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EDIT: Alright, I've fixed Jazz's and Danny's eyes! nowwillyouquitpokingme >.<;;Also, I have decided what I will be doing with the Dash/Dani issue so I don't need any feedback for that anymore. Hopefully, it will satisfy everyone when ou guys finally read it
Also, as of a loooong convo I had with my sis last night, I have named the working title 'Yin Yang' for now. Also, she might join me in writing it. And lastly, there might already be a sequel >.<;; While I already have a big idea for Vlad, I don't think there will be any room for him in this fic. The villainous presence is already filled by someone in a completely different league than Vlad and I think it would just bring down the magnitude of this fic having Vlad's issues in there. So no Vladdeh... till the possible sequel.
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The finished product of [link]
*SPOILERS FOR SEASON THREE IN EXPLANATION*
You have been warned!
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So, this is from an idea still in the making for a post-series DP fic. This will be Team Phantom in the fic, summer before Senior year of high school for Danny and a few others. To give some background on the pic, I'll give a little 'heads up' as to where everyone is at the beginning of the fic.
Danny: Still teen hero of the world, has been dating Sam for two years now. He's picked his grades up thanks to her and pretty much his high school life is similar to that in his Frightmare dream (though I haven't decided yet whether or not to make him quarterback of the football team... technically now he could "unfairly" use his powers since there wouldn't exactly be a rule against it yet xD > Give me your thoughts on this please! I'm open to suggestions though I'm leaning away from quarterback position.) He is also recognized as an extremely powerful ghost now, however that hasn’t made his ghost fighting any easier. Luckily with the government on his side now, the Guys in White take care of most of the unwanted crowds around ghost fights and the human ghost hunters or enthusiasts out to get him.
Sam: Dating Danny (duh), she's still her unique self. Her life sans-Danny is mostly hanging out at her favourite book store and her participation as an activist. She's relatively sour towards Tucker for his continuation of Vlad's 'out with the old and in with the new' campaign, however she tries to keep her political side away from the personal when they're simply hanging out (which is continuously less and less for other reasons...)
Tucker: Tucker has dropped out of school as he continues his career as a politician. He is slowly learning and becoming a great politician, however with an upcoming election, he's busier and busier, and he sees less and less of his old pals. However, with a buried jealousy still towards Danny (Fm reference) and an already strained friendship between the two, their friendship is heading towards dire consequences...
Jazz: Back from her first year of college, Jazz is as peppy as ever. Her brother's heroism has followed her as well to her new school, leading her to popularity amongst peers she's not used to and a little daunted by. She has a boyfriend going on almost 8 months but for the moment, she’s enjoying her life back at home and with her family.
Dani: Danielle was introduced to the Fentons shortly after PP took place. Since then, Maddie and Jack have adopted her as one of their own. While she sometimes misses being the free-roaming spirit she had been before, she’s settled into life with the Fentons and, more importantly, life in high school. She tends to stay more often than naught in ghost form as it is her original and thus most comfortable form.
Dash: After an incident with Dash attempting to help his hero, Danny, fight ghosts, Dash and Danny set aside their past history and have been working on a new friendship. With Dash as a new member of Team Phantom, Danny has been helping him become a better person, using his energy he used to put towards bullying towards ghost fighting instead. While Dash continues to try to portray his tough persona, the rest of Team Phantom get glimpses, on occasion, of his softer side.
Valerie: Finally having accepted Phantom as ‘good’ in D-S and PP, Valerie was shocked but understanding when she learned about Fenton and Phantom being the same. Ever since, she has joined up with Danny and the rest of the gang to fight ghosts, seeing the value in learning everything they knew, and the stronger ghost hunter she could be by working in a team, rather than on her own. While she still has to earn extra money for her family, she’s able to balance everything much better, allowing her to pull her grades up as well.
And there you have it! Explanations are open to change before I finalize the fic. Like I said, it’s still in the ‘ production stages’ in my mind xD;; The actual pic here is similar to a photo taken at the pier in August before Danny’s (and Sam, Val and Dash’s) senior year in high school, which is around the time I want to start the fic.
By the way, I’m gonna throw this out there because I want feedback on it. My mind has been considering introducing the pairing Danielle/Dash in the fic. But, is that just TOO weird? Would it scare people off? I’ve been considering it for a number of reasons, and I would do my very best to keep them in character. Of course, Danielle will be 14 going on 15 in the fic (since Danny estimated her at 12 in the show and I’m going by that estimation) so she will be a little more mature than she has acted in the show (yes, it’s about that time for her to start being interested in boys xD). Anyways, it comes down to this… due to a sister/sister bonding moment between her and Jazz, Dani will have a crush. Should I make it on Dash (or someone else but have Dash crush on her) or should I just have it as a completely different boy and have nothing between them altogether? Too weird or interesting enough? All opinions welcome!
Anyways, tis all. PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!!! This is one of the few times I will ask for general public opinions on forming a fiction and I want to hear what you guys think!
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Comments: 345
FeyPhantom In reply to bonnybanshey [2008-02-05 23:21:50 +0000 UTC]
She's twelve in the show when Dash is 14. So Dash=17, Dani=15
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Twilightnite In reply to ??? [2008-01-16 20:11:37 +0000 UTC]
it's awesome the way u drew this pic is as if it was from the tv series.
i think Danni would want to be with a boy who is also a free-roaming spirit.
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Metakage [2008-01-05 06:02:21 +0000 UTC]
personally i think that it wouldn't be wierd tohave dani and dash toghther becaz she is the same age as danny if u thik about it
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FeyPhantom In reply to Metakage [2008-01-05 08:12:31 +0000 UTC]
Why would that make it weird?
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Metakage In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-01-05 08:31:19 +0000 UTC]
I just said cuz u said u dont know if t would be to weird or not and i'm makin a danny fan fic 2 ijust don't know wen
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BurnedMatch In reply to ??? [2008-01-01 23:16:24 +0000 UTC]
Except for the fact that you've included Dash (who never should fight ghosts at all) and Valerie (who works alone...) to the team, this is a truly awesome picture! I'll fav this!
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SpideyzGirl In reply to ??? [2007-12-23 21:11:10 +0000 UTC]
Whoa that is so cool!
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sonarthehedgehog In reply to ??? [2007-12-16 07:34:51 +0000 UTC]
the whole storyline and explanations for everyone sound really good. This would actually make a pretty good movie if you ask me. Danny as qb doesn't sound to bad, but how old would Dash be if Dani is only 14 going on 15?
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Sonarthehedgehog In reply to Sonarthehedgehog [2008-01-06 05:41:28 +0000 UTC]
well if Dani will be 15 soon then her and Dash doesn't sound to bad, but either way it's still pretty good for all the characters and a pretty good storyline. I see, but who is the villian anyway.
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FeyPhantom In reply to Sonarthehedgehog [2008-01-05 23:14:21 +0000 UTC]
Dash'll be 17 in the fic. Or at least, would be, but it's looking very unlikely at this point that I'll write it xD;; But thanks anyways! I personally love the villain for this fic though, so maybe I'll do fanart for him at some point anyways
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Sonarthehedgehog In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-01-06 05:42:02 +0000 UTC]
well if Dani will be 15 soon then her and Dash doesn't sound to bad, but either way it's still pretty good for all the characters and a pretty good storyline. I see, but who is the villian anyway.
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FeyPhantom In reply to Sonarthehedgehog [2008-02-05 23:44:57 +0000 UTC]
The villain is an original character, originally designed by my sister. His name's Anachronism, so if you go with that, you might figure out what he's like.
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Sonarthehedgehog In reply to FeyPhantom [2008-02-06 04:57:34 +0000 UTC]
I see ok sounds good
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OrianaAuroraOdette In reply to ??? [2007-11-22 23:48:20 +0000 UTC]
That is awesome.
I love Danny and Sam. <3
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FeyPhantom In reply to OrianaAuroraOdette [2007-11-23 01:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I love 'em too. And your name's awesome btw! :3 You're the third Oriana I've ever met... if that's your real name anyways XP Love that name
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OrianaAuroraOdette In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-11-25 03:07:59 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! ^^
I love it too.
Oriana's my first name and Aurora Odette are my middle names.
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FeyPhantom In reply to OrianaAuroraOdette [2007-11-27 01:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Well, you have three very pretty names ^^
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naan21 In reply to ??? [2007-11-15 00:03:29 +0000 UTC]
I read...yes,yes,yes...great
and Dash? O.o
I agree with ALL of the above, and I accept what I don't agree with...but the Dash thing is too far.
They are friends? I understand Dash admiring him all of a sudden, realizing how hard Danny has been working and junk, but I do not beleive danny would be as happy. If Dash only likes him for his ghost half, much like a certian airhead, then I don't think Danny would like him. Dash would still be the same bully, just not to danny.
I'm telling you I don't think the Dash storyline is plausable..too much hate there. He hasn't show anything towards Dash to point to friendship.
GAAAHHHH SORRRYYYY
Sorry about that, I got that huge rant and dumped it on you...
I apologize, anyway, nice pic, and nice storyline. Is a fic posted, or just started?
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naan21 In reply to naan21 [2007-11-16 02:08:33 +0000 UTC]
No, I understand DASH showing admiration for PHANTOM. But like Paulina, he hates Fenton...
either way, Dash'd still admire him
as for Danny, I am sure that he wouldn't be so nice
he used Dash as a friend, think about it like a psychologist would, being the big guy, Dash would be a tall, popular, strong. Things Danny would envy, he could dream of Dash being friendlier, as in Danny was popular, you see the football guy(no name) also said hi. So I feel that you couldn't use Frightmare as an accurate picture, he could be using Dash being nice, to prove the point he was popular, and that was what he wanted, you see in "Attack of the Killer Garage Sale" how much he wants it...
as for no prejeduce, I'm pretty sure he'd draw a line somewhere.
Not saying your point isn't valid, but
1)love to rant xD
2)this is my POV
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FeyPhantom In reply to naan21 [2007-11-15 02:01:33 +0000 UTC]
Haha, no worries about rants, I like getting feedback. Hee, though I hope you don't mind if I explain my pov a little too
For one, Dash has already shown admiration of Danny Phantom in the show, so it wouldn't be sudden. Danny's his hero. In Reality Trip, Dash was one of the first people to come to Danny's aid when he needed it. As for Danny, he accepted Dash's help immediately and he doesn't seem like the type to me to let prejudice keep him from developing friends, even unexpected ones. Also, one thing that I took into consideration for this was that one of Danny's 'wants' IS to be respected by and develop a friendship with Dash as seen in Frightmare. With Dash knowing his identity, this would be possible.
As for the story itself, I have no idea when or if I'll ever get it up. My interest in DP has waned since I created the concept, but also, I have a hard time writing stories as it is. I'm not a writer. I might have the entire conept and scenes lined up in my head for this story, and I even have developed a sequel, but getting it down in written form might never happen.
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Roadrunner1 In reply to ??? [2007-11-13 23:05:47 +0000 UTC]
Eeehhh!!! Look how many views you have on this! That is so awesome!
Oh yeah....
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FeyPhantom In reply to Roadrunner1 [2007-11-14 18:25:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And thanks for the fave too!
*wins*
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Roadrunner1 In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-11-15 02:33:19 +0000 UTC]
Nuuuu....You shalt not win!!
*Mega win*
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FeyPhantom In reply to demonko [2007-10-31 01:22:30 +0000 UTC]
Thanks!
On a random sidenote, I ship almost all the same Naruto pairings as you... except Tenten with Neji instead of Lee... hee, sorry for being random xD *rushes off*
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demonko In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-10-31 19:50:12 +0000 UTC]
your welcome
haha its okay i think i will be to
during one of team guys training seshins i saw that tenten was falling for lee so neji was going to be alone until one of my friends on here said let me have him haha
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EmberFan57 In reply to ??? [2007-10-15 18:41:33 +0000 UTC]
I love the picture and the pairings. The only thing that bothered me slightly was that Danny's head seems a little small for his body. But other than that, excellent!
How about a picture of his villians in the future?
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FeyPhantom In reply to EmberFan57 [2007-10-17 21:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the comments. Dunno if I'll do one with the villains...
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Ziggurat24 In reply to ??? [2007-10-09 04:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Now-that is a happy picture. Gives you a warm feeling. Great.
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"Man, you come straight out of a comic strip."
- Bushido Brown, The Boondocks.
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DannehLova101 In reply to ??? [2007-10-05 23:48:27 +0000 UTC]
OMG this rocks!!!! So awesome!!! Go danny!!!!! This is like the first piccy I have ever seen that is perfect. I only kinda winced that the pant line thingy that seperates the two legs on danny is sorta a bit too high but otherwise, AWWWEEEESSSOOOMMMEEEE!
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TexasDreamer01 In reply to ??? [2007-09-30 05:02:43 +0000 UTC]
mmm, looking forward to reading that when i have more spare time.
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FeyPhantom In reply to TexasDreamer01 [2007-10-04 05:09:06 +0000 UTC]
... I would have to post it first.
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Sakurachan03 In reply to ??? [2007-09-29 20:02:39 +0000 UTC]
Omg... your colouring is amazing !! I really love this ! Everyone looks so cool (especially Sam) !
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Darkmoose84 In reply to ??? [2007-09-16 19:11:47 +0000 UTC]
Love how you redesigned each character. They all look fantastic, esp. the clothing. And if Dash adjusts his attitude towards other people, he might actually be right for Dani. It's hard for me to see from the cartoon, but one can do anything with fictional characters.
I've actually got a Danny Phantom/Silent Hill crossover that I'm writing the outline of soon, in which the two main characters are Danny and a newly-turned psychic Dani, who have to go find Danny and Sam's kids before they become part of the 21 sacraments. This picture has given me some idea as to what they would look like older.
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FeyPhantom In reply to Darkmoose84 [2007-09-24 18:08:35 +0000 UTC]
Good luck with your crossover Naver seen Silent Hill so I have no clue what it's about, but I'm sure it'll work well for you.
Thanks for the comments!
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Darkmoose84 In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-10-05 06:27:37 +0000 UTC]
Ah, the movie does not do the games justice at all. I'm trying to do my story more in tune with the games and a bit of the comics.
I'm currently working of chapter 3 as I write this. There's already a lot of tension between everyone in their environment.
Oh and you're welcome on the comment.
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Match25 In reply to ??? [2007-09-06 17:37:55 +0000 UTC]
why the heck is Dash in this, Dani and Sam aged nicely
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FeyPhantom In reply to Match25 [2007-09-07 05:00:47 +0000 UTC]
Cause Dash rocks! xD And he's gotten better now that he gets to hang out with his hero all the time ;D Danny's had a good effect on him.
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Match25 In reply to FeyPhantom [2007-09-07 05:24:32 +0000 UTC]
as long as Dani and Dash arent dating im fine with it
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4nim3-Sg-1-fr34k In reply to ??? [2007-08-27 01:46:53 +0000 UTC]
ok really random question but eps is the one where sam wears that dress??.. like i think its tat prom eps but wuts it called? really love this pic^^
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FeyPhantom In reply to 4nim3-Sg-1-fr34k [2007-09-05 22:02:33 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! And that ep is Parental Bonding.
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