dA is Pacific time...) So... more later!
I LIKE DOTS AND I AM RUNNING ON NO SLEEP! YAY ME! I HAD A GLASS OF CHOCOLATE MILK AND I'M NOT TIRED! 'CUZ BEFORE MY MILK, I TOOK A 2 HOUR NAP (give or take some...) BEFORE THAT! YAY CAPS!

I write too much...

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FeyPhantom In reply to DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-04-02 02:51:31 +0000 UTC]

If you still need a bit of help, to make a link, just paste the address to which you want to link and it'll do it automatically in the post.

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DannyPhangirlkitty In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-04-02 21:13:35 +0000 UTC]

I know, but how do you, like, name it? Ex: You have a link to your art. When its posted, it doesn't say 'link' it says the arts title. End Ex. How do you do that? Thankx! Bye! More l8r! ^^)

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FeyPhantom In reply to DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-04-12 22:19:17 +0000 UTC]

I'm not really sure. I know I read it once in the help section, so I suggest you look there

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DannyPhangirlkitty In reply to DannyPhangirlkitty [2008-03-19 19:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Dani's outfit is adoable! I want it! I love her clothes. And Jazz's and Sam's.

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thequestion23 In reply to ??? [2008-03-18 19:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Sheer Genius. Unbeleaveable! I LOVE IT

"The plastic tips on the ends of shoe laces are called agglets, their true purpose is something sinister." -The Question

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FeyPhantom In reply to thequestion23 [2008-03-19 18:07:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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danni64 In reply to ??? [2008-02-21 15:04:17 +0000 UTC]

they look awsome i LOVE sam's outfit i wish i had it

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FeyPhantom In reply to danni64 [2008-02-25 00:58:28 +0000 UTC]

Hee, thank you And I want an outfit like that too XP

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danni64 In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-02-25 22:03:13 +0000 UTC]

*giggle*we share the same brain

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Kayoubi In reply to ??? [2008-02-18 17:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Very cool pic. I like the new outfits a lot! Um, Dani/Dash....could fly, might be a bit tough to pull off, but it could definitely be done...let me know when it's posted, I wanna see how this turns out!

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FeyPhantom In reply to Kayoubi [2008-02-25 01:03:47 +0000 UTC]

More like 'if' it's posted at this point. Unfortunately there's nothing holding me in the DP fandom anymore, even the creator has lost my respect.

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Kayoubi In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-02-27 01:55:19 +0000 UTC]

That's kinda tragic..ah well! Happy Johnny Cash's birthday-day!

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